Deleon vs spiky2k8
 

rules are
no crew vote
no hater votes
no d/r
5 to 10 lines
u spit first

not mean to free post but Spiky Ill battle you also...Aight set it up or you want me too

u set it up first then ill spit first maybe
ight if its cool with you okay we'll do this
at 7:30 maybe
ight ..ILL..
BUT first i need to battle this guy'
first
first things first just be tonight

aight 7:25 it will be set up and then just drop...IF ya good you might have a
chance to join my crew

checkin in

what time is this due...............

Say dogg what time is this shit through??????????????

I Mean Due........................................

Kid you aint worth the beef, your played lines aint Hurtin-Me/
& you couldnt go pound for pound with UK's Currency/
Theres no need to 'Shout'- I'LL give 3 votes and Im not Urgent/
Because your verse is 'washed up' like your spittin Detergent/
Your Flirtin with death kid, Stop playin games your not hard-fuck/
Deleon-yeah im a Smash your face in and left you star-struck/
Your bars-suck & I would spit a personal about this nerd its true/
But first I have to find somebody thats even heard of you/
Faggot, your choosin men so Im forced to diminish this queer/
Cause around his house 'Bottoms up' doesn't mean to finish his beer/

yo line 6 should say leave you star struck........

drop your verse dogg

you going to spit spike or what???????????????????

man yo rhymes was childish that shit was senseless/
u comen at me but yo ass pennylees you got to
shop at payless/
this rap i'm spitn is more like armangon aint my
rap setn/
come on man yo weak i dont u shouldn't compeat
against me/
cant u see i aint no mediocre mc i'm bigest mc
that u will hear that will bring yo ass to tears
u stupid queer/
u stay yo ass at home caus i just might break
yo bone and stone yo ass/
after that i'm gone leave yo stupid ass in a
cass then fry yo ass/
be gon be gon caus i dont want to hurt to bad
to make mad/

peace


vote 4 me

need ya'll votes help me out
need ya'll votes
please yo vote will get u something
out of it just please

Spiky honestly is gettin Betta But Deleon came harder sorry/Keep rappin Spiky nice record by tha way keep it up

I voted honestly against yo battle i expect tha same
DA Solution vs. S.Carter vote honestly plz

uppin 4 votes
uppin 4 votes
uppin 4 votes
need yo votes

who ever vote against fuck ya'll
u die u go to hell and die
bunch of fuckers
just playin people

battle was pretty one sided....flow, structure not to mention punches....so itz easy to go with Delon pretty obvious win....

that currency line deleon??? wtf....the pounds weak??? nah it aint dawg Lol....

return tha favour or get slapped.........PeaZ

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120603

deleon got this 1

spiky your flow was off your lines was stretched and you didnt have very good punchs in this battle try workin on not stretchi nyour lines and comin with harder punchs like you have in your other battles just stay consistent

deleon opposite of spikys nice flow good structure and decent punchs not hit really hard either but it was a better flow an structure just work on consistent strong punchs and personals

THIS BATTLE WAS INCREDIBLY ONE-SIDED
PUNCHES:DELEON
OPEN:DELEON
FLOW:DELEON
STRUCTURE:DELEON
EVERYTHING WENT TO DELEON
FAV LINE:Theres no need to 'Shout'- I'LL give 3 votes and Im not Urgent/
Because your verse is 'washed up' like your spittin Detergent
SPIKY U NEED TO ELEVATE
VOTE:DELEON

yo gotta you gonna poll your vote???????????????????

Uppin............................................. ......

My Vote
 

Kid you aint worth the beef, your played lines aint Hurtin-Me/
& you couldnt go pound for pound with UK's Currency/
hahaha
Theres no need to 'Shout'- I'LL give 3 votes and Im not Urgent/
Because your verse is 'washed up' like your spittin Detergent/
nice
Your Flirtin with death kid, Stop playin games your not hard-fuck/
Deleon-yeah im a Smash your face in and left you star-struck/
aight
Your bars-suck & I would spit a personal about this nerd its true/
But first I have to find somebody thats even heard of you/
hahahahahahhaa
Faggot, your choosin men so Im forced to diminish this queer/
Cause around his house 'Bottoms up' doesn't mean to finish his beer/
nice

Your verse had me laughin....better than the otha spit i saw u in.....u had hot punches...funny as hell....u got a 8 out of 10....

man yo rhymes was childish that shit was senseless/
u comen at me but yo ass pennylees you got to
shop at payless/
gay
this rap i'm spitn is more like armangon aint my
rap setn/
come on man yo weak i dont u shouldn't compeat
against me/
blah
cant u see i aint no mediocre mc i'm bigest mc
that u will hear that will bring yo ass to tears
u stupid queer/
zzzz
u stay yo ass at home caus i just might break
yo bone and stone yo ass/
after that i'm gone leave yo stupid ass in a
cass then fry yo ass/
come on
be gon be gon caus i dont want to hurt to bad
to make mad/
gay

Your verse was horrible....go to tutorials and sleep over....cause u need tons of work.....

Vote DeLeon