Jay_Dogg vs STriniBonafide
 

10 - 15 lines
no crew, d/r or hate votes
honest votes only
you spit first dawg

gd luck peace

Vote on these two battles before I drop nah king....I definitely need votes but noone's voting
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120624
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121363

ill look at the battles while you are spittin son now lets get the show on the road

look man u r takin to long to spit so we can resume this shit tomoro bout the same time dawg peace

I let loose my harpoon-pull yuh in like scorpion cuz,
and its pure fire when I finish you, I spit fire when I does//
whose this Jay-walking, gay-talking, limp-flow-spitting-puerile blimp
even if it was your first name...ya still won't be called "pimp"// (Check profile
ya flow-s wired like a puppet... so I'm hired to stop it,
y'all know my rhymes are heavy, can't help but to drop it//
shots fire indescriminate, your demise is all but imminent
and I don't use heat-seekers...would be suicide in a statement//
I quote a note meaningful..."Picture means a thousand words"...//
although your 'dis' plate-seems- full, I read a gay dogg trying to be heard while he's more stoned than a quarry he hurries to drop his sh*t....// (his signature picture)
even if u wear an iron panty you'd still get licked//
quick to drop lyrics that you've soldered and hacked...
irrelevant shit goes back to 8-tracks and MJ black,
mack daddies, Tupac alive and furry kangol hats...//
shit couldn't keep me from sleeping if I was an insomniac//

After Ive skimmed your epistle I will surely crave a prozac,
and would only backtrack to read back if I have a fetish for crap//
clap back like Ja Rule... I don't care....yo rhymes are wack...,
while u eat dick as a rule...eatin pussies is my attack//

STriniBonafide and no guy he wouldnt ride, bitch aint got no pride/
what yo name about anyway son, you just tryin to be wide/
playa hatin preachin like a nun, whip out ma tommy gun/
blow you to kingdum kung, hit you in the balls so hard you'd think a bell rung/
ST...GP....whatever, just a mother fuckin G.I.M.P, still sittin on santas knee/
still sendin letters to the fat pedo, please santa what ya got for me?/
mother fucker aint got no flow, surprised he made a show/
compared to him i look like a pro, but this is almost done im bout to go/
so ill drop the beat pass the mic, thats it third strike/
you out the game didnt even win the frame, shits so lame/
slowly climbin to fame, first was the thunder now the rain/
now its done never to happen again/

Come on vote y'all....uppin for votes...come on vote

What ta fuck StriniBonaFide???don't u read PM or bitch slapped anymore.I been callin you out for some time now.I can't vote in this,cause strini might call it a hate vote.

Uppin this fo votes...fellas this aint even got one vote yet...not even a dr one...what's the problem

come on all ya all lets get some votes on this shit.......

this was aight but not the best battle i seen so i'm a break it down simple like

flow
this goes to jay cuz his verse was easier to read and i cud really get into it.
structure
jay again, he used the basic square structure but strini, sum of ure lines were short then long makin it hard to get into it
punches
this one i'm a have to give to strini cuz he had a little more creativity in his lines, his punches just hit harder than jay's cuz jay's were mainly al basic in this spit
opener
this one goin to strini to cuz he used a clever little MK line and jay just spat sumthin basic
closer
both were weak but i'm a give it to jay cuz strini used that ja rule clap back shit that i've heard already, more than once.

OVERALL
a tight battle but my vote is gonna have to swing to strini basically cuz even tho i cud get into jay's flow strini hit wit harder punches and showed just a little more creativity in his spit, jay u just need to stop spittin basic, u cud try what i do, spit a few different styles until u find one that works 4 u

VOTE - STRINIBONAFIDE

thanx man uppin for more votes

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Uppin for some votes

VOTE ON THIS BATTLE WITH A WELL EXPLAINED VOTE.....IM'A HIT THIS UP RIGHT NOW THO
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121649

STRINBONFIDE-took this...punches was better...to me punches win battles...jay doggs...punches was lil kiddy rhymes...very kiddy...ur structure was ight....ur flow wasnt that great...overall punches was weak....and to me none of yall had it that great no line left me with an OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO just was more like aww damn....but u both did ur thing and i respect both yall for trying....

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121649 (vote on it)

cheers for the honest vote dawg. we need more votes on this to get it finished Honest votes only

Uppin for more votes come on guys n gals lets get this shit finished

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jay dogg that was great you were neally both evenly mayched but think you pulled dis and ripped him up, well done. The other guy needs more creativity similies and metas to make hims flow powerful. Good battle.

Uppin for votes

nice battle, STriniBonafide you had nic emultiples at the begining of your verse but kind of got off subject.Jay nice punchez and multiples. it wasn't your best battle i've seen better. step it up and elavate next time. STriniBonafide you would have won if your verse was a little shorter and easy to read.

vote=Jay_Dogg

What subject? My subject was to dis my opponent and I never got off that subject. And what are multiples...I know of multis. We need a minimum voter IQ level on this sh*t. A complete breakdown would be nice.

yeah come on lets have some more well explained votes

uppin......

uppin

Uppin fo votes ppl
HIt up this one quick...I need these closed

I will have to go with Bonafide in this battle
I think he barely edged this out in a evenly matched battle
not much for me to explain here because both of you was so evenly matched
this was a good battle
keep elevating both of yall
Vbonafide
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121587
yo can yall hit this shit up with a vote

aight
 

aight it was close but strini 'whatever the fuck the rest of your crazy ass fuckin name is' ya spit a multi driven verse and threw a lil too much vocab in it that didnt fit well but it was aight, ya had some nice wordplay and some solid shit i had ta think about, was gonna vote against you till i read it again, cause kryo voted for ya n i didnt seem why n he seems ta be ma favorite voter tonight cuz i'm FUCKED UP, but i read it till i under stood it n shit like this stood out
BAD-whose this Jay-walking, gay-talking, limp-flow-spitting-puerile blimp
even if it was your first name...ya still won't be called "pimp"
-After Ive skimmed your epistle I will surely crave a prozac
GOOD-quick to drop lyrics that you've soldered and hacked...
irrelevant shit goes back to 8-tracks and MJ black,
mack daddies, Tupac alive and furry kangol hats...//
shit couldn't keep me from sleeping if I was an insomniac
-and would only backtrack to read back if I have a fetish for crap//
opener n closer were nothin special

jay dogg- my bad yo u almost got another vote, u had punches u spit somewhere between an aight and solid level, no real creativity or wordplay that stood out though i liked how the other cat tried out mad shit n some of it worked for him, u spit a kinda generic style i wasnt feelin and the strini's grew on me after readin it a couple times so he got the vote

v. strini, it kinda sounds like a pasta or somethin... fetucinni? the bonifide noodle, someone should make a punch out of that, anyway i'm out

uppin lets get this finished like strinin said we need this closed

by the way dawg this was a good battle

peace

OVERALL
a tight battle but my vote is gonna have to swing to strini basically cuz even tho i cud get into jay's flow strini hit wit harder punches and showed just a little more creativity in his spit, jay u just need to stop spittin basic, u cud try what i do, spit a few different styles until u find one that works 4 u

VOTE - STRINIBONAFIDE[/QUOTE]
I agree with what he said, the punches was nice and creative, but like we said. The vote stands.