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Ozzy vs Shady1132
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Shady wannabe here's 14 years old
He cant get no pussy and so he's been told everytime he sees a cunt and he trys to get hold he gets denied and left out in the cold heres some game you can permanently borrow use it in 5 years when your dicks finished its growth "gimme some pussy" only 50 percent will say no Oh no, you listen to 50 cent... your both homos here's a secret for you, a peice of info your mother is a cocksucking nasty ass hoe, so Remember tonight, when your mum turns out the lights tucking you in cum drippin from her lips gonna kiss you goodnight That was me, alright? |
You call urself ozzy,like you a magican,well I be happy if u dissapear/
Nigga,you couldn't get booked if you were reading William Shakespeare/ Yeah,your'e older than me,yet you got no pubic hair,and chill in daycare/ Nigga,you just the average queer with dreams of becoming a millionaire/ Are you trying to be Chris Jerchico's fozzy,the band with a wrester in it?/ Only thing you know bout wrestling is ur mom,if I was u,it's suicide I'dcommit/ Anybody fuck with me...............and they end up redder than a maxi pad/ Which to u isn't too bad,cause you got more periods than an Suess story Sorry to end ur morning glory..........but you gonna lose today ozzzy/ No way I'm losing to RB's head nurse,but he gonna come back reimbursed/ Casue he a diverse,instead of gettin better,he keeps gettin worse/ |
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okay...
opener-shady...even tho it was type corny structure-shady..oz ya lines got long then short fukked up ya flow punchlines-shady creativity-shady wordplay-nun multis-nun personals-nun enjoyed-shady....he took dis shit real easy...oz step ya rap game up dunny my vote-shady.........return dat favor i gota few opeen battles on da frontlines |
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My Vote
Shady wannabe here's 14 years old
He cant get no pussy and so he's been told weak punch...4/10 everytime he sees a cunt and he trys to get hold he gets denied and left out in the cold No punch...2/10 heres some game you can permanently borrow use it in 5 years when your dicks finished its growth Not feelin it....3/10 "gimme some pussy" only 50 percent will say no Oh no, you listen to 50 cent... your both homos Weak punch....3/10 here's a secret for you, a peice of info your mother is a cocksucking nasty ass hoe, so wtf?!....0/10 Remember tonight, when your mum turns out the lights tucking you in cum drippin from her lips gonna kiss you goodnight haha thats disgusting and weak....2/10 Verse Score : 11/60 Aight just go to tutorials and learn punches and wordplay....use personals and meta's....ELEVATE... You call urself ozzy,like you a magican,well I be happy if u dissapear/ Nigga,you couldn't get booked if you were reading William Shakespeare/ Its ok....5/10 Yeah,your'e older than me,yet you got no pubic hair,and chill in daycare/ Nigga,you just the average queer with dreams of becoming a millionaire/ Not that great of a punch...3/10 Are you trying to be Chris Jerchico's fozzy,the band with a wrester in it?/ Only thing you know bout wrestling is ur mom,if I was u,it's suicide I'dcommit/ Needs better word play and better punch....2/10 Anybody fuck with me...............and they end up redder than a maxi pad/ Which to u isn't too bad,cause you got more periods than an Suess story lol a lil better....5/10 Sorry to end ur morning glory..........but you gonna lose today ozzzy/ No way I'm losing to RB's head nurse,but he gonna come back reimbursed/ Casue he a diverse,instead of gettin better,he keeps gettin worse/ na....3/10 Verse Score - 18/50 Aight still need to elevate....but werk on wordplay and using personals....get sum more meta's in there.....keep elevatin..... Vote - shady |
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ok, this was a weak battle. But Shady had the better verse. His stuff lowed better and he had better punches. Oz, work on your flow, and try to get better punches. Vote=Shady
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Punches- Shady
Creativity- Shady Enjoyment- Shady Flow- Shady Vocab- Shady VOTE- shady.... both verses were kind of weak but shady's was the better of the two... more creativity, better punches, followed his flow easily, some vocab..... Ozzy yours was too plain and simple... no vocab... no multies/mettas/ flow was off cause some of you lines were stretched...keep at it |
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uppin4votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!
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Uuuum. Shady Won. Ozzzy, Are You Gay- Cuz Dat Last Line Was Type Gay. I Vote Shady.
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