lungs Vs. Shady1132 (holla)
 

10-15 lines
no d/r or d/s
no hate votes
no prewritting :shoot:

checccccccccccccccccccckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkin iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!1

they say why Lungs, cause im L.yiricly U.ntamed and N.ever G.ettin S.lain
take bitches like shady down hysterically lyricaly fuckin up there brain
i know why u text battle cause your high pitched voice
your 14, wut r tryin to win kids choice
going against me is like going against oj's machetti
cause i verbal chop u up like im mak'n confetti
u should cherish your one win cause here comes another L
my words are so hot youll think your burn'n in hell
shady posers gettin murder and stabbed this young
cause im clos'n and lock'n ur casket with my tounge
tie u up and hang you wtih ur own fuck'n lung

Nigga you must call urself lungs.......like you talk-in-tongues/
I'd cut ur troat so deep,you'd replace ur missing nut with ur adom apple/
My rhymes are so lethal....it feels worse than a Warren Sapp football tackle/
So what if I'm fourteen,I'll still kill u faster than 2+2 on a calculator machine/
You beating me is like Mike Piazza catching A-Rod stealing a base/
It won't happen,u always gon be late.........and u'll never be laid/
So work on ur rhymes,instead of pleasing ur mom,by giving her "vitamin C"/
Leave that shit to me,cause I got a tall orange tree,that she can suck on/
You got nutin she can sit upon,so you giving sex is nutin but a yawn/
So,get a strap on....cause an orgasim is sumtin u'll neva come upon/

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yo dat battle was kinda tight. im gonna give it to lungs because his punch lines were hotter. i like the machetti/confetti line. shady came at him with the last 2 lines but lungs was constant throughout.

Vote= Lungs

uppin

iight this is how it went down

shady1132
flow=5/10
punches=6/10
vocab=4/10
metas=5/10
total=20/40

lungs
flow=8/10
punches=7/10
vocab=6/10
metas=5/10
total=26/40


vote=lungs i was feeling his rap more


vote in my T12U3 K1LlA vs AuthenTiK

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shady...bad structure..But I think your flows came herder than
Lungs....Not complexity for both....Nice vocab..Very understandable.
Nice everything both had....But I think shady had him by a tad....

v/Shady
Return the favor against me vs...True aight for hookin ya up..Its in front lines

uppin

K im gonna have to break it down like this,

Flow: Lungs,
Punches Lungs (shady you just keep repeating urself wiv all the mam sex thing, i didnt like it)
Opener: Shady
Closer: Lungs

Overall: Lungs

flow lungs
punches shady
opener shady
closer shady
lung work on vocab structure and creativity
shady wok on vocab structure and creativity
ok verse from both but i was feelin shadys a lil more

Punches- Lungs
Flow- Tie
Enjoyment- Lungs
Creativity- Shady
Originality- Shady
Vocab- Lungs

Vote- Lungs this was a ok battle... i felt lungs punches alot more than shady's... both flows were pretty much even but i give this to lungs for better punches

weak battle .. aint feeling anything but lungs did come harder in my poinions and had one betetr line


they say why Lungs, cause im L.yiricly U.ntamed and N.ever G.ettin S.lain
take bitches like shady down hysterically lyricaly fuckin up there brain

rest were both wack man u need mad elveation/