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discharge vrs.gotaasswhoopin4U
5-15 lines
no d/r no crew u spit first |
checkin iiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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my clique is evil kanivel, the way we jump yall niggas/
ya clique is fuckin garbage so im gon dump yall nigga/ life aint good when u being chased by an infared beam/ u picked a dumb battle now u gettin ripped like k-mart jeans/ discharge act like he wanted the battle but he fearin my skills/ watch his verse take 2 hours to type cuz he try to mirror my skills/ u better be prepared for my skills/ i aint feel like wastin my time on a dude wit inferior skill/ erbody kno this bum dont wanna see the kid/ but he needed publicity for that piece of shit link in his sig/ cmon dog ill have ya body laid out in th grass/ dude love love the pen(jail) cuz he str8 ass/ ya life is a mirage,u got balls to battle me/ how long this dude be discharged go on, get some new batteries/ :thefinger |
tight verse tight verse iight im checkin in be done in less than 30
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your last battle was your"15-minutes-of-fame",give it up youve already been "slain"//
nothing could help ya"game", "i got my ass beat" to that you should change ya name// none of your "ass-whoopin"skillz remain,all your ryhmes and punches are played// all your ryhmes are just fuckin plain,you have no skillz and thats another win i gained// you and your crew should be ashamed, your gayer than prince in perple rain// your soft like the kids from the "cabage patch" , your weak i already won this match// skillz are something ull never catch,not even if i put them in a bone and had ths bitch "go fetch"// i broke you like a"weak" trojan latex,folks this bitch is "dead" so pay your respects// next time keep your ryhmes book and dictionary intact,good ryhmes or vocab. is what u lack// my punches hit to fast for bitches like you to react,give rappin up,your fucking "wack"// but il cut you some slack,u got less skill then nine-year-olds got hair on their "nutsack"// so ill take your ryhmes and return em to "sender",your ryhmes arnt gold,just fools treasure// ill killed ya ass with one gesture,obviously you fold underpressure// ur a good contender,but i feel like im battelin uncle fester, im wrong even he could ryhme better// yu sexoffender,your a "fuit",thats why you got served like an fruit smoothy fresh out the blender// |
good battle i liked both verses
gotaa -u had some ite shit but u cant use da same word twice at da end it blow yo whole verse bestline-erbody kno this bum dont wanna see the kid/ but he needed publicity for that piece of shit link in his sig/ dat was hott worsteline-my clique is evil kanivel, the way we jump yall niggas/ ya clique is fuckin garbage so im gon dump yall nigga/ ^^ bad way 2 start overall verse get a **8** discharge u had a nice flow and some nice punches bestline-your last battle was your"15-minutes-of-fame",give it up youve already been "slain"// nothing could help ya"game", "i got my ass beat" to that you should change ya name// ^^^ nice start worsteline-none overall yo vere get a **9** winner-discharge |
goooood battle uppin for votes well return da favor
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upppity uppin again and again
will return the favor |
Opin
Oopin Appin Ippin Eppin Nnnnnaaaahhhhh Uuuuuuuuuupppppiiiiiiiinnnnnnn^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 6 |
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^^^^CORNY ASS FINISHER DUNNY explanation: ya verse was madd week dunn u have no punchlines..u had a lil wordplay and wun personal...u get a 6/10 |
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explanation:nice verse punches was there and u had a good lil flow but ya opener finshed him...9/10 my vote-discharge RETURN DA FAVOR....DA LINKS R IN MY SIG |
Uppin This Fuckin Battle Right The Fuck Now
I Hope I Dont Go Lose Im Still Over 500. Niggas Im The Nets Not The Knicks |
discharge won
punches-discharge mettas-discharge multis-none flow-GAAS vocab-none |
ok breakdown for gotaa:
ur trying to be to tough u cant use the same word 4 times in a row overall 5/10 bestline:ya life is a mirage,u got balls to battle me/ how long this dude be discharged go on, get some new batteries/ overall for discharge: 8/10 this was a solid flow but u a bitch i aint gonna lie ill kick ya ass your best line:so ill take your ryhmes and return em to "sender",your ryhmes arnt gold,just fools treasure// ill killed ya ass with one gesture,obviously you fold underpressure// if i was votin on who i hated more discharge would have lost but if im voting on who has more skill discharge won so im givin it to discharge |
It goes down like this. Ass had the flow, and way better structure. Had a couple good lines. I liked that one about needin batteries or some shit, but that was about it
Discharged's lines were a little too long, but he had a little word play and good punches so he gets my vote. |
I Lost Up This Shit I Dont Wanna See This At The Main Index No More
Somebody Vote |
HMMM ya okay..
This wasn't a great battle but here we go Discharge your bars were real streched messin up your flow kinda, and the wordplay was real off with only average punchlines GOT your battle was just wack, sorry you had no structure that i could see and your punchlines were far from okay VOTE DIS |
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