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Pop it! (song, check it)
yo, I made this shit 2 days ago when I was bored. i gotta beat I used, I'll drop a link to it later. check it out:
(Chorus x2) I see my album at the store… I go over and I COP IT! I see niggas frontin’ wit me, I tell ‘em they betta WATCH IT! If they take a step closer, I take my GAT out and COCK IT! If they front a little more… then they’ll hear me POP IT! Everywhere I go, all the haters flood around They be sniffin’ up my trail, like a fuckin’ blood hound They wanna get me down, out, and away from this game They believe diminishin’ me, will bring them all the fame But what they don’t comprehend, is the difficulty of that task Tryin’ to kill me is like, tryin’ to jack off to Lance Bass It’s not possible, NOPE… nay, it can’t be done I’ll hit you from the back, not in the gay way, but wit a gun The way I shine over them, they prolly think I be the sun, yo If they got a problem wit me, I’ll shoot ‘em jus for fun, yo A click is what you’ll hear, when I take my GAT out and cock it If you don’t like what I say… then you’ll hear me pop it You can never stand tranquil, you always have to fidget You couldn’t make the front page, even if you fucked a midget Your rhymes are all wack, you won’t even admit that you spit it But jus like OJ Simpson, we all kno that you did it (Chorus x2) I see my album at the store… I go over and I COP IT! I see niggas frontin’ wit me, I tell ‘em they betta WATCH IT! If they take a step closer, I take my GAT out and COCK IT! If they front a little more… then they’ll hear me POP IT! Now, to all the niggas out there, that say they be the greatest You guessed wrong! You wouldn’t be missed if you went on a hiatus As a matter a’ fact… everyone thinks your rhymes are wack They be holdin’ up signs, that be sayin’, “Please, don’t come back” Please respect the crowd’s wishes, and get the hell outta here You spit like a frog. Now hop away… IT’S A LEAP YEAR!!! You always rap about… how you got a lotta money But you got none, YOU’RE IN DEBT!!! To me this shit is funny Me on the other hand… everybody loves me God is the only one, that they put above me I spit my rhymes so sick, biters don’t even try to catch them Released 2 lines, instead of a single, and still went platinum Me against you, dawg… PLEASE! That ain’t even a battle Jus flashin’ you my kicks, would be enough to get you rattled Black and red Adidas sneakers, and my OU fitted I come dressed to kill. The hospital is where you’ll be admitted (Chorus x2) I see my album at the store… I go over and I COP IT! I see niggas frontin’ wit me… I tell ‘em they betta WATCH IT! If they take a step closer, I take my GAT out and COCK IT! If they front a little more… then they’ll hear me POP IT! These fools be hatin’… like they don’t kno who I be I’m SPuL aka Reckless, I ain’t no wannabe G I’ll dominate you so bad, and I’ll swipe yo Range Rover Jus like Lil’ Flip, nigga… it’s “Game Over” But instead of chantin’ “Flip”… they all be chantin’ “SPuL” They kno that I be blazin’, and that I’m unstopaBULL I have the ability to K-O, wit just one fuckin’ line I’ll have ‘em so bezerk, they’ll be choosin’ punch over wine I rock a 12 and 2 record, when I’m battlin’ fools online Won 10 in a row… I should go live, and make ‘em mine I’m always “In Da Club”… I do it my own way I say, “Fuck 50 Cent… man, I’m 50 K” Now listen up… hatas kno I got the skill I’m jacked up wit the money, jus like yo telepone bill When my video hits BET… everbody gonna watch it When my album comes out, even hatas are gonna cop it (haha) (Chorus x2) I see my album at the store… I go over and I COP IT! I see niggas frontin’ wit me… I tell ‘em they betta WATCH IT! If they take a step closer, I take my GAT out and COCK IT! If they front a little more… then they’ll hear me POP IT! yo, there it is. holla back wit Feedback. PEACE |
I like it the Chorus is awsome
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^haha, thanks, man. When I get a mic, I'm gonan record this song. Also, out of 10, what do you guys think it is?
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i would give it a 9
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aiight, cool. Thanks. Uppin' for more feedback.
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yo, I edited the verses a little, so if you saw it, let me kno if it's better. PEACE
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uppin' for feedback
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fake ass nigga....you aint shootin nobody.
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good shorus good flow throw in some more vocab i liked the core
i give it a 7.5/10 |
thanks for the feedback Will. and fuck that newbie. Uppin' for more feedback.
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Nice drop, lyrics was tight, I wasn't feeling the chorus, its really overused son, lyrically u dropped some nice shit, I'd just like to see a more creative chorus
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aiight, I'll see what I can do.thanks for feedback. uppin' for more feedback.
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quit lyin to yourself..i aint no newbie ta rap...just to this shit....you dont know what its like to live what your rappin about...so quit rappin about it.
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yo, I did that shit for fun. So lay off, fool.
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uppin' for feedback
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ya i like the chorus/
u got potential/ think was hot/ make an audio/ u should |
^yo, thanks, man. Yea, I'll do it on audio when I buy a mic this summer. Uppni' for a little more feedback
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hahahha nice ish right there....
Fav lines.... I spit my rhymes so sick, biters don’t even try to catch them Released 2 lines, instead of a single, and still went platinum I’ll dominate you so bad, and I’ll swipe yo Range Rover Jus like Lil’ Flip, nigga… it’s “Game Over” When my video hits BET… everbody gonna watch it When my album comes out, even hatas are gonna cop it Aight you had a good consistent flow....the hook is pretty hot....you threw good punches even though it was a song....keep writin cuz u got skills..... |
Yo da chorus was off the hook. I would like to here an audio of it.
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thanks all. I will fashos do an audio when I get a mic. Thanks for all the feedback. PEACE
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yeah dis song is a 9 or maybe 9.5.sick.
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yea, thanks all. I got L.I doin' a beat for me. Then I will go cop a mic, and then rip this on audio.
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uppin' this......... :shoot:
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I spit my rhymes so sick, biters don’t even try to catch them
Released 2 lines, instead of a single, and still went platinum That was nice, not really my style of rap, but I still gonna give props it was good man, I liked it, spit it on a track, better then most of peoples on this site, to mainstream for me though, 7/10 |
props appreciate it. This was like almost one yr ago too. lol but upp....
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6/10...Wasnt really feelin it that much...Coulda been way better man I know what you're capable of...
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uppitty up!!!! :shoot:
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