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Kryogenix vs. TonySelf
okay
you said quick battle lets make it 10 lines no cheatin bullshit |
check in................................................ ...........
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me too, im typin my verse now
hurry up and drop before you go to so-called work |
So you wanna battle right and you call yourself an artist//
from what i heard you a herb and use ur ass as a target// u like the creamy fillin they call you twinky from all the dischargin// so ryme quik b4 my dick goes right up in ya// you vs me is like jet vs an arial glider// seen me spread my wings when i see the bitch and fly up inside her// you just a second rate clown not makin it out the gate// im first an goal you 4 th down clown dont make a mistake// talkin all your shit now its time i push it back// so maybe you did win this battle man..... you' ve been searchin for that// you need some toilet paper for that mouth son....... |
yo gonna drop or what?.............................
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stfu, and give me a chance
If rap skills was money, then you'll have the least amount of wealth |
ooops..nvm that^
You must dont know battlin me will severely damage your health............. If rap skills was money, then you'll have the least amount of wealth.......... This rapper claims he's real, but we all know that he's a phoney............... Cause I'll leave you backwards..the way my-Self will merk Tony................ I'll lyrically kill this fag and destroy all the hopes and dreams he had......... Im not talkin about groups of people when I say my hits destroy the Mass. I'll leave this herb sonned and merked,just take a look at his face.............. Cause his whole family is Half Bitch and Half Gay like Will and Grace...... Im not on that gay shit, but my ryhmes will still leave you fuck'd............... Because your lyrics is all ass, like late night B.E.T. Uncut!...................... |
also, this line:
Im not talkin about groups of people when I say my hits destroy the Mass. means I will destroy his state he's from Massachusetts Mass and short for that.. |
merk merk merk merk merk is that enuff for ya ........yea my bad man takes alot of time to come up with weak shit .....
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keep explainin ur rymes man u need it ...............
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lol
we'll see............... ............................ |
This battle sucked hard ass. I just wasted 5 minutes reading it and refuse to poll vote. Thanks for explaining the mass line though.. rofl.
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Yo We Need Votes If You Want Any Closed Out U Gotta Give First Cmon Help Close This Thang........
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uppin this shit to get some votes
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yo dis be one weak ass battle
i aint gonna go into great detail on this battle cuz it dont deserve it FLOW - Kryo showed better flow but that probly cuz he put in better structure to his spit STRUCTURE - Kryo like i said before kryo had better structure, kept all his lines the same length PUNCHES - Kryo not much for punches, both hit weak but kryo was just a bit harder cuz i thought he had the only decent punch in the entire battle This rapper claims he's real, but we all know that he's a phoney............... Cause I'll leave you backwards..the way my-Self will merk Tony................ CREATIVITY - Kryo the best line in the battle which i already displayed was about the only creative line in there. everythin else was just weak as fuck and seriously kryo i expected better from u. OVERALL - Kryo overall a weak ass battle but kryo had the one decent line in the battle which is what took it for him, plus he had more flow and better structure. |
I didnt really try
because when he made the call-out, he said that he had to go to work so I key'd up a verse really fast so the battle can get started sorry guys thanks for the votes though uppin |
yo kryo won this i cant seem to get shit in text the way its comin in my head but never the less i aint goin nowhere and will be the illest in here with more practice typing
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uppin this shit for more votes
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uppin this shit for some votes
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Ima have to give this to Kryo he was more complex and came harder.
Kryo=6/10 Tony=4/10 |
Word Kryo came more bette rwith pucnhe stoo tony was weak in creativty wordplay and flow...
Kryo / 7/10 tony 3/10. |
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K.O. But I'll wait till 5 this is my first battle on relaunched Im just tryin to get in elevated lol @ this guy thinkin he can beat me |
lmaooooo@shadow.....word dis battle was madd week but fukk it let me vote
opener-kry structure-key...ton ya lines get short then long punchlines-nun lmaooo wordplay-nun creativity-kry.. personals-kry...da mass line enjoyed-kry....both of u niggaz need da step ya shit up man 4 real stop bein so basic spit some shit da make niggaz say oo nahmean my vote-kry http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122043 ^^^^my battle return da favor ya'll |
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rofl @ this |
tonyself won
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plain and simple Kryogenix won this battle his punchez and mutilplez were off the hook. nice punchez won this battle. if anybody votes for the otha cat yall crzy. Kryogenix tore it up with his verse. Don't get me wrong TOnySelf keep writting your verse wasn't that good but could have been better. nice try kid.
vote=Kryogenix |
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