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KiNg SoLo vs. L.I. (Topical Match)
this is the set up
RULES: no line min/max. verses due by tonight no d/r no crew no hate and u need 100 posts at least to vote!! TOPIC: Boxing Match Good luck!! |
this just me checkin in to this battle
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hahaha yes i am goin to have fun with this topic......checked in.....g/l......
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yo shit i'm already ready to spit
and its only been just over an hour so here i go check it ~~~INTRODUCTIONS~~~ Coming out of the blue corner is the kid reppin the Murderous Methodz This kid don’t know how to spell his name so he puts it as two letters Sportin power rangers trunks and children size nameless sneakers His crew already pissin their pants…start callin ‘em the Murderous leakers!! Then out of the red corner is the guy reppin the LyriKal DestruKtion This guy is the KO King statin that his win is already in production He’s wearin the usual reebok trunks and still pushin up those nikes It’s the guy u’ve been waitin to see, the guy with the lightning strikes!! ~~~TOUCH GLOVES (FACE-OFF)~~~ REF: Both y’all know the rules and I will disqualify you if I need to King, I got money ridin on you so feel free to make him bleed to!! SOLO: They should of announced me as Aerosmith cuz I’m a straight rock ‘n’ roll ure chin. L.I.: Please don’t hurt me man……I’ll take a fall……you’ll still get the fuckin win. [and the names arent part of the line, they just to show who is speakin] ~~~FIRST ROUND~~~ I’m looking straight into your eyes when there sounds the bell……DING! Step to the middle and drop you with one punch…the winner is KING! I help u back up because now I want you to feel the full force of King Solo I’m dropping u wit every punch having u going up and down more than a yoyo I rock you with a straight jab and blast you side to side with some hooks My punches hitting inhumanly hard like I’m striking with some brass knucks Bounce you off the ropes and drop a haymaker to split open your head Open up a cut let ure blood spray all over my fists so now all you seeing is RED The ref is about to call this match cuz ure blood is flowing mad from ure cuts I drop and uppercut u so hard in ure privates it replaces ure eyes with ure nuts Now I’m hitting you with combos, not one-two’s, I’m throwing punches in threes Got you shaking round the ring so much people think u got Parkinson’s disease I’ve been counting the minutes so I know it’s near the end of the first round U ain’t getting to the second; I unleash a hook sending u spinning to the ground 1……2……3……fuck the count, I grab u by the head and drag ure ass back up I break your ribs with body shots and then crack ure jaw with another uppercut I watch ure ass fly out of the ring and then grimace as u land with a crunch Oh shit, I just realised that ure crew already threw in the towel after the 1st punch!! |
My Verse
From day one of my life my father pressure me into his sport...
Forced me into training and practice, cuttin my childhood short... Then I grew to love it, my life was revolved around it... I perfected the game and no one could even land a hit... Feared by all other opponents and could barely get a fair match... Known all around the world, became famous, got myself attatched... Get a beautiful wife and have a baby boy to raise into the game... But I gave him time to grow and at age 12 it was time to tame... In one year he showed amazing progress and was double my level at his age... The year after that he was ready to go on to the big time stage... We entered him into the tourny of the best boxers in the world... I was so nervous for him when the first bell rang my stomach curled... But he flew through the rounds and finally made it into the championship... Against last year's champ, I was hysteric and my wife told me to get a grip... The guy was double his size and strength, didnt know what would happen... Bell rang and the champ was toying with my boy, continuosly slappin him... My son brought his arm back to throw a huge punch... But the champ ducked it and returned with a bunch... My boy made it into rround two but was bloddy as hell... While the champ was barely sweating and waved farewell... I threw in the towel before my boy really got too hurt... My boy freaked out saying that eventually his punches would convert... But I told him that he was only 16 and his loss was dealt... And that next year he'd be back to take the champion belt... werd |
and that had what do do wit me???
whateva man UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!! |
nice topical drops
both of u had nice verses and nice flows easy 2 read structure LI- nice drop i liked yo flow alot bestline-From day one of my life my father pressure me into his sport... Forced me into training and practice, cuttin my childhood short... nice start worsteline-none dat i seen nice king-u came hungry and nice drop nice flow bestline-Coming out of the blue corner is the kid reppin the Murderous Methodz This kid don’t know how to spell his name so he puts it as two letters nice start worsteline-I watch ure ass fly out of the ring and then grimace as u land with a crunch Oh shit, I just realised that ure crew already threw in the towel after the 1st punch!! ok but not as good as the rest winner goes 2 Li by starting good and ending good and da middle was good nice drop both ppl and lookin foward 2 reading more of ya shit winner-L.I |
Nice drop both of y'all...
King....good drop, good flow ya rhymes were tight but you fall off the topic a couple of times, you were droppin' battlin' lines instead of focusing on the story, so I think you had a tight verse but it coulda been alot better L.I...good drop, nice flow, it started well an was consistent throughout the whole verse, you told a complete story, you focused on the subject an stayed on it, nice drop Vote: L.I |
nah srry i gotta give dis to king it was real creactive had some nice punches i like dat murderous leakers shit l.i had a good flow to but king shit was hott
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i guess i didnt make myself clear
the topic was a boxing match not a boxing career story and it was a match between me and L.I so really i fail to see how i fell off the topic |
dawg...the topic was boxing.....it didnt have to be between me and u.....its a topical battle....i stayed on topic.....simple as dat.....its ya first topical so understand u dont undastand...but nice drop.....up....
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^ he right its atopical you aitn goin at your opponent your just rappin about that topic aint gotta mention your opponent at all
l.i stayed on topid the whole time and it flowed nicely good way to open it and nice way to end it shit was real seriuos had me boppin my head to it shit would be nice behind a beat nice shit brah king you thought it was a boxing match between you and him lol it was creative as hell but sounded like a movie script to me more than a flow and it took away the flow in a bunch of parts nice creativitie though but i dont think you knew exactly how it was suppost to go vote l.i |
thanks for the votes and feedback........up.........
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uppin............................................. ...........
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yo, these were two hot verses. I was feelin' both of them. But I think LI won this by a small margin. I liked his flow better than King's. Kings' flow went off a little, durin' some lines. I also think that LI had better vocab usauge than King. King did a good job, but it wasn't enough to beat LI. My vote will have to go to LI
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Solo's fllow went off a little.I really don't give a fuck about vocab. though.Nice imajery by both of you.No good wordplay in here.But L.I.'s shit seemed to be more believeable.So I got to go with L.I.
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