Revell vs BOMBSHELLkilla
 

k man

10 lines,
no crew votes etc,
honest votes only
u spit first

why do i have to go first i called this and you p$$$# a@@ niggaz should go first

look man, i set up. u only jus came so just hurry up n spit!

hurry up n spit man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

listen you might want to give up on this task/
cause i only rap against mcs wit they head up out they A$$/
and i dont know why you tried lil nigga ill cut you up and bury you in pieces/
have yo a$$ lookin like the help me sign smiley faces/
dont know what came over you probaly hell or sex shows/
see they call me bombshell cause im ready to explode/
im already pissed cause i ask for a rapper not a bitch/
have yo ass talkin like that geek of that kanye west skit/
so dont piss me of or say shit thats gon make me mad/
cause you and all your fucking friends a end up in a bodybag/
bitch :shoot: :gfy:

damn whats takin you so long you stupidf$#%.............

so who be this guy they call bombshell killa,
you be worth shit so swivle on my finga,
cos you be here and then youll dissapear,
and reapear again, in hell n youll be like,
"hey wat the hell am i doin here" all i did was try and spit the mic',
but not even god can save u from me and didnt your mama say,
"the best part of you still dribblin down yo dads leg"
so now youve elarnt a brand new lesson,
never battle a guy whos a convicted felon,
cause now even thou u blew up BAM!,
it was me that lit the fuse and then i hit you WAM!

k now lets gett votin peeps

Uppin ................................................

yo so what crew you wit///////////////////////////

flow bomb
opener bomb
vocab tie
personals tie
closer bomb
bomb work on vocab personals and creativity
rev work on vocab structure flow and personals
both need elevation vote bomb

thanks man lets keep these polls coming...........

uppin lets get some votes ppl

uppin.

uppin uppin pls vote .................................

uppin how else we gonna get better if we dont know how we doin??

Bomb got it b/c he had more orig multis.and his overall flow was better.

Bomb=6.5/10
rev=4/10

uppin uppin uppin............................................. ................................

Revell - your shit was ok man had some good punches and the flow was good. the structure wasnt to bad eather

bamb - your shit was good but i wasnt feelin it cause of the $$ n shit man whats up you not aloud to swear???? it had a not to bad flow and structure though.

my vote goes to Revell cause he had harder punches and a better flow

uppin ............................ lets get in over wiv

Flow-Bomb
personals-evan
Punches-Bomb
nice battle but Bomb took it ..Up on votes in sig plz

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uppin............................................. ....

yo bombshell did nice he had a pretty good amount of personls Punches but structure was a lil off but for da rest u did good

As for u REVEL u did bad ur flow is Exseptable but u dint RHYME so thats kinda bad you where useing kiddie Words BAM WAM!! thats some oldschool CARTOON shit

Break down:
Revel

opener:3/10
closer: 4/10
rhymes:5/10
flow: 6/10
Structure:3/10
21/50 u need to ELAVATE SOn

Break Down:

BOmbshellkilla

opener: 6/10
Closer:6/10
Rhymes: 7/10
FLow:8/10
Structure:4/10
31/50 u iight nIGGa


You HOMIES will get better u kno it lol iight 1

VOTE:BOMB

hmmmmmmmmm,i got to give dis to bombshell whatever because his battle was by far superior with lines such as
im already pissed cause i ask for a rapper not a bitch/
have yo ass talkin like that geek of that kanye west skit/
even tho that wasnt the best line ever,it has a loose rhyme that was the best in his part.however,the rest of his thing barely rhymed.
for revell, i think he has to improve alot more because 40% of his shit didnt rhyme.but dont worry bortha youll get there.
vote: bombshellkilla or whatever his name is

flow = bomb
opener bomb
punches = bomb
vocab tie
personals tie
closer bomb
bom takes this on better punches and flow
pretyt much on sided