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S.Carter Vs. DeLeon
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no crew D/R or hate votes no feedin either 10-15 lines you drop first alright? Lets get it started |
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Southside Chi-Town let me show you how we get down
Fuck around you get chopped and bagged like a pound I spit Ether but my shit better than StillMattic Yo raps sound like you a fuckin Crack Attic Look Deleon you should of left it alone Yo cd a make less money than a half a zone Thats bout 25 dollars need some skills just holla You the little dirt that fly off when I pop my collar Who colder S.Carter But kid dont get me confuse with hova You couldn't make it to the top even if you stood on my shoulders I spit bolders that a fuck you up 16brs from me it a shut you up Have you scared he probally one of them No shows With no goals get beat up like corner hoe I seen yo crew yall just trying to copy us Middle finger up to the DirtySouth Mafia |
alright dogg didnt like that closer........lol lol
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16 bars...... i said 10-15 guess i win you went over
HAH just playing dogg dont get scared |
Damn! Son you must be stupid fuckin around with -tha MOB/
I heard you was a cocksucker-dont quit your day JOB!/ You another one of these rooks -tryin to tame this/ you enlisted in Da Army-must be why your pro-claimed the lam-est/ Im killin this kid with my Lyrical Gram-mer/ You couldnt smash my shit even if i gave you a ham-mer/ Who ever told you-you could win against me was lyin to- ya/ cause my lyrics slice your face open like a fucken Vagi--na/ runnin over this kid like my name was grave digger/ takin ya out when I load my glock-cock it then pull the trigger/ Damn son Im straight- but you's a FAG/ This shits Over someone ready a body bag/ you comin off soft like Bette Mitler/ im burin this kid out like tha holocust so you can call me hitler/ Im droppin hott game-while leavin your ass clue-less/ this shit hittin harder than DeLa Hoya boxin Lennox Lewis/ |
yall get that closer?
Hoya light weight Lewis heavy weight-so hoya gettin killed |
DeLeon:
Flow- your flow was really good... the structure added 2 it... Punches- you had a couple here and there... and when u did they hit pretty hard... Personals- you had a hand full of personals all of which hit pretty hard... this was your strongest area in ur battle... espicially You couldnt smash my shit even if i gave you a ham-mer/ and... im burin this kid out like tha holocust so you can call me hitler/ Vocab- pretty complex vocab... very good from ur side... Originality- i would have to say ur lines were pretty original... played out well over all 8/10... Beggining and End: you started strong and kept it that way throught the battle... S.Carter Flow- flow was good/ok... ur structure wasn't that good so i didn't really add anything 2 it... Punches- ok u had a few... the few that u had didn't hit that hard... pretty weak... Personals- u had some personals the ones that u did have were pretty good... espicially... Who colder S.Carter But kid dont get me confuse with hova You couldn't make it to the top even if you stood on my shoulders Vocab- vocab wasn't to complex but there was some good vocab ocassionally... Originality- a couple of ur lines were original... over all ok verse... i would say 7/10 Beggining and End: you started off strong and in the last 4 verses u lost it... Winner: DeLeon mainly because of his complex vocab and his personals and punchlines hit alot harder |
This Battle Was Kinda Weak But Ill Give It To Deleon Cuz He Came More Consistently Wit His Rhymes, Most Of Them Were Average Nuttin To Weak
S. Had Some Alright Stuff But Some Of His Stuff Was Weak,deleon Also Had A Better Vocab And His Shit Flowed Better Vote:deleon |
uppin lets get some votes up in this bitch.........
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flow-S. Carter
punches-S.Carter--I especially like that closer bout Leon's crew creativity-Deleon--That closer bout boxing was good. Overall-OK battle.But Carter had this thing Vote-Carter |
alright whatever dogg
lets get some more votes in this bitch |
lets get some more votes in here....................
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Come on now lets get some votes in this battle
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Ight.. ima have to go wit deleon on this battle because he kept it real.. the flow was tight and he had good punches
S carter.. u did okay, ur flow was average and u had some punches.. but not enuff vote=deleon |
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DeLeon - Good spit man, you had some dope punches in there, with song pretty good flow.
Best Line - You another one of these rooks -tryin to tame this/ you enlisted in Da Army-must be why your pro-claimed the lam-est/ Worst Line - Who ever told you-you could win against me was lyin to- ya/ cause my lyrics slice your face open like a fucken Vagi--na/ S. Carter - Alright spit man. you had a alright flow goin.. but you didnt have many hard hitten punches. Best Line - NONE Worst Line - I spit bolders that a fuck you up 16brs from me it a shut you up OVERALL - I wasnt feeling this battle to much, but I got to give my vote to DeLeon, he flowed better.. had better structure and he came with harder hitten punches, S man you flowed alright but you didnt really have any good punches, next time step up on the punches and flow. VOTE - DeLeon RETURN THE FAV http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119532 |
alright lets close this out yall
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Aiight, this was a pretty good battle. But I thought DeLeaon took this one.
S-Carter, some of your punches were good, and some were not all that good. You didn't have any that really hit that hard. I liked your flo, but it was a little shaky in some areas. The syllables were off, so the flo went bezerk. Deleon, it wasn't the hottest spit, but enough to get you the W. Your punches were pretty good. You had no really bad ones, or really good ones. I liked you flow, and thought it was consistent throughout the verse. Good job. vote=Deleon |
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