the Wu dynasty king vs. N-sight
 

10-20 lines
no d/r
no crew
no hate
votes
you spit first.

aiight...checkin in...when is this verse due? Imma drop mine in a few

they due in30 min yo................................

Nucca..tha fuck u 'rappin' 'cept last night's meal?
A net-star switch to D-S-L to 'speed up ya deal'
Why put ur head on this battle platform and risk ya neck?
I collect debts..and your 'emcee-eye' gets a dis-connect
Pointin' Tecs to foreheads, nucca u 'spill your thoughts'
Turned out to be a nigga in drag..so i gotta kill this broad
Your skill is shit..semantically, you're an ant to me
This call out wasn't to be taken romantically
A diss from me ain't a kiss from me..ur history
Forgotten like senility..u ain't 'well' like wishes, B
You stay on my stiff-one like you 'been gay' dawg
U can't win this battle cuz you been played dawg


1

yo im a newbie on this but i got vets challenging me.
it must be my karma, but no worries ill merked this guy see.
this guy doesnt understand the true essence of rappin.
sorry dog u have no future in rhymes, but talent in actin.
deep down he wants to shock the world but all he can pick up is static.
right now the only way you can beat me is by using a automatic.
you singed up to rapbattles thinking yo ass real hard.
im a basketball fan not football but ill still punt yo ass real far.
n-sight sounds like your getting raped.
cause your name sounds like a rip off of netscape.
for you this battle really blows.
cause the tiger of jing dong wins this one as the story goes.

the tiger ready for votes#1

yo the tiger of jing dong is ready to win thes uppin for votes.

uppin for votes

sombody vote for this please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin dis battle for votes

dang yo...anybody vote in this place?

holla

yo a breakdown nice n simple 4 ya

flow - sight
structure - tie
punches - sight
opener - sight
closer - tie
OVERALL
my vote goes to sight cuz i felt his verse a bit more and he came with harder punches.
both y'all need 2 elevate a lot, start usin multis and better personals and shit
try to get sum originality to cuz ure just spittin basic at the mo
also, leave the homo jokes cuz every1 will tell u they have been played

sumthin i forgot

i voted on ure shit so return tha favour u know
my links are in my sig.

aiight 1-0 my way

uppin for votes

holla atcha boyye

uppin

uppin this post for some more votes

holla atcha boyee

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121594

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121425

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121492

vote in any one


Okay,both of were pretty whack.Ur rhymes were too simple.Add some complexity to it.
And flow was bad by both of u.I got to go to Sun with this one.Some of Sun's lines actually sounded llike a diss.

Vote-Sun

uppin for votes

Okay.. this battle was..ight..

Sunjian:
flow:8/10
creativity:6/10
punches:7/10

N:sight:
flow:8/10
creativity:6/10
punches:6/10


I liked yo startin sun jian.. its a nice starter for a nubbie

thanks yo uppin for votes do it for me and ill return the favor

Iight This Is How It Went Down
Sun
Flow=8
Punches=7
Open=8
Close=6

N-sight
Flow=5
Punces=6
Open=7
Close=6


I Think That Sun Was Better In This Battle So He Gets My Vote


Dont Forget To Vote In My Battle

^^^ dat vote is hardly explain yo...

nigga jus put down some random #s...lol...didn't even add em up at the end

uppin for votes

uppin dis battle for more votes

holla atcha boyee

1

uppin

uppin for votes yo...holla atcha boyee

for real yo

1

aiyo

uppin dis battle for votes

holla atcha boyee

1

uppin fo votes

uppin this post for some more votes

holla atcha boyee

aight...this is my breakdown...

flow - jian
structure - tie
punches - jian
opener - sight
closer - tie

aight..simply..jian had better punch....sight...you had good punchs but the punch that jian used
"""""""""""this guy doesnt understand the true essence of rappin.
sorry dog u have no future in rhymes, but talent in actin"""""""

that killed you right there

vote: Jian

It's all down to personal taste, but I'd pick N-Sight out of the two
Summary breakdown
N-Sight

Flow=8
Punches=7
Open=6
Close=6

Sun

Flow=6
Punches=7
Open=4
Close=6

The standout lines (or partial lines) IMO were
"your 'emcee eye' gets a dis-connect" - liked the wordplay
"semantically, you're an ant to me/ This call out wasn't to be taken romantically"
You had a few others in there, too.

"this guy doesnt understand the true essence of rappin.
sorry dog u have no future in rhymes, but talent in actin" - that WAS a good line.

But despite this, N-Sight gets my vote, but that's no slight on Sun...

uppin one more vote yall

come yall uppin need one more vote

NSIGHT: not very good,flow was aiight,but not total shit.work and youll get there.
best line:Why put ur head on this battle platform and risk ya neck?
I collect debts..and your 'emcee-eye' gets a dis-connect
that wasnt the best thing ever but it wasnt the worst either.
worst line:You stay on my stiff-one like you 'been gay' dawg
U can't win this battle cuz you been played dawg
this line sucked.i hate it.
overall:5.5/10.a bit above average

SUNJIAN:way beyyer than the other dude,you might be a newb but you rocked his ass.flow was good,rhymes were good.nothing to say.
best line:deep down he wants to shock the world but all he can pick up is static.
right now the only way you can beat me is by using a automatic.
that was hot! really good.
worst line:your first one,i didnt feel it at all
overall:7/10.good

VOTE:SUNJIAN