TonySelf vs DopeDelivary
 

no crews, haters, riders, or bitches
explained votes only
no feedin/ recyclin ect..ect...

may the best man win

check in ................................how many bars?20 max?

o yea i forgot to say... 10-12 lines

you must be stupid is that why they call ya dope delivery//
dont you know you messin with god,son i do this religiuosly//
see people use the tony soprano reference in they rymes//
but got it twisted that soprano is the sound of your lines//
with a please no please god not on more time//
you'de have a better chance of maken em dance with raps from a mime//
so as you see no need to swear man i just dont feel em//
plus ide never do that, specially around you lil children//
so before you emplore you might have won this war//
i settle scores break down doors and rob grocery stores//
while you play with toy soldiers and lil johnny from next door//
only rap is from your lips while you knees on the floor//

.........yo you gonna drop soon? wsup?.................

rippin this scrub.. this battle you should just be givin it up
TONY idea of "findin a soulmate's" searchin for internet love

easily break in half ya simple style that makes me laugh
your raps show your fake and wack kid im just displayin the facts

if battlin' was ya career youd be 26 goin into retirement
R'B' has "certain standards" and you just dont meet the requirments

you winnin this battle please kid no one even considered it
your flows must of crossed the border cuz there treated like immigrants

claimin you got skills but you havent even started the basics
this kids filled with more disabilities than handicapped parkin spaces

vote this yall cmon.................................

Yo We Need Votes If You Want Any Closed Out U Gotta Give First Cmon Help Close This Thang........

Can we get some votes in here... i dropped mad votes on battle and everybodys sleepin on us.... come on TEXTEES

need some voterz yall get a favor return a favor.................

k then,

Id say that fistly this batle was pretty good well done.

Opener: Both (very good!)
CLoser: Both (again)
Flow: Tony (but very close)

Now it gets to the most important bit which was punches. Id have to go for Tony on this one too.

Now thats done my overall vote is Tony. good batle guys!

Now vote on mine pls its Revell vs BOMBSHELLkilla

opener tony
flow tie
personals tie
closer dope
vocab tie
tony work on personals a lil more and structure a lil
dope same thing as tony
good battle from both im gonna give it 2 dope

Thanx Boyz uppin this

Flow:dope
metas:tony
punches:dope
wordplay:dope

My vote goes to dope for the flow, punches, and wordplay.. both keep elevating

thx man .... uppin this 2-0 DOPE

uppin this like a crackhead snortin speed and binging on caffeene

uppin thx alot for the honesty yall.............................

structure-Dope....Nice structure easy to read
flows-tony...You came hard but weak.....
balance-tony..Everything was balanced and was about him
vocab-Tony he had some good vocab
complexity-Dope..complexity...:(
understandable-both was understandabe
HArd punches-Tony...Cane harder than dope but sortof weak
weak punches-dope...Very weak
Link-Return the favor for me votin in here http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...606#post1260606

v/tony harder punches 6/10 DOPE-3/10

hmmm,i got to give this battle to tonyslef for ill flow,opener dat was sweet...4/10,closer dat was hot 3/10.tony dominated dis cause da otha guy had a couple of lines didnt even rhyme,so my vote goes to tony.

uppin .......thx for feedback yallllll......................

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uppin please favors will be returned .......honest feedback please

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VOTE ON THIS BATTLE AND ILL HITCHUR BATTLE UP CUZ CATZ AINT VOTIN ON MY SHIT AND IVE VOTED ON THEIRS , IF YOU WANT A VOTE HOOK MA BATTLE UP HERES THE LINK
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122221

uppin............................................. ...........

aight im not gon write a story but ima explain my vote

opener-tony...dope give it up and computer do not ryhme
structure-a tie both u ya'll shit was good
punchlines-tony..cuzz nun of dope's word at da end of his line ryhme
wordplay-nun
personals-nun
enjoyed-tony...cuzz dope u had some good but ya words dont ryhme dunn u gota work on dat then u be good

my vote-tony

retunr dat favor ya'll link is in my sig

uppin need some feedback honest votes yalllllllllllllllllllll

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tonyself won
 

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dopedelivery is wack and tonyself is wack
if dope can't win with tonyself
then with me?? u lost boy

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

yo, tonyself that's mistake
forget it
u better than dope
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was a pretty decent battle, here's breakdown:

opener-tony...Nice shit, you started out strong
structure-tie, y'all could have done better
punchlines-tony..dope's shit wasn't rhyming to good
wordplay-didn't really see any
personals-None present
Closer- tony...wasn't as strong as opener but still better that his
Vote: Tony

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Thanks For All The Feedback Yall This Was A Good Battle Dont Sleep

Return the favour,
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122892

Tony

Flow:5/10
Wordplay:5/10
vocabulary:4/10
punches:5/10
creativity:6/10
opener:7/10
closer:6/10

overall:38/70


Dope Delivery

Flow:5/10
Wordplay:6/10
vocabulary:6/10
punches:8/10
creativity:6/10
opener:6/10
closer:8/10

overall:45/70


Vote-dope

I'm a give this one to dope for overall rhyme ability especially flow i really liked how it was going

Tony Tony//

Tony

Punches 7/10


Dope Delivary

6/10

Tony U Had Some Good Flowz And Good Pucnches

Dope// U Were Good Too Homie// I Liked Yo Flowz Man// But Yo Punches Homie// U Had Good Ones In Der// Hit Harder Next Time Homie