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CoIIaB vs. TonySelf
20 lines max.
quick text'cee. no crew, no d/r. blind. |
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well here we go its time to battle now you shit outta luck//
step in the wring see what i bring hit you like a mack truck/ see heres the thing you might just sting with your rymes u aint tough// but me indeed ull soon see how i get quite rough// call u collab betta yet a cab my styles gettin you drunk// u couldn t last u just a fag go to your closet punk// see mess with me indeed u see me bring the mysery and pain// i look at you and laugh cuz you look like a bitch with braids// pull down your pants pull up your skirt whatever keeps ya sane// cuz sanity is needed when ever you fuck with me in the ring// i slap the taste up out ya mouth and yes its cummin out white // it aint your teeth its just from me when u blew me last nite// just like your bitch did consume thats right// that bitches pussy was tight // and quite delicious i like to bad when ya gettin it back it wont be the same size// so let me end this like i meant it im the illest to ignite// and you so splendid thanks for sendin me a chance to take your life! |
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these words originally posted by 'tony himself'. shows he needs help- i fret this yougin will never learn on time. its crime to not set this dreamer straight in line.... ________________________________ first i pray to God you can just comprehend my elaboration. ill collaborate RB nation, to the state of newb soul foundation. its like freight train to a staion- essential to empower itself. listen up mr. Tony S. Elf- lets start simple... water is ice when it melts. catch my words so far? well mark the first check off. starting where we left off. i might be too complex for yor brain to knowledge. yor' lookin at these words, thinkin to urself " how'm i spose to make it to college" im like kanye, 'cept im spittin through a fire- my entire house flamed to ash in san diego- but nothing stops real writers. im a liar- see theres yor' first lesson to be learned in this forum. be prepared for fakes, catch 'em on mistake and record 'em. this verse is straight boredum. but im slappin myself awake. yor' publically viewed records at stake. you couldnt elevate if you stepped on an escalator. some body alert Ton's radar- this is like love between a boat and a sailor. you'd go down with tha ship no question. but you defeatin me? you even keying yor' verse - is what im testin..... |
not bad my man not bad but a lil bit jumbled there by your format good time tho 4 real good luck wit dem votes!hollaaaaaa
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yo can we get some votes on this shit....................
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Yo We Need Votes If You Want Any Closed Out U Gotta Give First Cmon Help Close This Thang........
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uppen for some votes yall cmon help us end this ...............damn
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uppin # 1................................................
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flow:tony
punches:tony metas:coiiab wordplay:coiiab This was a close battle... but imo punches and flow is wut wins a battle.. so i will have to go with tony |
thats a bullshit vote.
your all gonna get fucked. DIRTY SOUTH MAFIA FUCK YOU AND FUCK DA ARMY. YOUR ALL DICKRIDING BITCHES. ON MY BATTLE VS 20 GRAND PEOPLE FROM 20 GRANDS CREW AND DIRTY SOUTH AFRICA ARE PRETTY MUCH THE ONLY PEOPLE WHO VOTED. AND YOU ALL KNOW I REALLY MERKED HIS BITCH ASS. BUT YOU VOTED FOR HIM CAUSE YOU WERE EITHER IN HIS CREW, OR HE HAD CONNECTIONS WIT HIM. THATS FFFUUUCCCKKKIIINNNGGG BBBUUULLLSSSHHHIIITTT!!! |
And Thats The Same Shit Your Doing To Collab!!!
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Collab 5/10-You had the structure and vocab...and stuff
tony 7/10-you had the harder punches...Nice battle for both Tony did come harder with the punches...Return the favor in this thread will ya http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...606#post1260606 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
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uppin please favors will be returned .......honest feedback please.
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CoIIab im giving this to you, ur flow was hott all the multis , you didnt have too many punches but the multis and flow made up for it
Tony.... yo shit was hott i think you had the structure side of the battle and punches Keep elevatin yall !!! Vote= CoIIab |
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ComeON YALL 5 FUCKIN VOTES AINT HARD RIGHT DAMN I RETURN FAVORS ALL THE TIME SO HOLLA BACK.....................WUN
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uppin........hoping for good feedback yall...............................
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both these verse musta been slapped together in seconds...tony..i aint feelin verses that are just boastin about i fucked ur chick last night.........u needa stay away from that..........
collab....the first few lines,i dont even know what u were talkin about or what was the purpose.........ur whole verse was all over the place man.....u need to have ideas connect..both verses were weak..but tony,he stuck to tellin a story...n u were all over the place...i dont really know on what else to judge it on...cuz neither one of u had any punches or anything......collab u ahd one line about escalator...but that is played as hell.......so both yall need to step it up but for this battle vote is for tony |
tony....u had sum decent punches and a couple hot hard hittin ones....fix ya structre....dont use //....too newbieish....flow was aight....work on wordplay too....jus elevate cuz ull get betta....
collab....now u had alot of weak punches....elevate there....flow wasnt that great....use personals and meta's.....go to tutorials and learn how to do ish.... Vote - tony for the more elevated verse |
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damn you cant uppin- 10 times man.. is that a DQ??
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Tony wins. like your style and your choice of poetic rhyming patterns and matrixes.
classic shakespeare smackdown |
The Breakdown.........
Punches: TONY! Flow: Tony Multis:CoIIab personals: CoIIab But in the end i think that Tony had more punches and that is what kills opponents and makes them look bad so im gonna go with tony........ YALL KEEP ELEVATING YALL BOTH KOO THOUGH! Vote=Tony AYY I DROPPED ONE ON YALLZ BATTLE NOW HIT THIS UP......whoever drops on my battles i return favors when you PM me a link to your battles but you gotta drop a vote on my open battles first GOOD LOOKIN PEEPS HERES A LINK http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...6944post1266944 |
tonyself- good flow and nice creativity 7/10
CoIIab - i didnt like ur structure.. ur flow was less than average 5/10 Winner TonySelf... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
TonySelf took dis because of da Punches Much respect 2 coIIab
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