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virt 04-29-04 08:27 PM

creaTivitie vs phat mic
 
10-20 lines
no d/r
no prewritten
no recycled
check in befor you drop

virt 04-29-04 08:29 PM

ok check in

virt 04-29-04 08:51 PM

ok if you dont get it
Dj emcee = Creativitie

Benzino- The biggest "bitch" in the industry. He has a son who also raps

Klu Klux Klan- A group of white supremists

Daclassic was in his crew till Dj left

PSA - Pot Somkers America (old rb crew)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Hello bitchs
*picks the mic up...looks around...*

You better believe I'm wild; with "Nice" lyrics but you'll "See~no~smile"
& you'll get beat down for being a "Son of a Bitch" like "Benzino's~child"

He'll get handed an "L"; despite that he fights as hard~as~he~can
It's kinda like "He'd Only Get A Clue"(Klu) if he was "Part~Of~The~Klan"

Let's get it popping-B, if you lived in my house you wouldn't be as hot-as-me
And you're garbage-see; Don't believe since ya Mobb's Deep you can own a Prodigy

I'll watch you lay-and-choke as the wetness of the spit takes you from flames-to-smoke
I blame-you-loke, call PSA pothead employers; We used ya resume-to-smoke

I'll smash this dude, wordz dispersin while he's blurtin his worst rhymes
DJ, would have to "Menage with Watches" to "reproduce" a verse on time!

You getting-the-L-yo and ya threads for pussies like women's-apparel
You used to roll with Daclassic but you left so you're at the wrong end-of-the-barrel

This Aint ya style, you'll never be apart of the fam like adopted kids
n' seriously you only seein your ill track is when mines on top of it

You barely getting to learn-this-course-dog; I'm schooling you, just earn-ya-forced-fall
I'll burn-ya-fort-dog; Trust you'll never CD(see D) like a nerd's-report-card

*Drops the mic and leaves...He doesn't need to know who won*

Killuminatic 04-30-04 01:13 AM

I wanna know what would happen if u cats were on the block and couldnt explain your shit after everyline. Thats the worst part about this fuckin site. Dick ridin dont piss me off near as much

Daclassic 04-30-04 04:41 PM

phat mic where do you get your sh.t. or where do you copy and paste, this site is about to become a waste. when you were disaster master you didnt flow with the same taste.

virt 04-30-04 06:57 PM

i don't flow the same now cuz every time i do flow like i did, i lose... im just trying new sh.t now. and can you guys stop free posting untill the battle is over. much props

Status 05-01-04 11:43 PM

Hello bitchs
*logs on his computer.....starts typing..lol*

phat mic is da prime example of y this site gets put in shame//
failed to suceed as DISASTERMASTER so dicided to change ur name//
but dat doesnt change who u are...and wont full fill ur dreams//
cuz your style is still worn out like da knee part on ur moms jeans//
just cuz u fuck fat gurls doesnt mean your doin big things//
i elevated pass your level so my rymes are flyn over~ya//
claims hes phat mic when he really got MICro phobia//
see your dealin wit the son of god, creativitie aka jesus//
lrycally fucked up ur gimmick and left you wit vanerial deises//
my punchlines hitten your face leavin ya def in mutation//
have u FACIN a loss, now u EYE TO EYE wit a critical devistation//
im brinin destruction to the alphabet so these kids cant speak//
MURDEROUSE METHODS is here to devour and conquer over da weak//

Status 05-01-04 11:44 PM

sorry it took so long.....i dont have a cpu at home so i couldnt spit....

Enygma 05-02-04 09:30 AM

Not that bad of a battle.....

Phat Mic came OK at the beginning but the intro threw the whole thing off. It was gay and you need to just spit.....start out with somethin like AYO CHECK IT or some shit like that, but what you had was very gay. The outro was too. There wasn't really that much between them either. Flow was off due to some very stretched bars.

CreaTivitie was OK. I know I've seen better from him but this wasn't that bad. Punches were hittin in a few spots and the flow was alright......overall a solid verse.....

Vote - CreaTivitie

Status 05-03-04 01:33 PM

uppin for votes...........#2

virt 05-04-04 06:53 PM

uppin

Status 05-06-04 03:18 PM

can we get some more votes...........c'mon kids...

virt 05-07-04 10:19 AM

uppin for the things called "votes"

virt 05-08-04 10:33 AM

god dam upping...

GKillaz05 05-08-04 12:15 PM

Phat Mic - good spit man, you had some good punches goin on there... and your flow was on target.. your multi's were hott too...

best Line - You better believe I'm wild; with "Nice" lyrics but you'll "See~no~smile"
& you'll get beat down for being a "Son of a Bitch" like "Benzino's~child" (LMAO)

Worst Line - This Aint ya style, you'll never be apart of the fam like adopted kids
n' seriously you only seein your ill track is when mines on top of it

creaTivitie - Great spit man, you had hardcore flow... funny ass punches.. and overall great verse...

Best Line - but dat doesnt change who u are...and wont full fill ur dreams//
cuz your style is still worn out like da knee part on ur moms jeans//

Worst Line - NONE

OVERALL - Great battle but I gotta give this to CreaT for better flow and way better punches.. phat had better multi's but his punches were not as hard as C's.. next time use some awesome punches and you will take this guy.

VOTE - CreaTivitie

RETURN THE Fav
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122983

Status 05-10-04 03:07 PM

uppin for votes..........................................

-Zone Out- 05-10-04 03:12 PM

this battle was alright
v/creativite for the better verse
he had more solid punches
phat mic
all your punches were played and the explainations were gay
the people are not stupid
you dont have to explain them
anyway
creativite this
good job
both of you elevate
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123431
hit that up

CounTREE Jay 05-10-04 04:03 PM

Flow: Well, Phat Mic had a coupla ill-stretched bars, Creative wins this category, but I wasn't feelin' the one part where he rhymed three in a row.
Vocab:Creative's was better
Punches: Phat, That KKK line was fuckin' killa (and I'm black by the way, well at least half, so don't hate)
Multis: Phat, but mostly through usin' stretched bars
Personals:Creative, DisasterMaster bar, not hard, but effective
Opener: about even, the benzino shit was aight, But Creative came wit a personal, of the bat, always good
Closer: Creative. Coulda been betta, but Phat had a madd stretched one

Fav Bars:

Phat Mic

He'll get handed an "L"; despite that he fights as hard~as~he~can
It's kinda like "He'd Only Get A Clue"(Klu) if he was "Part~Of~The~Klan"

Best bar in the battle, hands down.

Creative

but dat doesnt change who u are...and wont full fill ur dreams//
cuz your style is still worn out like da knee part on ur moms jeans//

Just liked it

Phat, you need to stop stretchin' your lines so much, and you'll be more effective.

Vote/ Creative

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 05-10-04 04:29 PM

You better believe I'm wild; with "Nice" lyrics but you'll "See~no~smile"
& you'll get beat down for being a "Son of a Bitch" like "Benzino's~child"
^Shit Aint Even Feelin The Opener!!' .. 3/10

He'll get handed an "L"; despite that he fights as hard~as~he~can
It's kinda like "He'd Only Get A Clue"(Klu) if he was "Part~Of~The~Klan"
^Nice Punch' I Like That 10/10

I'll watch you lay-and-choke as the wetness of the spit takes you from flames-to-smoke
I blame-you-loke, call PSA pothead employers; We used ya resume-to-smoke
^Was Quite Lame' Anybody Will Agree With Me!!! 2/10

You getting-the-L-yo and ya threads for pussies like women's-apparel
You used to roll with Daclassic but you left so you're at the wrong end-of-the-barrel
^Ok...?? 3/10

You barely getting to learn-this-course-dog; I'm schooling you, just earn-ya-forced-fall
I'll burn-ya-fort-dog; Trust you'll never CD(see D) like a nerd's-report-card
^Weak Closer' ... 4/10!!

Alright Switch The Flipt Real Quick!!

Checckit Checck CreaTiviTie:

phat mic is da prime example of y this site gets put in shame//
failed to suceed as DISASTERMASTER so dicided to change ur name//
^Should Of Thought Up Something Better' ..!! Wasnt A Bad Opener .. But Wasnt Nothing Great Either 6/10

i elevated pass your level so my rymes are flyn over~ya//
claims hes phat mic when he really got MICro phobia//
^Nice Punchline 9/10 ... - Heated

my punchlines hitten your face leavin ya def in mutation//
have u FACIN a loss, now u EYE TO EYE wit a critical devistation//
^Once Again Nice PunchLine' . Right There 9/10

im brinin destruction to the alphabet so these kids cant speak//
MURDEROUSE METHODS is here to devour and conquer over da weak//
^Despite The Lack Of Closer...!! Nice 'Crew Management' There.. But Aint Nothing Against Phat Mic So You Feel Off Short' .. Playa 6/10 ....!!!!

Overall... CreaTiviTie Takes This One' ...!!

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. Crew votes not allowed

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 05-10-04 06:09 PM

Lmfao' ..!! Ah Ha I Guess IM D/R Ya CreaTivitie' ..!! Anyways

Upppppppin This Shit For My Boi's..!!

Phat Mic & Creativitie' ..!!


Quit Sleepin On This Shit' Yall.. & Drop Some Honest Votes'...!!


Let Me Be The First To Say I Was Not "D'R" My Vote..!!! (Nuff Said)

virt 05-10-04 06:14 PM

no your in his crew...

Status 05-11-04 04:33 PM

uppin for the last vote................................

Shadows edge 05-11-04 04:40 PM

Vote on my battle with marv.. just one vote.. its in Elevated.. I will hit this battle up...

Shadows edge 05-11-04 05:37 PM

This battle kinda sucked... creative your only good line was that microphobia one.. I mean ooh your jesus. who cares. Phat, your structure is fucked as hell, and its annoying when your verse splits the bars like that, it doesn't flow very well. On the bright side, you at least came with some semi-original stuff... semi-wordplay. Stop explaining your punches, that's herbish. And stop using punches that need to be explained.

v/ Phat mic or whatever the fuck he's calling himself these days.

Status 05-12-04 11:09 AM

uppin for votes.................................

Status 05-13-04 03:19 PM

some body end this.........uppin for votes

Raphael 05-14-04 05:49 PM

aight check it

creativitie
flow:7/10
wordusage:6/10
vocab:6/10
creativitie:7/10
punches:6/10
opener:6/10
closer:5/10
overall:dont feel like counting

comment:quit battling noobs

fav/line:fat girl one

Phat mic:
flow:4/10 (streched)
wordusage:8/10
vocab:5/10
creativitie:7/10
punches:5/10
opener:4/10
closer:5/10
overall:do i have to count

comment: you lines are streched like rosannes range of sexuality

fav/line:nothin

v/creativitie


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