Krysis vs Enygma
 

Aiight....end ma career if u think u can.....

10 bars....
no crew shit....
blind spits....
check in an tell me when u want the deadline to b, n dont take ages.......

why u always duckin me son?.....
The bitch slapped thread been open nearlly 3 days, have u replied to it? na u ducked it....

so i post a comment in ure lil pic post n u say set it up, that was half hour or so agao, so i set it up, go offline to reboot n ure offline, as usual ure a bitch......

hurry the fuck up, shit..........

i gotta go out so.............whatever, just check in wit the due date.....

Yo can you hit me up on this battle..... Honest vote....

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120945

Ill hit this up if he shows...

You talk a lot of shit for someone who can't back it up........ I don't do regular frontlines anymore, I'm in elevated. I haven't looked in regular bitch slapped in a couple of weeks............. I'll make an exception this time but if you insist on callin me out.....why didn't your Retarded ass just PM me? What are you fuckin stupid?.......

I'm gonna drop in a little bit.......... you can take as long as you need. I know you're gonna need all the time you can get cause you couldn't post anything yet..... lol! Or are you just waitin to feed off my verse...... Fuckin Bitches!!!!

This cat talks a lot of shit...... I wanted to keep on goin but his bitchass would have probably cried to the admins if I spit more than 10 lines.......

This cat Came in Insultin, though his Game Is Revoltin//
His rhymes are full of shit.....even his Name Is In Colons//
Lettin Two Spray, another loss...what would your Crew Say?//
Leave your head so full of 'Notts' people are askin.....'U.K?'//
I'm Spittin Logic, while he just can't cope, This Kid's Retarded//
I gotta boot him in the head........just to Kick Some Knowledge//
I spit like Forty Five's......got you meetin Your Demise//
And feedin off my shit......just like a Swarm Of Flies//
Hit you like Infantry Regiments when you're Seekin Out Veterans//
RB indicted you for wackness... I'm just Leakin The Evidence//

see ya name is straight by definition cuz how u wins a 'Mystery'-
see u could b micheal jackson but still not re-write 'History'--
dont get pissed-wit-me cuz ma shit comes out more 'crisperly'-
you couldnt be 'tight' if u was a 'chinese nun' an still not lost ya 'virginity'--
so ure enygmatic? u couldnt 'spray' if u was an 'automatic' u 'suck' like a 'vac-matic'-
u couldnt 'pack-shit' if i stuffed 'faeces' in ure pockets-
n u couldnt blow me up if u started spittin rockets-
see u must have a fascination with assasination cuz for chattin shit i'ma end ya whole life creation-
then i'll 'wrap'(rap) this shit up like mummyfication, leavin yo ass on perminant vacation--
you could mettamorphasize, shit u gone wish u was a cat cuz defeatin me gone take u at least 9 lives--
now theres a loss of weight cuz i just smashed another heavyweight-
aint no debate, when u stepped up to the plate u concealed ure own fate--
you just got lyrikally raped.....
see battlin me is like fightin a heavy mobb, best keep ya day job cuz u'll get robbed--
now look at the situation, you just got cut down like dead plantation----

(definition of enygma=mystery)<--1st line xplanitory...

aiight, looks like a nice battle.......upp'n 4 votes.....

....hmmm
enygma is obvious u didnt try in this..u lacked hard hittin punches..had a few aight personals but apart from that..nothin 2 special
krysis u came harder imo..had some nice punches(some were played) nice structure
imo this was 1 sided..wen i saw the match up i thought this would b different...meh

krysis...u get ma vote...
props 2 u..
if u 2 r interested in a challenge pm...n we will battle..
peace

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

WOW! It only took you six hours to prewrite garbage...........lol. I can't believe people are gonna vote for that........lol. And what happened to 10 lines? Does that only apply to me since I had to spit first?

Ohhh, I thought that said 7:24 last night..........lol! Holy Shit you took a long time!

man....u underestimated him..u said he had as long as he wants....i aint dickrydin...just pisses me off wen sum1 gets a vote against em..n start makin excuses..u cuda came harder....u didnt...your fault...
:rolleyes: ...... herbs these days

what?

i only checked this this mornin, UK TIME U FUCKIN HERB........shit i hate u fucken amatures who bitch wen they think they gone win then get blown up....damn and i never thought u were stupid but ure fuckin dumb, if u were as good as u claimed u was u wouldnt be bitchin about 10-lines cuz i said the limit was 10-bars, now if u dont know what a bar is u shouldnt battle vets, now shut the fuck up bitchen, just cuz u got served........

read the rules, learn how to rap an then we'll battle again, u wasted ma fuckin time.....

worthless opponent.....

I wasted your time? Why did you insist on battlin in the regular frontlines? I know, cause everyone who knows anythin is movin to elevated. Why didn't you raise the vote count? Cause you are hopin for them inadequate votes from herbs that don't know shit......lol. I can't believe that you came with those stretched ass lines and no flow tellin me how to rap........half your lines didn't even rhyme.......lol. And come up with some original wordplay. Just cause most of these newbs haven't heard them before doesn't mean that you made them up.............

nygma gets this one

REason...
Punches... Even his name is in colons that funny
Flow..Lettin Two Spray, another loss...what would your Crew Say?//
Leave your head so full of 'Notts' people are askin.....'U.K?'//
structre...good
multies....good

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

yo return da favor

why didnt i got to elevated? hmmmmm there again u've shown ure stupidity, i cant, i aint got enuff wins or posts u fucken derilickt.......
ma shit dont flow? u cant read?

and accomplishment......
u know that vote was just because u dont like me since i punked u wen i was in class-sic then called u out in audio, awwww u cant do audio........bitch......

plus that vote had irrelevent feedback......

I think you mean inadequate feedback.......learn some English. And if that one had inadequate feedback, than so did D~Iller's. all he said was that he didn't like mine and he liked yours.......... no real explaination........

flow - Krysis
punches - tie
opener - Krysis
finisher - enygma
fave line - u couldnt 'pack-shit' if i stuffed 'faeces' in ure pockets-
n u couldnt blow me up if u started spittin rockets- by Krysis

my vote goes to Krysis

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

^^^
least he quoted a punch, lets u know he read the battle.....

up'n....

BREAKDOWN

Originally posted by Enygma

This cat Came in Insultin, though his Game Is Revoltin//
His rhymes are full of shit.....even his Name Is In Colons//
not that good of a personal didnt make much sense.2/10
Lettin Two Spray, another loss...what would your Crew Say?//
Leave your head so full of 'Notts' people are askin.....'U.K?'//
Nice personal worked his location well.8/10
I'm Spittin Logic, while he just can't cope, This Kid's Retarded//
I gotta boot him in the head........just to Kick Some Knowledge//
Not that good could of been worded better. 2/10
I spit like Forty Five's......got you meetin Your Demise//
And feedin off my shit......just like a Swarm Of Flies//
Played spittin concept, decent second line. 4/10
Hit you like Infantry Regiments when you're Seekin Out Veterans//
RB indicted you for wackness... I'm just Leakin The Evidence//
better this was decent but could of been better.6/10

22/50 decnt but could of made punches better worded and more content.

Origanaly posted by :Krysis:

see ya name is straight by definition cuz how u wins a 'Mystery'-
see u could b micheal jackson but still not re-write 'History'--
Nice personal worked his name in a meta quite well. 7/10
dont get pissed-wit-me cuz ma shit comes out more 'crisperly'-
you couldnt be 'tight' if u was a 'chinese nun' an still not lost ya 'virginity'--
Good crisperly and chinese worked this well. 5/10
so ure enygmatic? u couldnt 'spray' if u was an 'automatic' u 'suck' like a 'vac-matic'-
this was kinda weak.2/10
u couldnt 'pack-shit' if i stuffed 'faeces' in ure pockets-
n u couldnt blow me up if u started spittin rockets-
Good could of been worded better but still good.5/10
see u must have a fascination with assasination cuz for chattin shit i'ma end ya whole life creation-
stretched to much didnt need that internal. 3/10
then i'll 'wrap'(rap) this shit up like mummyfication, leavin yo ass on perminant vacation--
Pretty good 6/10
you could mettamorphasize, shit u gone wish u was a cat cuz defeatin me gone take u at least 9 lives--
not that strong. 3/10
now theres a loss of weight cuz i just smashed another heavyweight-
aint no debate, when u stepped up to the plate u concealed ure own fate--
you just got lyrikally raped.....
Nice pretty good. 6/10
see battlin me is like fightin a heavy mobb, best keep ya day job cuz u'll get robbed--
now look at the situation, you just got cut down like dead plantation
ok not that hard hitting. 4/10

41/90 - win by more content but try not to stretch lines too much.


This battle wnt to kryo only because of more content and slightly better attributes although structure and flow for some parts were fuked.

I'll poll my vote when i get 50 posts im on 40 or so now so soon.

This cat Came in Insultin, though his Game Is Revoltin//
His rhymes are full of shit.....even his Name Is In Colons//
Lettin Two Spray, another loss...what would your Crew Say?//
Leave your head so full of 'Notts' people are askin.....'U.K?'//
I'm Spittin Logic, while he just can't cope, This Kid's Retarded//
I gotta boot him in the head........just to Kick Some Knowledge//
I spit like Forty Five's......got you meetin Your Demise//
And feedin off my shit......just like a Swarm Of Flies//
Hit you like Infantry Regiments when you're Seekin Out Veterans//
RB indicted you for wackness... I'm just Leakin The Evidence//

Aight.... not a bad verse... some attempts at wit. Only problem is that the rhyme scheme gets elementary in parts and the flow suffers in a few lines. Other than that not a bad verse. Get rid of the // however... it just takes away.

see ya name is straight by definition cuz how u wins a 'Mystery'-
see u could b micheal jackson but still not re-write 'History'--
dont get pissed-wit-me cuz ma shit comes out more 'crisperly'-
you couldnt be 'tight' if u was a 'chinese nun' an still not lost ya 'virginity'--
so ure enygmatic? u couldnt 'spray' if u was an 'automatic' u 'suck' like a 'vac-matic'-
u couldnt 'pack-shit' if i stuffed 'faeces' in ure pockets-
n u couldnt blow me up if u started spittin rockets-
see u must have a fascination with assasination cuz for chattin shit i'ma end ya whole life creation-
then i'll 'wrap'(rap) this shit up like mummyfication, leavin yo ass on perminant vacation--
you could mettamorphasize, shit u gone wish u was a cat cuz defeatin me gone take u at least 9 lives--
now theres a loss of weight cuz i just smashed another heavyweight-
aint no debate, when u stepped up to the plate u concealed ure own fate--
you just got lyrikally raped.....
see battlin me is like fightin a heavy mobb, best keep ya day job cuz u'll get robbed--
now look at the situation, you just got cut down like dead plantation

First off, DIE for explaining punches. Next.... wow that was a simple ass verse... Crisperly isnt a word by the way.... that shows a total lack of skill when you resort to making up words to keep up that simple ass rhyme scheme. I have no idea how you got a vote.... Seriously... you lacked wit and any decent punches.


Vote- Enygma

I know that everyone is entitled to his or her own opinion but if you don't get the punches, don't vote. To explain the colon punch......his name has : around it.....:Krysis:.....also your colon is where your body stores feces before it is excremented out into the stinky pile that is otherwise known as Krysis's verse.....But thanks for the explained vote Hybrid...... first one of the battle....

C'mon people, lets keep the votes comin

enygma you got this....................

enygma: you was brilliant..good flow just a few basic lines ....good flow and good meta4s wit some good punchlines........i liked your wjole flow...see these are types of battles that we need...mo battles like this would give this site a betta name..all in all 8/10

Krisis: good flow just a lil to basic...could work on your structure a lil..to tell you the truth i thought you would be betta then this........but you got poteintial......would like to see you battle again...alll in all..7/10

vote=enygma

Thanks for the feedback and the well explained vote......uppim for some more

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121104

hit that up^^

check it

enygma opener was pretty sick nice flow good multies and nice personal the closer was decent i seen wha you was doin with it but people on this site dont know what it was and threw the rest of the verse the punchs and wordplay stayed consistent good mulites and personals as well good verse

krysis opener was nothin michael jackson shit should be thrown out period shit been used 987342008 times so it was below average opener the closer was closer was pretty weak to the first line was stretched even with mulites it didnt flow to well and the punchine didnt really connect had a few good personals and punchs threw your verse but i dont think you stayed as consistent with them as enygma

vote enygma

Uppin for some votes......c'mon people, lets close this shit out....

enygma:

"This cat Came in Insultin, though his Game Is Revoltin//
His rhymes are full of shit.....even his Name Is In Colons//
^^ill punch nice flow to it and personals hit hard 7/10
Lettin Two Spray, another loss...what would your Crew Say?//
Leave your head so full of 'Notts' people are askin.....'U.K?'//
^^another ill punch ..good wordplay and multies 8/10
I'm Spittin Logic, while he just can't cope, This Kid's Retarded//
I gotta boot him in the head........just to Kick Some Knowledge//
^^decent punch could have been better 6/10
I spit like Forty Five's......got you meetin Your Demise//
And feedin off my shit......just like a Swarm Of Flies//
^^wasnt feelin this one that much but it flowed good 6/10
Hit you like Infantry Regiments when you're Seekin Out Veterans//
RB indicted you for wackness... I'm just Leakin The Evidence//
^^good closer should have came harder 6/10

overall:33/50 good verse

:krysis:

"see ya name is straight by definition cuz how u wins a 'Mystery'-
see u could b micheal jackson but still not re-write 'History'--
^^ok opener could have been better 5/10
dont get pissed-wit-me cuz ma shit comes out more 'crisperly'-
you couldnt be 'tight' if u was a 'chinese nun' an still not lost ya 'virginity'--
^^is crisperly a word lol anyways ok not hard punch tho 4/10
so ure enygmatic? u couldnt 'spray' if u was an 'automatic' u 'suck' like a 'vac-matic'-
^^not good at all 1/10
u couldnt 'pack-shit' if i stuffed 'faeces' in ure pockets-
n u couldnt blow me up if u started spittin rockets-
^^probably your best nice shyt 7/10
see u must have a fascination with assasination cuz for chattin shit i'ma end ya whole life creation-
^^didnt flow to well ok punch 4/10
then i'll 'wrap'(rap) this shit up like mummyfication, leavin yo ass on perminant vacation--
^^another bar didnt flow too good but better than last line 5/10
you could mettamorphasize, shit u gone wish u was a cat cuz defeatin me gone take u at least 9 lives--
^^ mettamorphasize..is it a word? anyways nice bar lil stretched 4/10
now theres a loss of weight cuz i just smashed another heavyweight-
aint no debate, when u stepped up to the plate u concealed ure own fate--
you just got lyrikally raped.....
^^another stretched bar ok punch good flow 5/10
see battlin me is like fightin a heavy mobb, best keep ya day job cuz u'll get robbed--
now look at the situation, you just got cut down like dead plantation
^^not a good closer not a hard punch 4/10

overall: 39/90..expected you to come harder nice battle

vote: enygma his verse was better overall nice structure flow and punches/personals

~1~

Uppin for more votes....................................

sorry enygma i got the punch when ya explained it sorry dude if i had understood this you would of won. peace.

^^^

No worries.....I just need one more for it to be closed.....

Aight here's how it's goin' down.

Enygma:

Flow: Very nice, Structural sound, easy flow. Punches: Very solid, I've seen better from you, but still effective nontheless. Multis: I saw a coupla decent and effective ones. Personals: Opener hit real hard. Vocab: Adequate. Opener: Good Closer: Nice

Fav Line: (Colon one was nice too)

Hit you like Infantry Regiments when you're Seekin Out Veterans//
RB indicted you for wackness... I'm just Leakin The Evidence//

Krysis:

Flow: Lost me in quite a few of the places and got me frustrated. Punches: They was aight. Definately coulda been betta. Multis: You tryed for 'em, but they made your flow fuck up 'cause they was too long. Personals: Pretty Good. Opener was the best one. Opener:Solid as stated Closer: Didn't really like it that much, madd short, messed up the flow in the last line, neva a good idea.

Fav Line:

see ya name is straight by definition cuz how u wins a 'Mystery'-
see u could b micheal jackson but still not re-write 'History'--

Both y'all did alright, Enygma was definately the better of the two, Krysis, you just need to work on your flow a lil' more, and learn how to work the multis in more smoothly. Enygma, I've seen better from U, but It was still pretty solid.

Vote: Enygma