Mad Dog vs. TonySelf
 

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No d/r hatin or crew votes
Till 12pm tomorrow

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TonySelf...ima put u in my surgical shelf/
Cut u up, deal u out & shuffle yourself/
Coz lets be honest Tony...U aint a Soprano/
Runnin home all the time...when im droppin an elbow/
U got this gangsta idea all wrong...it aint about backin down/
Now for attemptin a callout...ima send u down South/
Like the park...ima kill u like Kenny...but u be such a dumbass/
You'll keep comin back for more...u riddled up carcass/
Im swift like an eagle...huntin my prey/
And ima seek Tony out...u gonna die today/
Im flash like a photographer...quick to snap/
And i'll beat u like Christopher Reeves...1 hell of a broken back/
And neck i'll flex till u can see ur own ass/
Jus so u can watch me kick it...it'll be hard to put u in a cast/
How the fuck did u get here Self...did u win at an audition?/
Winnin this is like Mission Impossible...its an impossible mission/

this flow game remains the same all scribbles and scratch
in slow mo i show the globe that your a fake ass cat
simply pussy but dont push me man you just might collapse
cuz im the hottest thing like if we could bring tupac back
only time you been arrested had a beer an needed a quik bed
so you told the cops cmere man and ill suck your fuckin dickhead
ooops my bad man but the shit just leeked
kinda like those diapers you been sportin for over a week
shit
you just a studio bitch tryin to recall others pain
you dont have none of your own except from bathroom stalls from givin brains
reality show for you would be the california court case
so we can see the look on you face when they say
nope ......sorry.........you still cant marry that gay
when i say imma blast at this little half rat
he prolly thinkin of me jackin it in his face he likes that
just a worthless
but surely dont deserve this
if i ruled this site ide deleted ya ass on purpose
So lemme conclude that this proves you cant handle me
keep tryin get bruises on something other than your ass son please

lets get some cats voting in here how my gonna vote if no one votes on our shit give and take my dawgs hollaaaaa

yo we need yall to vote on this cmon if yall aint votin on us dont expect us to vote on you holla.....

Yo We Need Votes If You Want Any Closed Out U Gotta Give First Cmon Help Close This Thang........

can yall help us end this shit plz.....................

Uppin 4 votes #1..................................HOLLA HOLLA

Mad dogg....had a good flow, structure was pretty tight too. But his punches were weak, seemed to be gloating mo than hitting actual degrading punches....Dint real feel his verse to much...

Tony....had th better layout and verse structure seemed a lil betetr than 'mad',

this flow game remains the same all scribbles and scratch
in slow mo i show the globe that your a fake ass cat

i mean thats not even a too hard hitting punch, but at least its direct to the guys he'd dissing...na mean...

nMad ya need to build punches up to realte to the bars last line, otherwise theyu dont connect naw mwan???

Vote:Tony....verse had the betetr experience hind it......

Return the favour.....this flow game remains the same all scribbles and scratch
in slow mo i show the globe that your a fake ass cat

Return tha favour.......
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120603

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Mad Dogg-very weak punches.And I mean really weak.They were too simple.Flow was off as well.You need to work on it.

TonySelf-Weak opener.You had a couple of stretched lines in there,which is bad.Flow waas off,just like Mad Dogg.Punches were bad as well.

Overall-weak battle.Both of you had weak verses.Mad dogg had the better structure becasue he didn't have stretched lines.Flow &punches were bad by both of you.

Vote-Mad Dogg

Kinda close heres how i broke it down

Mad=5.5/10
Tony=6/10
I felt Tony came harder and he had some decent punches Mad was a little Faded he used some old stuff...anyway good battle

Uppin honost votes plz its in sig

pucnhes - tony
multis - tony
enjoyment - tony
opener - both
closer - toney
overall - tony.

Hott battle but weak punches.....I Tony had some harder punches though..
Both had structure and not to complexy....And easy to read

Structure-Both

Punches-TOny self.....He came harder than his opponent.,,,Each did
good though

Overall-Tony self.....He had punches that was harder and better....

Return the favor Tony against me and born2kill just need one more vote

uppin......thx for the votes yall.........................

um i vote for dogg because he had a better flow,opener,closing,everything pretty much.yeah vote dogg

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mad dog had a very good flow, and rymed well, aswell as multies. An all rounder but you lacked in one thing creativity. If you add this in your rap you'd be more successful but still think you clithed this quite easerly. Tony had original and lacked for his flows to back up. I vote mad dog

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uppin please favors will be returned .......honest feedback please

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VOTE ON THIS BATTLE AND ILL HITCHUR BATTLE UP CUZ CATZ AINT VOTIN ON MY SHIT AND IVE VOTED ON THEIRS , IF YOU WANT A VOTE HOOK MA BATTLE UP HERES THE LINK
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maddog is had a bettter flow came strong and hard
maddog yo rhymes good but perfect work on yo
punches then do much better aight

tonyself good rhymes he was a good rapper u came
hard and at tha beginning u good but u need to work
on yo flows and structure

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this is gonna be an honest vote - Mad Dog has his issues with me, but that's HIS problem, Tony voted on me, so I'ma do likewise...

Summary
Opener - TonySelf
Punches - TonySelf
Multis - TonySelf
Creativity - TonySelf
Closer - TonySelf
Overall - speaks for itself, don't it?

Breakdown
A problem that MadDog has yet to acknowledge is that rap has to do more than just 'kind of' rhyme - having lyrics that make sense also helps. Subject matter between rhyming lines, particularly openers failed him big time here.
'Elbow' and 'Soprano' do not rhyme.. okay they may sould a little bit similar, but you were pushing your luck on that one. But as for 'down' and 'South', HELL NO!!!
Your flow structure is far too simple and there is very little outstanding about it - "I'm flash like a photographer"???? "I'm swift like an eagle"????? Is this your 1st rap??? Hey, I'm not hatin', just critiqueing. And your closing lyric was like something you dug out of the toilet. The plus side for you is that you got heart, you don't give up in the face of adversity.

Tony, opner was cool, the bringing Tupac back line was alrite, even if the subject matter was a lil played out
Okay thru the middle, consistent, if not overwhelming, but picked up over the last 4 lines and finished well.

Tony gets my vote.

Na ima let that 1 go but if bigneks votes that'll be scandellous but fuck it i aint complaining uppin

You're gonna let that one go? Oh, how very kind of you!!!!!

I gave an honest vote - ain't no "letting 1 go" required up in here!

But I'ma break from tradition and say that the lyric you dropped on the UK page was better than most other stuff you've posted....... BUT it's a UK Hip Hop page - stop f*cking that up, man. Drop your lryics in the appropriate place.

I'm here for the sake of Hip Hop - you do you and I'll do me (go on, resist making a gay or masturbation joke, you can do it - I know you have it in you.....)

Ha i AM U.K Pro don't u get it? thats y i went there anyway honest vote thats cool dont worry ur next battle i'll HONESTLY vote ok.

You ARE UK???? Hmm, that's a very 'interesting' comment....... but f*ck it, self belief ain't bad, but when you get hurt you gotta learn to take it on the chin and be a man. In my humble opinion, you've been hurt, mortally wounded even a number of times but haven't been man enough to accept it. The only worthwhile battle between me and you would be face to face witha crowd and a beat - winner takes all (the glory), straight off da dome shyt. As far as I'm concerned, anything esle would be pointless. I would battle US cats because they are in the US. You're on the outskirts of London - ain't no excuse. I love Hip Hop, and I know when my games on, Hip Hop don't ever let me down. I'm trying to get the best outta this site - but it's becoming more and more apparent that not everybody respects the music the way I do. BigNeks ain't my bitch, dawg, he's my brother in the same army.

The Music is My Bitch, but too many fakes are trying to prostitute her. Be a part of the solution, not the problem.

Fuck u dawg i love hip hop infact why we even battlin on here set it up tomorrow and we'll finish this and oh yeah u won...ur battle thank me after i knock u flat on that mutha fuckin back HA HA HA