ReLiC Vs. sun jian
 

Ight here rules:

15 line max
no d/r's
no hate votes
no biting
no feeding
no recyclin
Due:Tonight by midnight

ill post when i get prolly like a hour or so just check in ill be back as soon as possiblr.

checkin in

Ight heres mine

Its time for me to Break u like Glass and rup u open with the [Shards]
Ur like a pair of 2's and im a Royal Flush in a game of [Cards]

Your the Person who nobody knows and Nobody [Wants-to-Be-You]
I know ur fake cause ur shits weak i Can See [Right-Through-You]

These Knock u down and run over u leave Tread [Marks]
Ill shred Through you faster then Great White [Sharks]

Your shits so bad ur still waiten for MTV's new hit [Pimp-My-Rhymes]
You'll get noticed..cause ima beat u so bad itll make the front of the [NewYork-Times]

Ill hit u so hard ull turn Green like the Jerzeys of the New York [Jets]
these punches will leave u Black and Blue all over like the New York [Mets]

You Offically just got Killed look at the Death [Certificate]
Your gonna need a Closed Casket cause the way i left u its [Horrific]

Dont wait till 12 to post i know i said it but try to hurry.

yo verse is about to be bombarded.
i wonder how when i havent even started.
i go to your army base or station.
spit my atom bombs givin yo crew radiation.
your money is $1.10 cent.
no wonder you aint happy its at 77percent.
yo health 56 going down to zero.
surrened dog dont become a hero.
think you gonna win nigga please.
ill hit you so hard give you old timers diease.
close the casket this nigga fucked me up.
wit what dog he gave me a paper cut.
this battles gonna reach the newyorktimes.
sun is beatin with recycled rhymes.
how you get on lock down? you cant commit a crime.



not my best either but o well.

not my best but o well .uppin fo votes

Its time for me to Break u like Glass and rup u open with the [Shards]
Ur like a pair of 2's and im a Royal Flush in a game of [Cards]
you cant break someone and then rip him apart... at least you had a meta
Your the Person who nobody knows and Nobody [Wants-to-Be-You]
I know ur fake cause ur shits weak i Can See [Right-Through-You]
wtf is with the "-" ... this is bad anyway
These Knock u down and run over u leave Tread [Marks]
Ill shred Through you faster then Great White [Sharks]
blah
Your shits so bad ur still waiten for MTV's new hit [Pimp-My-Rhymes]
You'll get noticed..cause ima beat u so bad itll make the front of the [NewYork-Times]
semi almost decent
Ill hit u so hard ull turn Green like the Jerzeys of the New York [Jets]
these punches will leave u Black and Blue all over like the New York [Mets]
at least there was a meta
You Offically just got Killed look at the Death [Certificate]
Your gonna need a Closed Casket cause the way i left u its [Horrific]
semi ok


yo verse is about to be bombarded.
i wonder how when i havent even started.
wtf
i go to your army base or station.
spit my atom bombs givin yo crew radiation.
this sucks
your money is $1.10 cent.
no wonder you aint happy its at 77percent.
wtf?
yo health 56 going down to zero.
surrened dog dont become a hero.
yeah... almost a good personal...
think you gonna win nigga please.
ill hit you so hard give you old timers diease.
um... sorta ok
close the casket this nigga fucked me up.
wit what dog he gave me a paper cut.
???
this battles gonna reach the newyorktimes.
sun is beatin with recycled rhymes.
worst feed ever
how you get on lock down? you cant commit a crime.
um.. ok

again, terrible battle. first guy was less whack. both of you have to work on less "ima fuck you up" stuff and more metas and punches. elevate big time.

Still Uppin

Relic
Its time for me to Break u like Glass and rup u open with the [Shards]
Ur like a pair of 2's and im a Royal Flush in a game of [Cards]
weak but ok
Your the Person who nobody knows and Nobody [Wants-to-Be-You]
I know ur fake cause ur shits weak i Can See [Right-Through-You]
Same again someone
These Knock u down and run over u leave Tread [Marks]
Ill shred Through you faster then Great White [Sharks]
Better than the others
Your shits so bad ur still waiten for MTV's new hit [Pimp-My-Rhymes]
You'll get noticed..cause ima beat u so bad itll make the front of the [NewYork-Times]
LOL funny.... I made the pimp my rhymes line But I know ya didnt copy me
Ill hit u so hard ull turn Green like the Jerzeys of the New York [Jets]
these punches will leave u Black and Blue all over like the New York [Mets]
ok but not that good
You Offically just got Killed look at the Death [Certificate]
Your gonna need a Closed Casket cause the way i left u its [Horrific]
Weak closiner...You can do better

sun jinyo verse is about to be bombarded.
i wonder how when i havent even started.
LOL very very weak
i go to your army base or station.
spit my atom bombs givin yo crew radiation.
LOL cool that was good
your money is $1.10 cent.
no wonder you aint happy its at 77percent.
Weak
yo health 56 going down to zero.
surrened dog dont become a hero.
LOL you good man do better than this
think you gonna win nigga please.
ill hit you so hard give you old timers diease.
Wack but good
close the casket this nigga fucked me up.
wit what dog he gave me a paper cut.
LOL funniest of all
this battles gonna reach the newyorktimes.
sun is beatin with recycled rhymes.
how you get on lock down? you cant commit a crime.
Wack closiner but good for a vers
Vote/Relic came herder

ok check it

relic nothin really in that verse but good structure bout all i can say work on harder punchs and personals to get you elvated at first bout all i can really say there was nothin but filler in your verse

jian not shit in your verse but filler you had nothin not even tryin to throw punchs honestly the worst verse ive ever read i think you need to elevate in every category especially word play to help you elevate on some punchs

vote relic but not by much

oops sorry for 2nd post but return the favor relic please..one more vote
me//vs//Born2spitt one more vote

ight still uppin
whats KO here

uppin

Nice battle both of yall... heres the overall breakdown
Relic:
nice start.. i like ur flow and u stuck wit it.. u only messed it up on one part.. but mistakes happen. and i like some of ur punches

sun jian:
maybe u should stick to dynasty warriors... cuz ur style is outplayed and ur flow is wack.. ur structure sucks too.. and punches u lack.. (oh shit i rhymed hehe)

vote=relic

uppin fo votes

sunn jian easily took this, his flows punhces, ryming out runned relic. Well done sun.

well im guessin that sun was feedin not quite original in my impression rymes relic had em sun had solid format but the content wasn t there for me i dont know im guessin relic took it!