Ghetto Cripple VS Killuminatic
 

10-16 bars
No feedin dick ridin or hate shit

U got a brain for this rap game then riddle me this
How u gon battle the God that should've aborted ya cripple fetus
One line or what ever in lyricist lounge, U should be hearin this clown
Think he the king of the game got a couple appearances now
Cripple cuz he cant run spots, when guns cock,
He gets scared and what not, soon as they buck, pop,
His tires gone, Already waist high so to live he suck cock
U shouldnt be here, but before i said this u thought u had me
Shit as cripple kid u would have better luck at a track meet
U said u shit on my rhymes bitch u had me laughing
Only place u shit is your chair all day where your ass be
Yeah i said i spit Nas when he was nasty
U write rhymes on a screen u fuckin lab geek
The winner's clear thats the only way u see past me
Cuz while u were practicing, U had to see, I followed ya battling
U came out like a bad disease,
Pissed blood, then ya cathater ceased, U master of beef?
Shit thats something i got to see, Something i'd walk to see
Something u know u cant do, dont try to walk with me,
Missin half your being like a topless tease,
Like a veggie salad topped with beef
I aint seen it yet but your verse is probably cheap
Ko'd u like i came into this fist fight with a gaudy piece

Where the hell this bitch crippla at? He gon end up not showin so he dont get a loss.
Fuckin bitch

I really dont think hes gon show up Fuck

If i wasted this shit im gonna be pissed

yo weres homie at??
if he dont sho ill just vote for u as a no sho aight....

first off i will always show! and you need to quit cryin if i dont shoot back right away because unlike you i have a life and cant be on the computer all day, you pissed cause im wasnt on well you need to get off and go do somethin, but im not hear to preach so here is my rhyme.


i raped yo moms then strangled her to death//
find her on the kitchen floor with a catheder around her neck//

you said im half bein'///
im half man half machine///
im'a blessin' from heaven yo life is on lease//
im'a pitbull off his leash//
i spite hell fire and brimestone, nashing of teeth//
im'a half abortion seed///
you cant kill me///
i come back like jesus with no feet//

no teeth thats how you like it, midgets or smaller///
you like to fuck virgins so you get down with toddlers///

i shit and you worship it//
cause what you spit i shit aint no contestin' it///

killuminatic born from a horror in a brothel//
hookers and prostitutes im'a pimp out yo daughters///

you fake as church//
baptized in sewige pissed on at birth///

im'a do a drive by, aim to make you cripple//
i had yo mom screamin' for god, now whose dick is little///

dont make me get up outta this chair an kick your ass all over this site///
you fake muth fucka ive paid the ultimate price, twice//
sacrifice and died twice///
come back to life both times christ like.

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Vote on this shit leave a link and ill return the favor

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Fuck hurry up and get this shit over yall quit sleepin on this

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This shit is a good battle there aint been 1 damn vote the whole day.
Is it really that bad? Fuck

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killuminatic -

"U got a brain for this rap game then riddle me this
How u gon battle the God that should've aborted ya cripple fetus"
not the best opener, but it kinda connected. 7/10

"Cripple cuz he cant run spots, when guns cock,
He gets scared and what not, soon as they buck, pop,
His tires gone, Already waist high so to live he suck cock"
I din't like this, you rhymed an odd number of lines, and used cock twice.

favourite line -
"Shit thats something i got to see, Something i'd walk to see
Something u know u cant do, dont try to walk with me,
Missin half your being like a topless tease,
Like a veggie salad topped with beef"

flow - it flowed smoothly, easy enough to read through fluently.
punches - punches weren't really very personal, but some digs where in there.
Multi's - some nice multi's where seen at key points.

ghetto cripple -

"no teeth thats how you like it, midgets or smaller///
you like to fuck virgins so you get down with toddlers///"
wasn't feelin' that line.

"im'a pitbull off his leash//"
isn't that Eminem??

Flow - the flow, i thought was pretty good, well done
punches - a couple of sweet punches
multi's - couldn't see much use of multi's in this verse

vote - killuminatic

good battle, both of you, peace...

Heres the link
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121024

Ok heres the breakdown i think killu had this. his flows came harder and punches were koo too. structure was ok could be worked on though
14/20

Ghetto you were pretty much out ran in this battle you need to elevate on flows and punches. structure was ok.
9/20

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Alright, check it. Cripple, your verse sucked hard ass. The flow was terrible, the structure was terrible, the punches sucked hard, it was generic as fuck. All those punches might have been half decent if they weren't played as fuck... use set up lines and wordplay to make it creative. Also work some personals in there... otherwise you could have prewritten this shit a year ago...

kill.. you gotta work on getting rid of filler.. and using set up lines to make your punches stronger. Also work on more wordplay.. your verse was pretty bad but hella better than cripples...

v/ kill.

umm dis was a okay battle....

opener-kill
structure-kill
punchlines-kill
creativity-kill
multi's-nun
personals-nun
enjoyed-kill...i think ghetto u came week dunn ya lines started gettin short and dat fukked up ya flow

myvote-kill...return da favor da links r in my sig

I thought cripple had a few good lines. That one about being pissed on at birth was alright baptized in sewage or some shit. Keep the votes comin

Come on 1 more vota and this shits over quit sleepin

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Flow-KILL
Creativity-KILL
Punches-KILL
Content-KILL
Complexity-KILL
Vocab- KILL
Multies-KILL

VOTE- Killuminatic.... he just came with a much better verse in all aspects, beat the kid in pretty much every category thats y he gets my vote..

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Need 1 more vote

kill you got this kid.

KILL: you got some good flow...you just need to work on meta4s personals and punchlines but most of all you need to work on your vocab....but good spit i wasnt feelin all of your lines but most of them all in all6/10

GETTO: you was not even close to ok..you needs lots of work..you should start readin tthe dictionary and expand yuor vocab nd just read a couple of battles so you can get a few idea..all in all4/10

vote=KILL