plustwo vs. Killa Poizen
 

aight u no the rules:

no feeding
no d/r
no crew votes
no h8 votes

ill spit first

good luck

checkin in.

you try to talk to me but all you say is shit//
you dont mean nothing to me not even a bit//
i float like a butterfly sting like a bee//
this is where i rip you for trying to test me//

yo check it...

watch me show how shit you are//
fucked up bitched, down ripped apart//
for real, havin an mc fight//
i role i flow, watch me blast da mic//
i slide so smooth//
boy im da best//
watch me move//
slide right to left//
so u know it homes//
damn you heard//
fucked 'n' choked//
cause im the king of the word.

yo plustwo is the ultimate combo//
i make your rhymes sound more like a convo//
dawg u aint gonna win so u may aswell go//
shit... i dont no y u battlin this is a straight k.o//
u aint no nigga u a wannabe wigga//
when u read these rhymes you may aswell figure//
that this battle wasnt meant for you//
i just got 1 more thing to say before im through//
aight check it... this freestyle is dope
plz plz plz... don't choke

aight hurry up wiv dis im off for bout 30 mins ill be back on i want to see ya lyrics

Yo you may sting like a bee, but can you see,
i'm a mean ass mc who will rip u apart,
stab you in the chest and take out ur heart,
they call me y.poizen, they also call me slick,
don't even get me started on your puny ass dick,
son dyke, you betta take a hike, before u know it,
your yard is gonna be covered in spikes,
i'll take out my 9,turn you around and unload on ur spine,
on the mike i spit whats real, you the type of shit i have for a side meal,
whats the deal, i'm a speedin rocket, got a 12 inch blade in my pocket,
i aint scared to stick it in ur elbow socket and leave you to bleed,
a joint is what a need, some green to get me lean,
u think that this shit is hard, u should see me when i mean,
thinkin ur the shit, u'll go down in on hit,
on hit and one punch, i'll have you for lunch,
take ur head and shove it in a vice,
crush your fukin headpiece and overdose you on ice,
anyway, i would to go on foreva but i'll spread u on bread like butter,
on the tpo i'll sprinkle some sugar and go for a vacation with you mother!!!

aigt dat was good now we needs votes...

uppin for votes!!!

hit this up http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119532 and I will return the fav on this battle.. thx

aight i jus saw 1 of ya battles n u ripped dat guy apart

damn u need to have 150 posts to vote n i dont have that much. sorry dawg but can u still vote on dis 1 cos we need votes badly

yo hit this one up then http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119323 only need 10 posts... then I wll hit this up

aight ill vote now i need to get more votes aswell peepz so get votin on here

unfair
 

this battle unfair coz u only voted coz he voted 4 u

what ya meen he asked me to vote in his battle then he vote in this battle whats unfair about that??

this battle was weaka s hell. niether one of you showed true skill. but if i had to give the battle to anyone of you it would be Poizen because his structure was better and his lines were longer. plust your lines were to tiny. but allin all keep writting nb's.

vote=k.p.

i dropped a honest vote make sure you do the same:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=114044

IMA DROP AN HONEST VOTES

I gotta give this battle to Killa becuase he had more/better punches, plus you flowed well and had some good lines but you didnt even throw many punches, try to throw more of those in there next time and maybe some personals ya know?.. say something about your oppent. Vote- Killa

aight thnx for ya votes... i think killa has got this 1 i didnt really no what to put cos it was ma furst battle n all.

yo hit up my battle wit afterword i'll droppa vote after that thanx yo... link in da sig

uppin for votes!! comeon peepz this battle has bin goin on for long enough

uppin for votes!!! we need votes for this battle its bin goin on for ages!!!

uppin for votes people, i will repay the favour!!!

yo plustwo... I voted on this battle so go back to my battle with General and vote.. and drop a link for this battle... and Hood will hit it up

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122983

aight but how do u put links up like dat cos votres r needed on dis battle.

you just take the link from the address bar and you copy and paste it .. and then press quick reply

shit i don't wanna vote cuz none i realy liked so i aint gonna lie and choose a fake winner but advice is come harder and longer da shit wass too short and weak....stay up both of u's one....

aight thx general hood its nice to see someone who is truthfull cheers

yo check it i got to give this to Killa- Kats flow was better- he had better and more
punches-P you didnt even throw many punches and when you did they were weak so
you might want to work on that and makin your lines my complex -other than that your shit flowed an struc was aight

Vote=Killa

drop an honest vote on this

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123016

Killer tookthis one because he had better punches and better structure. Plustwo wasn't bad, especailly for a first battle, but he's got to put in more punches and make the disses personal.

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...238#post1274238

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122892 return the favour

Opener- Killa
Flow- Killa
Punches- Killa
Personals- Killa
Multi's-None really to think of
Complexity- Both very herbish keep battle'n though
Mettas- None
Finisher-Killa
Overall- This was a pretty basic battle +2 you need to elivate and throw punches!! You didn't even challenge him with punches, you just talked yourself up the whole time
Vote- Killa

Droppin a vote
 

Im agreeing on this except Plustwo did have an aight rhythm to his verse. I kinda like the way he broke it down but unfortunately to me it werent enough to give him a win, Sorry dawg but vote Killa :thumbup: