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..ILL..*vs* T12u3 K1Lla
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no d/r no crew votes no hatin b4 or after battle 20 mins dead line so that means blind spit.. Check in after then time starts Check IN....... |
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Aight check it......
This Bitch is a dumbass I see why he took so long..... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121653 he spelled my fuckin name wrong This bitch is a Pycho he Think his battles goin to get him big.... But bitch Watch me becuz im about to put out the fire on ya sig.... Nose picker if he found a treasure he would eat it like if it was a bugger... IM dangerous becuz im goin to ripp ya so much you can call me Freddy Krauger The nigga is winnin by battlin newbs..To me hes a fuckin test..... When I get done you goin to need a replacement jaw like Kanye West... True Im nasty I would nutt on ya mom and she would tell you its frost... But nigga if ya think you ever go to stay winnin well ya just lost.... |
Ill let me kepp it real, your gangsta style won't work//
Your rhymes are so boring i didn't even read your whole verse// Ill I look at ya rhymez and i outta-laugh// nigga i drop so much bombs osama asked for my autograph// This phony is still on gay shit, I shouldn't turn my back// He might like it too much and think that Im wack// Yea Ill I Know U Got Hope// But Then U Woke Up And Said" Du Du Du Du Dats All Folks!"// Ill u rap like a fucking nazi// Nigga ur raps r more boring than yahtzee// Ill let me kepp it real, your gangsta style won't work// Your rhymes are so boring i didn't even read your whole verse// |
even though you went past the time limit...its aight....DOnt worry about it....
Nice battle though....Lets uppin for some vote.....Drop links and Ill return the favor..........If I dont tell A administrator..Aight... |
This Bitch is a dumbass I see why he took so long.....
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121653 he spelled my fuckin name wrong ^^^^^^^^ kinda hard to flow a link...lol Nose picker if he found a treasure he would eat it like if it was a bugger... IM dangerous becuz im goin to ripp ya so much you can call me Freddy Krauger ^^^^^^^^...played jus a bit This phony is still on gay shit, I shouldn't turn my back// He might like it too much and think that Im wack// ^^^ nah...not feelin it Ill let me kepp it real, your gangsta style won't work// Your rhymes are so boring i didn't even read your whole verse// ^^^ pretty good opener and closer...never seen someone use the same lines for both intereting... FLow Tie Rhymes True Punches True Vote: True...less played punches...but barely squeaked this one out Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
OMG I MESSED UP I SAID THE SAME VERSE TWICE ON AN ACCIDENT IT CAME TO MY HEAD TWICE SO I TYPED IT LOL!!! HERE IS THE REAL ONE
Ill let me kepp it real, your gangsta style won't work// Your rhymes are so boring i didn't even read your whole verse// Ill I look at ya rhymez and i outta-laugh// nigga i drop so much bombs osama asked for my autograph// This phony is still on gay shit, I shouldn't turn my back// He might like it too much and think that Im wack// Yea Ill I Know U Got Hope// But Then U Woke Up And Said" Du Du Du Du Dats All Folks!"// Ill u rap like a fucking nazi// Nigga ur raps r more boring than yahtzee// |
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omg ppl dont let this battle get slept on we need some votes going in this battle
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both had equal punches and both had 1 or 2 good lines.
Some of Ill's lines were a little long and didnt fit in, like the freddy krugar one. True won this one because it was a better flow, thats about it, but it was very close, the flow got u the win basically. Gj, kinda weak battle though. Vote True Killa |
weak battle really
the punches were weak from both playas cuz there was no creativity in them u just used sum basic stuff and y'all both need to elevate on that shit u both had aight structure and flow but true had better flow in his spit ill u really let ureself down cuz u didnt put much thought into it both y'all need to beef up ure punchlines and hit with personals and multis in ure spits more and u will go far u know. |
Yo I cant vote on this battle but yall drop an honest vote on this
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119092 |
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k then weak battle but hey who cares, both of you need to keep writing and gettin ur punches harder and keep ur flows goin.
opener: True closer: True flow: True ILL - you need to look at your punches and make sure that they work. True - Again, like ILL, you need to work on your punches although your flow was alot better. Just keep elevating and practisin. Total Vote : TRUE Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
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opener tie
flow kiklla vocab tie structure killa by a lil closer tie killa work on vocab and multis and structure a lil ill work on vocab multis personals and structure vote killa Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
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ill return the favor with a honest vote in your battle only..If you think im better in this battle....But its aight...if you think hes better....But if ya think im better and only vote for me ill return the faovr....Vote for him.....I wont sorry....But its all good if ya want to vote for him....This is not a thing to get voes..aight...Nice battle true...I think I really beat you
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yo killa your had a good opening structure was good and the punches were ok ive seen you do better.the only thing that made you win your flow was intact. well thats to me.
ill punches had me laughing and thats a good thing to please a king you had everything a mc would have. but your flow was off, keep evaluatin yo the WU king signing off. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
O Wut The Fuck Ppl If Ur Going To Vote Explain Ur Shit Cuz Now Its 2-0 When It Was 5-0 Cmon Ppl Hit The Votes
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I know that shit is gay.. when the other person gets a gay hatred vote they dont disqualify it.. but then they disqualify our votes.. bullshit
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Cmon Ppl Dont Sleep On This Battle U Vote An Honest Vote And I Will Return The Fava
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Uppin For Some Votes This Battle Was Over But Know Gay Call Back Plz Explain Votes Well
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True killa:
Ill let me kepp it real, your gangsta style won't work// Your rhymes are so boring i didn't even read your whole verse// -okay start Ill I look at ya rhymez and i outta-laugh// nigga i drop so much bombs osama asked for my autograph// -funny This phony is still on gay shit, I shouldn't turn my back// He might like it too much and think that Im wack// -nice punch okay killa had the consistent flow and kept wit it.. .ill.. u needa keep elevatin dogg.. ur startin wasnt good and neither was ur closer.. keep wit ur flow next time vote=killa |
iight thx for the vote ppl plz dont sleep on this great battle
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killa yo skills have improved and i mean alot you havent lost a battle yet.
flow was good not good enough. funny yo shit had me buggin. structure better than before. vocab. need to work on. ill yo shit was good too but not good enough to meet my standards flow better than his funny wasnt that funny to me structure need to work on vocab. need to work on alot. vote=killa |
uppin for some votes cmon dont sleep ppl wake up..
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This Bitch is a dumbass I see why he took so long.....
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121653 he spelled my fuckin name wrong [ you had a good idea here but this didnt flow together at all...could have hit alot harder] This bitch is a Pycho he Think his battles goin to get him big.... But bitch Watch me becuz im about to put out the fire on ya sig.... [weak punch, pretty simple] Nose picker if he found a treasure he would eat it like if it was a bugger... IM dangerous becuz im goin to ripp ya so much you can call me Freddy Krauger [weak.... what is a bugger?] The nigga is winnin by battlin newbs..To me hes a fuckin test..... When I get done you goin to need a replacement jaw like Kanye West... [ok i dont get this you say hes only winning battles with newbs... and hes actually giving u a test???? .... idunno] True Im nasty I would nutt on ya mom and she would tell you its frost... But nigga if ya think you ever go to stay winnin well ya just lost [weak closer... not even a punch] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Ill let me kepp it real, your gangsta style won't work// Your rhymes are so boring i didn't even read your whole verse// [ ok opener... ok punches too] Ill I look at ya rhymez and i outta-laugh// nigga i drop so much bombs osama asked for my autograph// [ kinda funny... osama lines are played tho] This phony is still on gay shit, I shouldn't turn my back// He might like it too much and think that Im wack// [pretty weak here coulda made it hit alot harder] Yea Ill I Know U Got Hope// But Then U Woke Up And Said" Du Du Du Du Dats All Folks!"// [ didnt really get this here??...] Ill u rap like a fucking nazi// Nigga ur raps r more boring than yahtzee// [ weak punch, off flow] Punches- True Flow- ILL Enjoyment- ILL Content- True Multies- True [only 1] Vocab- neither Structure- ILL VOTE- TrueKilla.... this was a pretty weak battle.... both need to elevate..... multies and wordplay will come with practice but true won this with a few better punches.... Your flow was really off tho... try evening up your lines.... Neither had vocab or much multies... ILL you killed with the flow but none of ya punches were really at him cept the kanye line but thats played like monkeybars at recess... I seen you come harder in other battles.... just keep at it |
Aiight, I think True Killa took this one. His punches weren't that great but they hit harder than Ill's. Both of your guys openers and closers wer eok. So you were tied there. In the voacab section, you both were weak. But I think Ill had a little better. Ill's flow was shaky, and Tru's was aiight, so he gets my voite.
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