MaRVOLOUSJ1009 vs MCelmersglue*pleez vote*
 

aight umm 10-20 lines....VOTE EXPLAINED OR ITS GON GET DEADED...umm u gota hour da drop dogg or u lose....check in first

Alright, I'm going to get educated on you,..

Yo, you think you're marvelous but after this you'll just be jealous.
You may think you're good but I'm fuckin' lyrically ambidextrious.

Your too illiterate for me to be considerate, and too wack for me to hold back.
Your flow makes me irate like a computers slow bitrate, I'll upload a wordplay virus attack because it's efficiency you lack.

Man you think you're hard by your location, when you're from Queens, New York.
You should stick by your occupation, showing your dick to pre-teens, and running from the "pork".

Marvin', throw in your mic, take off the drag make-up and go back to school,
Because you look like a dyke with your meat taped-up and that's just cruel.

For the record you might want a thesaurus to find a word to describe how you're feeling after the battle.
Get a damn phone book, find a doctor, and start the healing after I brand your ass like a cattle.

Speaking of, you're just like a cow metaphorically speaking.
You have bitch tits and the stuff you spit is always reaking. *pinches his nose*

So the next time you're near a farm, why don't you stay there.
The cows can't rhyme to school you and they always play fair.

Besides you could have fun without any interferance from me.
Then the farmer could ask, "You ever seen Deliverance M.V.?"

u done got dis vet vex*mad*,since u really think u gon win lets bet-
i could stretch tecs,since u wanna be a "whiteboy" dez "beams" on ya face a really leave u a "red kneck"-

u cant get in a click u fail with crews,callin me iliterate? who da hell is u-
ya pops use da "cum" use left u "sticky" datz y u call ya self "MC elmersglue"-

im provin u is fake,but u dumb dude dat sat in da class sayin 2+2 was 8-
but its 4 and dat a be gun i'll be shootin thru ya face,wait-
he's da fagget dat wore tight pants jump rope and hoola hoop & skate-
ya moms told me she was gon name u "white out" y? cuzz u was a "mistake"-

str8 up u suck man,u racist bitch dont get put in a box & blue tux fam-
he probly wont show he gota go with his dad 2 a meetin 4 da klu klux klan-

marvolousjay1009 aint nobody hott as dunn,im known 4 popin guns-
u pussy ya first option's run,ima tell u dis 1 "time" dude "watch" ya tongue-
be4 i send a couple dudes da rob ya fukkin mother 4 ya college fund-

elmer's he's a dunny dis bitch is scary,his girl ugly even da bitch is scary-
so now im iliterate cuzz i dont live in da suburbs and study a dictionary???-


if u call yaself a real rapper u should stop,but da clappin of da glok-
a take his hat off of his top,and put dis "CRACKER IN A BOX"-

bitch!!!...say some racist shit muthafukka GON...

OKAY PPL PLEEZ VOTE ON DIS SHIT...no free postin just vote

i liked this line:
Yo, you think you're marvelous but after this you'll just be jealous.
You may think you're good but I'm fuckin' lyrically ambidextrious.
that was mad dope. i vote for mcelmersglue.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121293

I gotta go with glue as well.He had the better flow by far.The punches were way better as well.Marvelous,that 2+2 thing is played out since the eighties.The rest was meh.The only good line was that one bout white out.But other than that,glue had u pinned.

Vote-GLUE

Uppin' for some votes on this battle,...let's get it over with

I'm just uppin' once again to get some votes for this battle

IMa give this to marvelous he had HARD ASSS PUNCHES!!!!!
mc yo shit was hard but just not ass hard as marvelous
that pretty much all i can say yall catz are pretty good just keep up da elevatin

Vote= Marvelous

OHHH YEAH VOTE ON MY BATTLE HERES THE LINK (Dont sleep on dis i voted on yallz)

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121024

You're an idiot Puerto, how are you able to even read Marvelous' spit?
You make me effin' sick.

LMAOOOO OH MY GOD....let me chill da first vote dont count so datz nothin can we get some real voter's

how he get a vote with that verse lmaooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo hell naw

lmaoooo thank u dunn nun of his bar's ryhmed dunn but i guess since im marvjay niggaz gon vote against me

i feal you everyone know you sick just hate an d/r votes

Wow you illiterate imbecile, you can barely read your spit must less tell if it rhymed, do you even know what rhyming or flow is? Evidently not if you said I didn't have it. Man don't start bitchin' just because I schooled you.

IMO elmer had this match won.. heres further explanation

Elmer:
flow:7/10
Rhymes:8/10
Punches:7/10

Marvel
flow:7/10
Rhymes:8/10
punches:6/10

Close match... keep up this shit guys.. props to both

uppin for some more votes to end this battle

lmaooooooo punches???? get da fukk out of here.....

Ok marv took this no doubt wtf r u all thinken he was punchin harder more complex and better flow

Marv=7.5/10
Mc=6.5/10

Uppppppppppppppiiiiiiiinn......................... ............vote!!!

flow-marv...He had some good rhythm and stuff I was feelin

structure-Elm....Easy and simple

hard punches-Mar..He came hard with some hard punches....Come ill some weak

Vocab-marv...NIce vocab

Need to work on-work on floqs .....keep elevatin...for both

Elm-2/5
Marv-3/5
Vote/Marv Return the favor will ya in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121863

tight battle

FLOW
this definitely goes to marv cuz i was feelin his flow more and his verse had more rhythm to it than MC's probly down to the fact that marv had better structure
STRUCTURE
like i sadi, it goes to marv purely becuz his shit was kept more together than MC's who had shit differnet lengths too much.
PUNCHES
this one was hard to call becuz both had hard throwin punches. i give this too marv cuz i felt that he had a little more power behind his. mc threw sum nice punches and showed sum gud creativity and gud wordplay in his spit, but i still felt that marv's had more in them, plus marv showed better use with multis and sum nice personals.
Best line of the battle:
u cant get in a click u fail with crews,callin me iliterate? who da hell is u-
ya pops use da "cum" use left u "sticky" datz y u call ya self "MC elmersglue"-
THAT SHIT WAS FUNNY!!!

Vote - Marv.

return tha favour with honest votes on my battle wit Relic
link is in the sig.
4get L.I cuz he aint spit yet!!

NO I didnt forget to post my vote.....check it.....I voted man

The stupidest people in the world, I've met in the past week on this board. Marv' the only way you could even get votes is if you got your friends to vote on this because you can't even understand your typing.

aight,mcelmersglue.......that name is gay,but ur raps..they aint much better..nothin really stood out.......
marv,ur opener and the whiteout line took it.........................

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

lmaooo aww man yo look at all da bullshit votes dis corny ass nigga got...aneway uppin pleez vote rite

aight once again niggaz aint votin....rite now on da front lines its like 20 member's can sombody pleez vote so dis shit could close...drop links do whuteva just give an honest vote and explain it

MCELMERSGLUE:not too bad,you had some good flow and disses i think.you had some really good lines and you merked dis kid in my mind
best line:Yo, you think you're marvelous but after this you'll just be jealous.
You may think you're good but I'm fuckin' lyrically ambidextrious.
worst line:none really i liked it all
overall:7/10.very good.
MARVOLOUS:you werent at the height of mcelmer but you had some ok material and some crappy material.you had some aiight
flow,but you didnt have as good stuff as mc.
best line:str8 up u suck man,u racist bitch dont get put in a box & blue tux fam-
he probly wont show he gota go with his dad 2 a meetin 4 da klu klux klan-
im not sure if hes racist or if hes part of the kkk but he spit before you did so this was unecessary,but good nonetheless.
worst line:u done got dis vet vex*mad*,since u really think u gon win lets bet-
i could stretch tecs,since u wanna be a "whiteboy" dez "beams" on ya face a really leave u a "red kneck"-
this obviously was the shittiest line here today.bet and redneck barely rhyme.
overall:5/10.average

VOTE:MCELMERSGLUE

LETS BET- and RED KNECK-...dont ryhme?????? lmaoooo umm aight uppin 4 more votes

i voted for marv just thought his was slightly more sharm than elm
flow was real solid from both but again marv put it on em a bit more
never the less i think both should keep strivin its why we are here
big ups on honest feedback! VOTE-MARV