Afterword vs. Accomplishment....
 

YO you know da rules....

4 show im checkin-in just to let u know im here
ill drop as soon as i can= like wen my manager leaves b/c im at werk
let the best "word" win
peace

oh ok then yo i'ma just go to sleep its twelve thirty drop in da morn i will pce

Yo... Accomplishment new Crew holla ya dead kid...

Yo..Afterword...your not known,..i might use them words...but your still a no-name...
even if you mixed "coke..wit rogaine"..you still could'nt be a"head" of the "dope-game".../

gotcha convulsin like epeleptics...my crew names my style..cuz i'm rappin wit murderous methods...
Yeah..I don't know you.. i called him a fag...jeese he's easily offended.../

I don't call you cannibalistic..cuz i break ya mandible by shovin my fist in it...
punches flammible like a gasoline mic...ignites when i begin to spit...in-it.../

crew like "get em"...i aint gonna fight her...waiten for a main-course...not this appitizer...
this kid despises me...its cuz i'm young...yet so much wiser.../

my shit is tight...wearin ray bahns while readin my verse...couldn't shade my inner light...
your a beginner right?...cuz ya verse is hiding...like six year olds, on devils night.../

dogg im my badd
ive been extremely busy
but this is my check-in

yo, yo...

............check-it

dogg I spit hot shit non-stop, like I'm shootin off a whole round
yur a clown, who parades with different crews to hold-u-down
you use to ryhme clas-sic, but it got drastic so u, fill-da-void quik
u got yur ass whipped, so fuck yur last clique, now u ridin killah bwoy's dick
(killah,is his former as of yesterday crew member, who served him prior to his arrival to Lyrical Destruction.)

I'm beatin you with my eyes closed, so you know, I-got-aim
you couldnt bring Lyrical Destruction, if u wrote on a high-jacked-plane
(this cat already changed his crew again, that quik)

you kant fuckin see me u weiney im a distant solar-system
after this yur fam will be grievin, like theres a U.S. soldier-missin

LAST WORDS:
YOU SPEAK NON-SENSE SO CONSTANT THAT.....
YOU SOUND LIKE A BACKWARDS SPINNING RECORD
IVE SEEN YA RYHMES & YUR BEST ACCOMPLISHMENT IS......
HIDING A WACK RAPPER, BEHIND A WINNING RECORD


who gives a phuck about the outcome cuz this guy iz a crew d/r

"nothin personal"
peace

Damn that was a good battle. I liked both of those verses shit is hard to decide. Both had good punches, flow was alright but nothing special. In the end i think word came with more personal shit. Other than that shit was a tie and they were both good. But i thought word had the better punches so he gets my vote

Yo look out for other niggas and hit my battles up. Vote honestly. links in sig

haha ok uppin for votes no problem.... yo

uppin for votes

zzzzzzzzz..... don't sleep on dis shit votes......

I like both verses.Both had a nice fl.ow/structure.But punches would have to go to accomplishg ment.Afterworld,ur punches were okay,but it was too simple.You got add more complexy to it

Vote accomplishment.

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...536#post1254536
^^^vote

lmaooo yo aint really no explanation 4 dis shit after u got merked nigga

opener-acc...dat was it dunn ya opener won da battle
structure-a tie
punchlines-acc...oded on after with dos
multi's-acc..hands down
personals-acc
enjoyed-acc...dis was aeasy wun 4 u dunn aint no explanation 4 dis wun

my vote-acc...return dat favor dunny's links r in my sig

yo drop a response yall
if u want us to return da favor
its an eye 4 an eye
uppin

^^^basically ou vote for him he'll vote for u...D/R vote swaying upppiin for votes... and hit up my leauge battle

upping for votes man....................... zzzzzzzzzzzz chomon

OK... Accomp. Basically, the verse i expect from you. Good lines, packed with punches, a few personals, and uneven lines. If u fixed ur structure u may be unstopable kid, good verse. Afterword... Basically, the beggining of ur verse was dope, and then it fell off... I like how u made fun of Accomps. frequent crew hopping lately, but u never left it alone. That was the only good thing u said the entire time.
My vote goes to accomp. for consistency.

p.s. their are like 7 or 8 good emcee's left that arent in MM

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121514

^ and hit that up

yo uppp for votes... dont be sleepin bizzithces....

had better word play for mat was good bothsides but puches go to acc..................return the favor check out some of Tonyself SO I CAN CLOSE EM OUT

upppin yo...........

ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwlmfao afterword wtf was that..i think that was wack sorry dawg...i was not feelin' dat shit at all fo real...but you try so i give u that much but your shit was confusing and didnt make sense and was wack..accomplishment this was pretty good ive seen better but i was still feelin; dis...so i give this vote to ACC

aight imma drop an honest vote...

accomplishment:

opener: damnnnnnnn i thought dat shit was tight.

best line:crew like "get em"...i aint gonna fight her...waiten for a main-course...not this appitizer...
this kid despises me...its cuz i'm young...yet so much wiser.../

worst line: none

finisher:i thought that could do with a bit of improvement:

all in all i thought your flow was pretty tight u rhymed well n had some good punches...

15/20



afterword:

opener: not bad but couldav bin better

best line:you use to ryhme clas-sic, but it got drastic so u, fill-da-void quik
u got yur ass whipped, so fuck yur last clique, now u ridin killah bwoy's dick

worst line:you kant fuckin see me u weiney im a distant solar-system
after this yur fam will be grievin, like theres a U.S. soldier-missin

finisher: i didnt really feel that 1 really

all in all your spit was pretty good but you couldav improved a little bit.

13/20


i thought this battle was pretty close but my man accomplishment had that one

\\// peace \\//