FlOw InTeLLiGeNt Vs. Nevadat
 

aiight......

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or 3-0 KO
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yo Flow how do u change da thing dat sayz New To Rb Flyweight Light Weight that shit how do u change it??

Checkin in..................................i got chu homie

mixxed to change it u need 5 wins and 250 posts and then u gotta om strobe and tell him u want to upgrade your account

had to drop my verse now only got 30 mins before i gotta go to work check it....


im complex..more wordplay than confusion in his text//
i'll let loose and use boots to leave contusions on ya chest//
severly i'll slay ya sentences cause a homicide investigation//
be mindful of who you're facin..i'll leave eyes and anus adjacent//
but nevadat lets stick to tha facts..i stay twistin ya back//
treat ya spine like cocaine habbits..and stay addicted to crack//
double up this thug wit uppercuts thats rockin ya neck//
knockin the left side of ya jaw up to the top of ya head//
as far as disses go...they're gay please make them end//
cause u stay under the weather..especially when its rainin men//

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Listen...How do you flow intelligent wit no intelligence?/
Your flows irrelevent Like Tryin to fit clothes on an elephant/

I smell A bitch You gone to need the rest of your dudes/
Cuz your flows sweet eat ya up like recipe foods/

your sexual Choice is havin sex wit ya boys/
Givin neck in the royce wit the tech to his groin/

Let Slugs "Blow his mind" In a second he moist/
Like penetration Try to cover pain wit sexual noise/

Fuck Him Plus Her Present Before and after/
Let the gun "cock" and "pop" him like he was born a basterd/

he a snappertwat Flow like a Snapper what...?/
He after nuts Cross-dress jus to grab his butt/

Thank god imma crook ...imma problem sho'/
Drop bombs On flow Like saddam And Bush/

Serve him somthing sick Leave him cocked in the bed/
Give him a black jacket where zipper stop at ya head/

nice shyt fam uppin ~1~

Weak battle here.Nevadat,you had a really nice opener.The rest was meh.But flow,I saw nutin good in ur verse cept the closer.Nevadat also had the batter flow.So I'm a give this to Nevadat.

Vote-Nevadat

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can we get sum more votes please its appreciated.......

Still uppin on this ya'll......................................

damn good battle u2 never the less it was eeked out by flow he had it all together nevadat at times your shit was fire but you put urself out my mna very nice job both of ya holla vote on any tonyself battles ya like be good ......One!

yo this battle was raw as fuck on both ends. they both had good punches here and there.


BREAKDOWN

FLOW INTELLIGENT
wow he had some crazy ass shit. his multis were off the chain the flow was aight, structure was good, metas were hot as fuck. nice fuckin drop.

NEVADAT
very very good opener and closer but thats bout it. the flow wasnt to good cuz the lines were to long. some of the rhymes were simpla and the line bout "butts" was very kiddy a little weak man coulda came harder.


VOTE-FLOW INTELLIGENT

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Flow got this Nev u were just to weak he hgot u with Punches and complexity

Flow=6/10
Nev=3.5/10

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ok heres the review:

FLOW INTELLIGENT:in my mind,your shit was rocking,you had a solid verse,barely any flaws,flow was good,so was everything else.
best line:im complex..more wordplay than confusion in his text//
i'll let loose and use boots to leave contusions on ya chest//
worst line: N/A
overall:6/10.above average

NEVADAT: not too bad,good flow,but some of your stuff barely rhymed,unless you have a special pronunciacion for them,which you might,but i couldnt rhyme some lines such as:your sexual Choice is havin sex wit ya boys/
Givin neck in the royce wit the tech to his groin/
see what i mean?
best line:this was a toughie considering nothing rhymed but i found this which was average and OK.
Serve him somthing sick Leave him cocked in the bed/
Give him a black jacket where zipper stop at ya head/
worst line:Thank god imma crook ...imma problem sho'/
Drop bombs On flow Like saddam And Bush/
this obviously doesnt rhyme.whered you get dis from?
overall:4/10.crap

VOTE: Flow Intelligent

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Nice battle......
FLow-Everything was put together..structure and all
nice vocab and plus very metaphores...also I liked ya similies..
very understandable structure was easy and I liked it

Nevadat-You was good also....Few hard punches and a few weak
FLow had a lil more betta then ya though...you was tight with it
nie structure......nice similies and metas keep elevatin dog aight
you dont need to work on nothing becuz ya have what ya need to have

v/Flows