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[b]techrhymes V.s. Born2spitt[/b]
IIGHT 5 TO 10 BARS MAX U THINK U READY. LETS GO. RHYMES DUE ANYTIME.NO DR/CREW/HATE IIGHT. :thefinger :gfy:
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We each spit once... u spit first 10 bars max.. ill go wit that
DQ'ed. Biting: http://www.illhill.com/forum/topic.asp?TOPIC_ID=6547 -strobe |
Poisin Fire
AY YO, YOU CLAIM YOU IS BORN TO SPIT/
BUT DAT WONT BE DA FACT WHEN YOU TORN DA BITS/ AN IT AINT TAKIN ME LONG TO POST THESE RHYMES/ CUZ IF I WAS I WOULD SHREAD YOU ACROSS DA COST OF EAST LINES/ AND I SPIT MY BARS WIT CUATION/ THIS IS DAT POISIN FIRE IF YOU BITE OFF ME IT'LL MAKE YOU NAUSIOUS/ MOST OF DA SHIT YOU SPITTEN WAS PROBABLY PRE WRITTEN/ FRRRUCK DAT, YO ISH IS THEE BITTEN/ SPITT CANT SEE ME,MY RHYMES IS LIKE A TECH/ SPITT,WHAT HOOD IS YOU REPPIN WOULD YOU GO BACK AND CHECK/ IM REPPIN THA MOTHAFRRRUCKIN EAST SIDE/ IM BETTIN YOU'S A UNDERTHUGGIN BEAST RIGHT/ WHY IS YOU IN A HURRY TO BATTLE/ IM'A STRAIGHT BURRY YOU UP IN A SATTLE/ THE EFFECT OF MY POISIN FIRE WOULD BLIND YOU/ BUT DAT'S JUST MY SPARK,MY HOLLOWS BEHIND YOU/ LIKE I SAID TO THEM OTHER EMCEE'S,IM ROLLIN WIT DA TECHNINE/ JUST KNOW I AINT NEVER STOPPIN MY WRATH DA NAME IS TECHRHYMES. HOLD DAT :shoot: |
LOL.. u wanna make it 10-20?? u called the rule 5-10 then u come pull like 20..
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Your punk ass life, aint nobody gonna save//
Like “DMX” I’ll help you, and give you a “cradle to your grave”// this guy is fraud--faker than a plastic apple// fruit of loom panties make you more fruity than snapple// my impeechment re-jected, sorry Born has been re-elected// if nobody votes for your verse, its cuz u was lyrically ne-glected// youre tha opposite of hot, if u want you can borrow my sweater-and-t's// ill even give you my saliva, u still couldnt spit better-than-me// so this is tha re-election seems like schwarenegger's-in-office// heres my only none hatin comment, give up this battle you already-lost-it// once again as said before "PLEASE" find a lyric-con-verter// and see if C.S.I. can figure out why your lyrics got mur-dered// Tech Came Spittin Sick But im bout Reverse-The-Curse// Write Rhmyes on His "SOAP" Cuz That Be Tha Only Time He'd "DROP-a-Nice-Verse"// My Verse Filled WIt Nutritionist FACTS So Im Baggin Ya Lunches// Yall Came Up Like Anarecsick Boxers, Nuthin But Weak Punches// I’ve done won, don’t vote, it’s not an election// Only time Tech comes hard is when he gets an erection// Im Killin This Dude, I Think I See Blood Drippin From His PC// Ima Take A "V" Out Of This "V.E.T" And Leave'Em Lookin Like "E.T."// Im Ending This Battle, I Murdered This Dude With My Lyrics Quickest Creations// Fuck A Funeral Everyone On hurr Just Witnessed Cremation// |
May the illezt nigga win.. well anyways lets get these votes cmin in people
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Ay Yo, Yo Shit Was Tight, Im Really Feelin Those Punches Kid.why Dont You See My Nigga Hot As A Gun. Verse Him. You Hot.
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Thx dogg... i never thought i would here shit like this against someone im versin.. anyways thx homie.. ill battle him when i get better dogg
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121594
^^ return tha favor Tech.-Weak opener,it just was too simple and soft. AN IT AINT TAKIN ME LONG TO POST THESE RHYMES/ CUZ IF I WAS I WOULD SHREAD YOU ACROSS DA COST OF EAST LINES/ AND I SPIT MY BARS WIT CUATION/ THIS IS DAT POISIN FIRE IF YOU BITE OFF ME IT'LL MAKE YOU NAUSIOUS/ MOST OF DA SHIT YOU SPITTEN WAS PROBABLY PRE WRITTEN/ FRRRUCK DAT, YO ISH IS THEE BITTEN/ SPITT CANT SEE ME,MY RHYMES IS LIKE A TECH/ SPITT,WHAT HOOD IS YOU REPPIN WOULD YOU GO BACK AND CHECK/ IM REPPIN THA MOTHAFRRRUCKIN EAST SIDE/ IM BETTIN YOU'S A UNDERTHUGGIN BEAST RIGHT/ WHY IS YOU IN A HURRY TO BATTLE/ IM'A STRAIGHT BURRY YOU UP IN A SATTLE/ THE EFFECT OF MY POISIN FIRE WOULD BLIND YOU/ BUT DAT'S JUST MY SPARK,MY HOLLOWS BEHIND YOU/ ^^If ya read this agin,you'd see,this is softer than a tittie.I don't see how that would diss your oppenent.These lines are "meh".They were complex,which is good,but just plain whack. Weak closer.Same as problem as ur opener. Born2 Spitt-Ok opener,nice shit bout DMX. I’ve done won, don’t vote, it’s not an election// Only time Tech comes hard is when he gets an erection// ^^only these lines are whck.That erction shit has goten played out badly.But don't worry,the rest was better then anything tech had. Overall-Kinda one sided.Born2spit had this thing easily. Vote-Born2spit |
ok tech rhymes
--------------------- ok u had good punches(example):MOST OF DA SHIT YOU SPITTEN WAS PROBABLY PRE WRITTEN/ FRRRUCK DAT, YO ISH IS THEE BITTEN/ ok thats not great though keep working you had bad bad bad punches (example)AND I SPIT MY BARS WIT CUATION/ THIS IS DAT POISIN FIRE IF YOU BITE OFF ME IT'LL MAKE YOU NAUSIOUS/ (heres anbother bad one): WHY IS YOU IN A HURRY TO BATTLE/ IM'A STRAIGHT BURRY YOU UP IN A SATTLE/ that made no sense (heres another punch that made no sense):SPITT CANT SEE ME,MY RHYMES IS LIKE A TECH/ SPITT,WHAT HOOD IS YOU REPPIN WOULD YOU GO BACK AND CHECK/ not good keep working 4/10 --------- ----- -------- ----- born2spt -------------- bestline:Your punk ass life, aint nobody gonna save// Like “DMX” I’ll help you, and give you a “cradle to your grave”// this guy is fraud--faker than a plastic apple// fruit of loom panties make you more fruity than snapple// my impeechment re-jected, sorry Born has been re-elected// if nobody votes for your verse, its cuz u was lyrically ne-glected// hella good starter!!! worst line:Im Killin This Dude, I Think I See Blood Drippin From His PC// Ima Take A "V" Out Of This "V.E.T" And Leave'Em Lookin Like "E.T."// it was ok but not great 8/10 good job nice work blah blah blah my vote goes to born2spit |
both did good with da flow,
seemed to me that tech kinda was running out of ideas... Born had a fuckn awesome start... it just owned.... the rest of his shit hit hard as well. Vote : Born 2 own i mean Born2spit lol |
OK THIS BATTLE WRITE HERE WAS *WACK* CUZ THERE IS A NOOB GOING UP AGAINST A VETEREN AND I LIKED HIS WHOLE ENTIRE RAP IT WAS OFF THE CHAIN FROM THE BEGIN TO THE END JUST LOOK.....
Your punk ass life, aint nobody gonna save// Like “DMX” I’ll help you, and give you a “cradle to your grave”// this guy is fraud--faker than a plastic apple// fruit of loom panties make you more fruity than snapple// my impeechment re-jected, sorry Born has been re-elected// if nobody votes for your verse, its cuz u was lyrically ne-glected// youre tha opposite of hot, if u want you can borrow my sweater-and-t's// ill even give you my saliva, u still couldnt spit better-than-me// so this is tha re-election seems like schwarenegger's-in-office// heres my only none hatin comment, give up this battle you already-lost-it// once again as said before "PLEASE" find a lyric-con-verter// and see if C.S.I. can figure out why your lyrics got mur-dered// Tech Came Spittin Sick But im bout Reverse-The-Curse// Write Rhmyes on His "SOAP" Cuz That Be Tha Only Time He'd "DROP-a-Nice-Verse"// My Verse Filled WIt Nutritionist FACTS So Im Baggin Ya Lunches// Yall Came Up Like Anarecsick Boxers, Nuthin But Weak Punches// I’ve done won, don’t vote, it’s not an election// Only time Tech comes hard is when he gets an erection// Im Killin This Dude, I Think I See Blood Drippin From His PC// Ima Take A "V" Out Of This "V.E.T" And Leave'Em Lookin Like "E.T."// Im Ending This Battle, I Murdered This Dude With My Lyrics Quickest Creations// Fuck A Funeral Everyone On hurr Just Witnessed Cremation// |
Omg I Forgot To Vote Well The Vote Is For Born2spiit
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Ight thx for all the votin people.. gotta give tech some props for steppin up and ACTUALLY FINISHING the battle unlike Destin2Die
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Dont sleep this battle out peepz... all i need is one more honest vote .... cmon now
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oh shit it easy to see who won this... even though Tech holding down the eastside wid me... he lost the battle and born2spiit won.
Ok break it down like this: Tech: i like the opener and then everything got messed up, what happen? The punches were weak if there were any. It seemed like you changed style right in the middle of it. 2Spiit:There more punches by you. although with that "E.T." thing was streching it. like like how you ended it with talking about the end, maybe that was just me. My vote ......... if you don't no then you stupid as hell!!!!!!!! Born2spiit you heard. |
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