IdEum [vs] DopeDalivery
 

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if u so dope then y u make a callout yet affraid to spit first
prolly cos u gotta search for a bit verse so u can hit worse
silly rabbit your shit aint working cos there no trix in this game
your wack as fuck cos your lines bout as original as your name
u shoulda just backed off i dunno y u even check inta my thread
cos u was fucked b4 it started like brittany when newly wed
bitch its best u shut your mouth n just dont get inta me
cos 9 months 4 u were born i gave your mom a dope dalivery
keystyle whatever.. spit your shit

im fixin-ta-smack this kid thats clearly spittin-it-wack
I mean damn kid u "suck at rappin" hope ya stickin-ta-track(check his profile)

I make-it-better plus this kids as fake-as-pleather
Bitch ass get "ripped up quicker" than a break-up-letter

Beatin this joke of a hoax without puttin up any effort
Its like my lines givin "paper cuts" cuz damn my text hurts

i aim-for-ya-throat with neck shots that make this lame-nigga-choke
Kid your not even "real" a fuckin fable-at-most

mista-cool DOPE sent you straight from bitch-ta-fool
For real give up rappin homie and stick-to-school

That was a hot battle. U both went hard shit was real. Ideum had better flow, but delivery's was alright tho. Punches went hard onboth sides but i think ideum took that too. structure was good too. overall i liked both but im votin ideum

ppfffff nigga head back to the moon..... 1-0 idEum

i got to go with ideum he came a lil hard nice battle
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121292

Dang this shit was tuff... but im gonna go wit dopedelivary only because he had the punches and flow...

flow=dope
punches=dope
wordplay=ideum
originality=ideum
vote=dope

I prefer punches and flow over wordplay and originality.. u feel

that makes it 1-1

bm316 ya vote dont count brah...........

idEum
flow:7/10
vocab:6/10
originality:6/10
punches:7/10

DopeDelivary
flow:6/10
vocab:6/10
originality:7/10
punches:5/10

over all this was a short but sweet battle and i'm going with .....
vote=idEum

Yo yall cats vote on one of my battles im gettin slept on

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lets get some votes in here....

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uppin for votes on this battle.. come on it wont take long to vote

This battle needs votes like gore did in florida..... VOTES

I think dope deliver won this battle because he had harder hitten punches it was pretty weak but he came better because i deum had filers and i dit like his rhyme scheme peace.

to explain my vote, the other guy was talking about threads and stuff about website shit instead of like...real shit... Dope did the same thing but his first 4 lines were pretty mad, so whatever I liked Dopes stuff more

thx for the vote..... uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

My Vote
 

if u so dope then y u make a callout yet affraid to spit first
prolly cos u gotta search for a bit verse so u can hit worse
Nice opener...8/10
silly rabbit your shit aint working cos there no trix in this game
your wack as fuck cos your lines bout as original as your name
hahaha....6/10
u shoulda just backed off i dunno y u even check inta my thread
cos u was fucked b4 it started like brittany when newly wed
hmm....5/10
bitch its best u shut your mouth n just dont get inta me
cos 9 months 4 u were born i gave your mom a dope dalivery
nice!!!.....10/10

Verse Score - 29/40

Wow you surprised me....u had a solid verse....good punches....jus werk on wordplay and using better meta's....u had a good flow......elevate and keep battlin....u got potential....

im fixin-ta-smack this kid thats clearly spittin-it-wack
I mean damn kid u "suck at rappin" hope ya stickin-ta-track(check his profile)
Decent personal but this is used a lot...6/10
I make-it-better plus this kids as fake-as-pleather
Bitch ass get "ripped up quicker" than a break-up-letter
hahaha nice meta....9/10
Beatin this joke of a hoax without puttin up any effort
Its like my lines givin "paper cuts" cuz damn my text hurts
decent....not that hard of a punch though....6/10
i aim-for-ya-throat with neck shots that make this lame-nigga-choke
Kid your not even "real" a fuckin fable-at-most
Not feelin this....2/10
mista-cool DOPE sent you straight from bitch-ta-fool
For real give up rappin homie and stick-to-school
basic punch...coulda closed harder...5/10

Verse Score - 28/50

Okay your verse was hot til the last two bars...u fell of....u need sustainment....that fucked u up and thats why u lost....but u got mad potential too kid....good punches....keepin elevatin....

Vote - ideum

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121809
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I like this battle.Flow goes to IDEUM.but creativity and complexity goes to Dope Dilevery.But punches.......
Both fo you had nice personals.But I think DopeDilvery's punches hit harder this time.

Vote-DopeDilevery(vote in my battle)

one more and this battles closed.....................

id
flow:8/10 good flow
vocab:6/10 pretty basic could use work
originality:6/10 a few played lines but prettygood could use more creativity
punches:7/10 hit pretty good needs more personals

Dop
flow:6/10 ok didnt flow quite as smooth as ids
vocab:6/10 again needs work pretty basic
originality:7/10 u came more creative then id
punches:5/10didnt hit very hard like 2 c more personals

over all this was a pretty good battle id gets my vote his punches hit just a lil harder