nature-vs-mentalist
 

first to 4 votes
3-o K.O
dont care how many bars (max=25)
no crew votes
go ahead and spit

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(sorry bout da dots every time i try 2 reply it say it is too short have to be 50 characters or long

PS wat do i do to fix it or wateva

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wit eyes closed i could pick u out a line up
cuz when u breath i smell pure wet vagina
u sick cuz u fucked in africa wit no rubberz
im sick cuz i used battle crews wit no brothaz
im rich u poor its said that we both veterans
but u still suprised by my rocks like when the flinstones met the jetson
nature i hate to do it
but i have to teach the computer a lesson by pullin u through it
and bruisin ur brain by beatin wit ur spinal chord
u my slave now like saddam to george

wow that was one of the weakest non flowin verse i ever wrote talk about a waste

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my fault son i did not know u already spit
i hit u up tomorrow

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man my falt son i keep havin not time to write a post it seems like everytime i get on da computer i got to get off
P.S i ll try to hit u up tommorow
:huh:

aight im not even goin to spit long on dis chump

nigga i hope u know u funcin wit a god
and u already told me that im funcin wit a slub
i put u in da middle of no where cuz ur cell phone is sayin roam
ur rhymes is hung up cuz u not receving a dial tone
ur rhymes is fucked up
nigga im gunned up
im wit ur mama and ur aunt so im also bunned up
and mentalist if u run up on me u really see u funcin wit a G O D


my ryhme is short cuz i had to rush


PS plz vote

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uppin...................

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hey mentalist my rhyme was not dat great either dawg

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uppin fo votes plz vote and explain people i would do it fo yall

ok

nature...

work on structure and punches.... like your fucked up your gunned up then go into a long ass line that aint gonna work for you... man and thorw in punches not just retarted stuff here and there.

mentalist...

your verse about the vagina is retarted...that might be good if thats what his breath smells like other wise you win...

win mentalist

Yo, Mentalists was just plain better, Nature you really need to get better Vocab, and learn how to put it together, so the Winner is Mentalist

um i kno dat yall have already voted but can yall put it in the poll so we could close this damn thing

Nature had some boring lines, a bit plain punches. You had some good ideas though
Mentalist, I didn't really get that 'when you breath' line, but I'm still gonna vote for your verse


Vote: mentalist

(Sorry can't vote; "You need to have dont posts before you can vote for someone in this battle.")

wit eyes closed i could pick u out a line up
cuz when u breath i smell pure wet vagina


^^ not quite sure how thats suppose to be a diss to him

u sick cuz u fucked in africa wit no rubberz
im sick cuz i used battle crews wit no brothaz


^^ WTF...is dat supposed to mean


and bruisin ur brain by beatin wit ur spinal chord
u my slave now like saddam to george

^^ weak closer

nigga i hope u know u funcin wit a god
and u already told me that im funcin wit a slub

^ OMG...it can't get any wacker


ur rhymes is fucked up
nigga im gunned up


^^^ LMAO..WTF!?!?..ur "gunned up"...dat means u shot up...WACK NESS personified!

OMG...this is prolly the wackest battle I've ever seen in my entire life.

Vote: NO ONE

lol

4 real tho...give it to Ment- for being slightly better..and that's not sayin much

UGH

uppin fo votes plz help close this damn battle its so fuckin annoyin

Well 2 newbs,so this is a weak battle.
Nature-You had no right to talk about Mentalist's verse cause ur's sucked too.Terrible flow and weak punches.
Best line-nigga i hope u know u funcin wit a god
and u already told me that im funcin wit a slub
Worst line-everything else

Mentalist-bad flow,weak punches.that shit bout breath is whack.If his breath smells like vagina,isn't that good....cause it mean he been licking pussy.
Best line-and bruisin ur brain by beatin wit ur spinal chord
u my slave now like saddam to george
Worst line-wit eyes closed i could pick u out a line up
cuz when u breath i smell pure wet vagina

Vote-Mentalist
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123302
^^^ drop a vote in my battle

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You need to have dont posts before you can vote for someone in this battle.

^^^ this message comes up whener I try to vote.....why is that?

uppin fo mo vote plz end dis shit ..................

mental won this because he had better structure, punches and just better verse overall. I thought the other verse didn't flow very well nad have nasty punchlines for murkin to be offended or even take you serious. mental won dis quite easerly with his rymes n punches. No hard feelings

metal won this because he had better structure, punches and just better verse overall. I thought the other verse didn't flow very well nad had nasty punchlines for it to be offended or evem take you serious. mental won dis quite easerly with his rymes n punches. No hard feelings

Not much to judge on here.... Metalist had da better flow so he gets my vote. Good job to both doe. And congrats to whoever wins... Plz take time to return da favor by voting on my battles (at least 1) below...

y is this fuckin thread still here sum1 please end this shit mods or sum1 get this off my damn shit