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Revell vs Ill
k 10 lines,
honest votes only, you spit 1st cause i set up. |
no you spit first....I couldve set it up....I didnt know you was goin to accept becuz you took too long
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this guys making my ill cause his raps are lyrically sick, he may as well throw up all over his words the prick, for what is worth, you might as well fall of the edge of the earth, no-ones gonna miss you anyhow, the only reason i see of me losing my verse, is if i end up falling asleep over your words, but thats not gonna happen anyhow, call 911 cause this guy is ill, its an emergency, hes trying to be a rapper just like me, but hes out with the count 1.........2........3. |
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I told you I was going to make it 10 lines.... This guy pop wit cap guns not with nines.... He throwing up all over my words....Your not makin sense Someone get srobe and CProgress becuz its bout to get intense.... You a fuckin snitch to spy and stay an inbassiner..... B/c im about to (ripp) you so much its goin to be dangerous like the Texas CHainsaw Messacre............ THis guy is so horny he try to get pussy by his dog by sending it flowers.... My lines will leave ya chokin and sayin dude more than austin powers... You shouldnt have battle me,be smart dont do drugs and have fun... When your ready to battle ill beat you so you can bring out the revell the real one |
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I think revell took this easerly, the other guy just got slaughtered with no decent words, or ryming patturns. Revil raped with better flow contructure and rymed pretty well 2 and took this one.
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not a good explanation....but nice vote.....aight uppin...I murked him
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Yo this nigga ill only got explanations for everything.lol.just showing support.Hope you can do the same.
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
nigga stop makin shitty votes.....THey need to be explained....They goin to be DQed so stop makin fuckin votes that dont make since and stop makin wack votes.....Newbs dont vote if ya dont know how.....Now can I get a real voter in here....I murked this new....Can I please...ill return the Favor
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revell - that was bad....really bad....u had no punches....no personals....no metas....no flow....horrible wordplay.....bad verse....go to tutorials and learn everything in there if u wanna elevate....
ill - aight urs wasnt great either....u had a couple bad punches while he had none....ur flow was off in spots.....don tstretch ya lines so long....use personals.....and betta meta's....i thought i heard u use that texas chainsaw line in anotha one of ur battles...i dunno i forget....but u win cuz u threw a couple bad punches.... vote - ill for havin attempts at punches..... |
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uppin uppin uppin uppin just come and vote PLEASE lets just get it over wiv.
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opener- Revel take this one,
structure-ILL punchline-ILL creativity-ILL multis-none flow- both kinda weak personals- none enjoyed- Both kinda bland, closer-Revell, takes the close, I wasn't feel'n the have fun bull shit, All in all this was a pretty lame battle, obviously ILL take this one cause he took more. |
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opener:Ill closer:revell punches:Ill personals:Ill flow:Ill vocab:Revell winner Ill |
I think Revell won this battle. You both had the idea but need to work on it some more, I think Revell had a better control of his verse, and actually had a decent rhyming in sequence punchline. I give ill a 3 out of 10 While I give Revell a High 5 out of 10- My vote Revell
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ok nice spit from both of yall but we know who got the win REvell- had a few punches and 1 good one kinda wack but good Ill- Nice vocab structure flow and punches and i think u came up on top
Vote - Ill |
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