premanition vs mic-wrecker
 

10-20 lines
no hatin or dick ridin votes
crew votes are allowed if
they are fully explained and honest

rematch of my 1st ever battle here on rb which he just won YESTERDAY wit sum shitty votes




may the best man win :shoot: :shoot: :shoot:

check in by two o'clock
nigga.....,dont be stallin talkin alot of shit fam fam

check in im ere u spit first asap then i'll reply straight after but hurry cos im goin out pretty soon ya know!

yup checkin in sorry for the delay
homework then weight liftin to football
butt here's my spit
revenge is a bee-yotch
catch me if u can nigga

man my computer is fuckin up fam.....
i swear to godd i just posted my battle verse blind and it didnt go through
this pissed me off hella

aite computer is workin now...internet went bissurrk last nite



~spittin blindly~

how da fucc u gon hand me a defeat, da's something i would like to see//
halloween is over nigga u cant pretendin to b an emcee//

i cross sea to shining sea put ya ass back in its place//
put ya mug on the concrete, how's that for a poke-er face//

my flows cooler than winnepeg so niggaz get chills wen i spit//
caz my flows more N'SYNC than that guy who exposed the youngest jacksons tits// :laugh:

wit no hesitation i'll bury ya 72 inches SWIFT like stromile//
in ya prom suit, just to give the ground some style//

push up daisies baby, run from this ~MIC-Murderer~ im on the loose//
if ya bars was seeds, lemee bury them to see if they make fruit//

lemme show u how a boss rhyme//
i'll mop the floor wit yo ass like yo tighy ~whitys~ was drenched in turpentine// :nono:

im up to eleven winz an countin//
u make 12 caz u wont be saved from my wrath if u was speakin in tongues an shoutin// :laugh2:

im done murkin u, im through w/ this freestyle wanna~b~//
caz like dizzy rascal he's just anotha shitty brittish mc//

16 bars of hott shit.....................................

uppin 4 preminition
where is he?????
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i cant believe this pussy acceptin a challenge an dont stand up to it....
shit i even spitted 1st wat a waste of my time close the thread

biggest pussy known to man, how u gon spit in yo LCB an not in here against me........
an i BEAT ME before

yo man, good spit... had some good lines in there.. if this guy ever spits something I will hit this battle up.. but until then .. I need some votes on a battle.. so can you take a few minutes to drop an honest vote?.. thx

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121858

yo yo man soz i haven't been active for the last week or so i'll key something up right now, ad to do my league verse first cos it ad a deadline, soz man i'll spit now...pz

easy this kid is wack....shit played out punches as usual....listen...


wiv the 'mic' i 'wrecked' you once before....but now you back for more?...
my rhymes ull make you eat the 'dirt'...knock ya teeth out to the 'floor'...
should have left ur wisdom teeth...then ya wudnt av returned wiv this beef...
checked ya 'status'...and im a 'branch' while you just another fallin leaf...(crew)
this kids obsessed wiv the net...500+ posts since the last time we met...
and this wannabe vet dropped 3 verses 2 try n overcome wot i had set...(r last battle)
bitch u ain't ill...the only thing off the hook is ya phone on the window sill...
u don't like to hear it, but i kill...n im about to make this civil battle 3-0...
fill ya verse wiv too much shit...have me questioning why you even spit...
throw enough shit n some will stick...
while you throw enough punches but you never hit....1

^^^in our last battle he dropped 3 verses by the way...jus 4 y'all who didnt know that...uppin this!

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umm okay good shit

opener-pre...mic ya shit was da worst y would u say dat
structure-a tie both of ya'll shit was good
punchlines-pre ya shits wasn't ill but they were good enuff
multis-nun from both
wordplay-nun
personals-pre....merked u rite here mic
enojyed-pre...he got dis shit hands down yo da personals was killin dis nigga

my vote-pre......reurn da favor ya'll link is my sig

ding, ding, ding
and da winner is... MIC-WRECKER
his flows and blowz were hott and premanation's waz off course and
coudn't be understanded and it wasn't hard 2 figure this out
opener: mic
structure: mic
jabs: mic
lyricism: mic
finisher: mic



you did good

premanation?, work on ya shit, dawg



holla back at my votes...it will b apprieciated

hahahaha^^^^o.k dawg well you can't understand because ur a thick bastard!!!!

uppin...........................1

oh now u decide to post an spit...lame ass nigga
u had a fuckin year to write yo verse,

uppin 4 votes.......im not gon lie i spit 2 verses against dis nigga in r last battle but i was a new nigga to da site an didnt give a fuck so wat i spit 2 verses

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ok

prem...

good verse i just dont see how you could possibley be original top ten... your verse was good but you just had stupid filler like on the windo sill that is pointless just so you can get a rhyme off your struc is good and flow but your punches were nothin ....

mic

good versse good punches liked the prom suite line you just need to work on the stretched bars and you could be illar than most cats here...

vote mic...

return da favor

uppin.......
votes appreciated
honest explained votes

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mic wrecker wins. ill lines homie... UK IS WACK!!!!!!!!! WHY U RAPPIN!!!

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

damn dat looks like thats gonna b disqualified, plz vote w/ adequete feedback that was a wack vote rite thurr, even tho it was in my favor come man explain

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yo uppin 4 solid explained votes rite now, lets get this goin

HARD BATTLE TO JUDGE. WHOA NICE VERSE BY BOTH YOUR GUYS. PREM. NICE VERSE KID. WE STILL HAVE A BATTLE OPEN. ANYWAY YOU HAD NICE STRUCTURE AND PUNCHES. YOUR FLOW WAS GOOD. NICE PERSONALS. YOUR LAST LINE WAS WACK THOUGH. MIC WRECKER YOU HELD IT DOWN. NICE PUNCHES FLOWS AN MULTIPLES. YOU HAD AN ALL TOGETHER BETTER VERSE. I LIKE YOUR RHYME SCHEME ALOT. NICE FROM THE BOTH OF YOU......RETURN THE FAVOR:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115437

VOTE=MIC WRECKER

uppin yall.............................................. .......

b4 i create any confusion. i was not in a crew at the time that i voted so no this isnot a dick rhydin vote aight. if you got a problem wit it lets battle!!

yup yup uppin 4 deez votez ppl holla at this i hate wen battles get slept on

Uping some votes !!!!

Comeon Yall...... I'll even return the favor...lol

uppin this shit....man why the fuck you got ya whole crew uppin this!!!!

mic won this because of his punches hit harder and had better performance overall. I could read his more easerly because of his structure and flow was spot on and beat the other guy by his rhymes, multies and flow. The other guy did ok but not problebly his best rap, try better next time.

yo dis wuz a ok battle but if u open ya eyes u can clearly see dat mic wrecker hit harder in every aspect but don't get me wrong p wuz str8 2

vote=mic