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SPuL and Kingz(29-3) v.s Triple_N and E Looch(20-15)
yo, this should be a hot battle right here. As the title says the teams are:
Team 1 SPuL(12-2) Kingz(17-1) Team 2 Triple_N(14-13) E Looch(6-2) Ok, here are the rules: 20-30 lines No crew votes, d/r votes, or hate votes Also, how we gonna decided order? |
The poll should say "Who's team won the battle?"
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ok so when the verses due by?
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end of Tuesday. I'm gonna spit my verse in like 30 mins. Keyin' it up now. PEACE
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Checkin' in, ah'ight spul lets see what ya workin' wit'
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aiight here it is. I wanted to insert links, but had no time:
*Looks up at the top and see’s Triple_N. Decides to diss him first* So why’d you challenge me, Triple? I previously merked you once Pullin’ stupid decisions outta yo hat. It might as well be named “dunce” Understand I really KO’d you, but you managed to get one vote Luckily DP was there, but she calls you her “Pimp”, so don’t gloat And you decided to return the favor, when we battled by the book Nigga, when I asked you about the battle, you said you didn’t even look Definitely a pussy rider online, but in real life you are not Kuz you get less pussy, than a golfer does on a tee shot (hint: hole in one. Think about it) In yo verse, you’re prolly gonna diss us… for the fact we like the Kings Nigga, you like the T-Wolves. Thanks to us, you getting no rings Goin’ on about your Countless Wins, but damn! You got no game!!! Zappin’ you by my rhymes Sickness… to you, I’m a Royal Pain *Stops for a moment. See’s E-Looch’s name, and continue’s on* Jus lookin’ at yo dim-witted name… makes me wanna puke U get me askin’, “Who the fuck are you, and what the fuck’s an E-Looch?” Stop braggin’ about your tiny 6-2 record, and start deliverin’ punches constantly Man, we’ll win this shit in five… if people decide to vote honestly Everyone kno’s we’ll make you disappear… cuz we got mad tricks Reckon we’ll knock you out in five… jus like the Mavericks Knowin’ you can’t win you feed… which you do alotta Each line of mine will have you “Rowling”, but this shit ain’t Harry Potter Done and weak, you’re like a pitcher tired, after throwin’ thirty Your punches are more played out… then a throwback jersey Only way you’ll “do” anything… is when you drink Mountain Dew (do the dew) Ask anyone, they don’t like you. You even rep a stupid crew (no hate) :thumbup: *Stops again, and continues on for the finisher* Sayin’ ya’ll come first… jus like a lightin’ flash Sorry, you’re more like thunder… cuz you’re gonna finish last Everyone knos they can’t beat us, cuz we’re highly recommended like safety glasses Says the first letter in each line… SPuL and Kingz jus merked yo asses *drops mic down* |
ummmmmm oooooook ill drop in a while
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c'mon, guys. Post ur verses.
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Looks up at Spul's verse an laughs for hours, then drops
Spuls's rippin': You say u mixed, well ya moms must be "no flow", an ya pops "garbage" Then that would explain why all your posted verses are lyrical "carnage" A mixed indian, am I the only one that finds that shit really weird Oh shit! this shit's a cover up "Bin Ladin" decided to shave his beard I'm a smush this virgin bitch, wit' my metaphorical tires on cruise Cuz only "bush" you've seen is on the "channel 7 news"(meaning George Bush) Ya rhymes can't touch mines, your lyrics are crimes, read the signs My shit shines, your structure so fucked up "maco" couldn't straighten ya lines Your completely wack, in ya pic wit ya cap back, tryin' to be black Lyrical skills ya lack, if ya rhymes was "O.J." they still couldn't murder a track I'm predicting ya fate like I was cleo, ya vote count none, this battle's done Shit, even if you was "neo" you still wouldn't have "one"(won) Kingz Turn!!!!!!LETS DO THIS SHIT RIGHT!!!!!!! This faggot bitch is number one the "homo ranks" This guy's asshole gets more refills than "gas tanks" He focuses on dick harder than "sholin monks" He sucks on more nuts than "elephant trunks" Him an spul run the streets in their little homo groups Those two together choke down more balls than "basketball hoops" He tries to be a real man by showin' his peach fuzz It don't matter, cuz he still ain't half the man his "mom wuz"(was) He goes to malls for heels he has on layaway an makes deposits I'm a call you "outgrown shirt" cuz you stay "in the closet" After this rippin' your fake hetero persona won't remain He d/r's the kings so much he got the team's autograph in "cum stains" Don't try to reply, cuz ya rhymes are so elementary that their labeled "tonka" You can't deny the fact that you see more chocolate than "Willy Wonka" LMFAO!!!!!....HOLD THAT!!!!!!ROYAL SICKNESS IN FULL EFFECT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
nice spit. Jus waitin' for the other two to spit.
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Triple_n
triple_n?..not u again…I beat ya before….now you ‘bought’ a friend but ya never gunna beat us….no matter how much you ‘spend’ You got so many gay punches…you sound like an expert Either your gay youself….or your a sick fucking pervert Royal Sickness?…yep your crew are pretty sick…hold ya breath Ya crew got the ‘plague’…ur about to experience ya own ‘black death’ Your ‘life’ ‘stinks’…the whole crowd can ‘smell shit’ Ya profile says ‘rhyming is ya life’…and you cant even spell it! Im the ‘jewel’ in this industry…ya should call me ‘Tha Ruby’ Triple_N?…Damn…That must stand for triple newbie My punches will ‘stick with you’…like they ‘super glue’ …but jus remember im more ‘royal’ than ya whole fuckin crew E Looch E Looch?…wot the fuck is that?..you need a name change If the price is right im sure diasterpeice will do an exchange Ya title says ‘running aint in my protocal’…don’t u mean protocol? U cant spell…might as well run cos no one gonna vote~for~ya’ll Ya avatar looks like a star…it obviously aint you then Only stars you see are the ‘Kings’ when you watch E.S.P.N ‘E’? yep you rap like you have have OD’d on ‘ecstasy’ On A trip so bad, u see ya momma next~to~me having sex~with~me I fucked ya mum so hard…you might as well call me ‘dad’ I’ll murder you ‘son’…and still be the best ‘father’ you ever had You look unhappy dog…you got a case of the blues? Fuck E Looch…from now on you gonna be known as ‘E Lose’ ya crew r all ‘fat’ computer nerds…jus remember ‘greed’ is one of 7 deadly sins ya new crew motto: MAKING EVERYONE SICK WIT OUR COUNTLESS CHINS |
yo proper sick stuff right there
i'll vote when e looch drops see this is why we need a tag league goin for hot shit like this |
^haha see u copied my sig thing, but it's cool. :cool:
Hot verse Kingz. Like the Kings and ESPN line. Ok, jus need E Looch to spit, and then we can get some votes. |
dont even feal like spittin in this shit but fuck it
Say Its A Morning Funeral When These Fags Sent To An Early Grave
Spittin Poorly Unfelt Lyrics bout to get u deported out the home of the brave addin records so hopefully you can get a vote an boast up ya sig I'll put a hole in ya head big enough to claim it as an arceoligical dig Kings you wack scientific raps and ya particles only hold mags and shoot feds when you mad at Sports Illustrated articles spul stop graspin dicks and go practice spittin in rewind cause you're Wack As fuck like the words I underlined Neither verses were even sick they got tried and accquited Ya punches are WEAK like Frustrated Diabetics Missin Shots of Insulin |
FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK Hold up lol i gotta finish
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Uhh...is he done..? 'Cause I wanna vote on this shot fo real...
If you have the time, plz hit this up... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122351 |
dont wanna hear shit about this later
Say Its A Morning Funeral When These Fags Sent To An Early Grave
Spittin Poorly Unfelt Lyrics bout to get u deported out the home of the brave addin records so hopefully you can get a vote an boast up ya sig I'll put a hole in ya head big enough to claim it as an arceoligical dig Kings you wack scientific raps and ya particles only hold mags and shoot feds when you mad at Sports Illustrated articles spul stop graspin dicks and go practice spittin in rewind cause you're Wack As fuck like the words I underlined Neither verses were even sick they got tried and accquited case dissmissed after you admited no pain was inflicted how the fuck did you mange that record shit is intrestin cause Ya punches are Weak like Diabetics Missin Shots of Insulin :shocked: Yo Spul stop sendin me P.M.'S like you Menstruatin [pms] cause u like all the rappers from Cheltenham untalented an forgotten hoped on the poll beggin allah for ya record to be improved I'm 5 Steps Ahead Of U Like U My 3rd Cousin Twice Removed :shocked: and everyone know spulls relatives are iraq rebels i'll have ya Vital signs Pass Death like u Quarterback 4 the Devil :shocked: an spull lovin Dada so he finally can be in C Webbs shoes his only way of bein a sac king cause his balls half the size of cashews Ya dudes actin like ya verse is tight but when i drop shows over you be like but my shit was tight an they just give you a cold shoulder ......................... |
Cheltenham where kings is from if you aint notice
vote people |
Holy shit...this was very close...
Spul You had some nice punches...flow was good...personals were pretty tite...everythin' about this verse was good...but not great. I think personally you should have came a lil' harder...but overall, pretty dope verse... 7/10 Triple_N Hmm...a lotta ya lines was played dawg...gay jokes are wack. Don't use them. Other than that, I thought your punches were pretty mediocore...pretty tite verse, coulda been better... 6/10[b] [b]Kingz Whoa...we have a superstar here, folks. Your punches were the shit. Your personals...amazing. Triple_N, triple newbie...haha...I laughed my ass off...and it all flowed good too. And your closer...holy shit...dope... 9/10 E-Looch Whoa...this is going to be close between Kingz and E-Looch...your punches was tite...personals hit hard...damn...flow was damn near perfect...tite dawg... 9/10 And my vote goes to... Team SpuL and E-Looch. No hate...hit up my link above plz...thx... |
Whoops, I mean SpuL and Kingz team...added up tha wrong people...sorry............................
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Uppin for well explained votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Hot battle, uppin' for votes.
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uppin' fo votes.
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good lookin le
Uppin |
uppin for some well explained votes y'all, holla back!!
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ok this was a close batle but it was hott shit well done
team triplen and elooch: good hard punches i felt that triples really connected both verses had fair flow they were good my favorite line from triple:This faggot bitch is number one the "homo ranks" This guy's asshole gets more refills than "gas tanks" He focuses on dick harder than "sholin monks" He sucks on more nuts than "elephant trunks" Him an spul run the streets in their little homo groups Those two together choke down more balls than "basketball hoops" i liked all that and they were the best lines from this team *9* -------------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------- ------- spul and kingz also a very hott verse ur punches werent as good but kingz agaisnts elooch punches were goood but i dotn think that u had better punches than triple and elooch my favorite lines from this team ‘E’? yep you rap like you have have OD’d on ‘ecstasy’ On A trip so bad, u see ya momma next~to~me having sex~with~me I fucked ya mum so hard…you might as well call me ‘dad’ I’ll murder you ‘son’…and still be the best ‘father’ you ever had You look unhappy dog…you got a case of the blues? Fuck E Looch…from now on you gonna be known as ‘E Lose’ it was a close battle but my vote goes to triple and elooch hard to decide nice battle yall |
Vote: triple N and E Looch
Ok.. Spul your verse seemed like it was a topical where the topic was ragging on some guy... might not make sense but that's the best way I can explain it. You just had a lot of filler, it seemed like 70% of your verse was just set up lines. Oh and between the 4 of you, I don't want to hear another punch relating to the NBA or sports, because this battle alone just made that shit played as fuck. Nobody in this battle really had a stand out verse... there were some nice lines here and there but a lot of stretched shit and filler... I feel like you guys could have gone 20 lines and made it more readable. Looch.. your verse had some weak rhymes and you really didn't come as hard as our battle together... but still nobody really came that hard. I think overall Triple N and kingz had the two better verses... I think they were about even but Triple N / E Looch get my vote because they had different verses... kingz and spul y'all came with the same personals... same sports punch... got kinda boring. |
good lookin i know i didnt even try in this battle shit wasnt that hot to me like they sayin
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spul sorry man....there weren´t any real hard hitting punches that caught my eye. your flow wasn´t good at the beginning but it improved by the end
k i gotta give this to triple n for reasons first of all here are the negatives some shit was played but some stuff i liked You say u mixed, well ya moms must be "no flow", an ya pops "garbage"-original Cuz only "bush" you've seen is on the "channel 7 news"(meaning George Bush)-may be played but i like it Your completely wack, in ya pic wit ya cap back, tryin' to be black Lyrical skills ya lack, if ya rhymes was "O.J." they still couldn't murder a track his multies enhanced the flow of his verse. peace no hate...good batlte Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
^yo, this was a tag battle, not a battle between me and Triple. BS
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dp did that to me an shadows edge an that shit still counted against us lol
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spul-u didnt really diss Tripple n, it sounded like a track and u were just lashing out on him..now if it was a track shit would have been hott hott...believe that...but i dont think ur punches came hard..ur flow and structure was good tho...
E looch-u always on lock...lol u have this game wrapped..ur punches were there...nice flow and structure...easy read cause i understood...SPUL U SHOULD NEVA EXPLAIN WHAT SOMETHING MEANS IF THEY DONT GET IT THEY SHOULDNT VOTE... Tripple-Ur good no doubt...ur punches were felt...ur structure and flow was good...sometimes u get off balanced..but thats ight....just stay focused and worry about making ur disses a lil funny...IN A HEATED BATTLE LIKE THIS PPL WANNA HEAR SOME JOKES ALONG THE LINE SO THEY CAN LAUGH Kingz-u were good...very well spat...good ok punches...nothing special in my eyes...maybe im voting wrong but dont take this the wrong way...IF SPUL DIDNT MAKE HIS SOUND MORE LIKE A TRACK DISS THAN A BATTLE BATTLE THEN YALL WOULD HAVE GOTTEN THE VOTE vote-Tripple N....spul it was hott for a diss track but this is RB just diss the person by cracking jokes...dont spit like ur in the music industry beefing....get me? |
ite nice drops by both sides imma breakdown by partners 2 save all da readin so check it
Spul and kingz- both of yall threw some ali punches it was crazy u hit them where it hurts and a nice flow 2 go wit it yall added some persoanals here and there 2 make it sicker and both of yalll verses had top notch creativity i can read both of yall verses again nad again its was phat spul bestline-In yo verse, you’re prolly gonna diss us… for the fact we like the Kings Nigga, you like the T-Wolves. Thanks to us, you getting no rings tite kingz bestline-triple_n?..not u again…I beat ya before….now you ‘bought’ a friend but ya never gunna beat us….no matter how much you ‘spend’ nice start on him neither of u 2 had bad linez so nice drop overall yo verses get a 9.7/10 looch and triple also both of u had consistant verses between da both of u looch bestline-Say Its A Morning Funeral When These Fags Sent To An Early Grave Spittin Poorly Unfelt Lyrics bout to get u deported out the home of the brave hot shit triple bestline-You say u mixed, well ya moms must be "no flow", an ya pops "garbage" Then that would explain why all your posted verses are lyrical "carnage" nice neitha had bad linez overall i think yall verses get a 9.5/10 da reason kingz and spul took dis becuz of their punches it harder then looch and triple |
good lookin qp
Uppin for some explained votes |
Ight.. heres the break down... im not gonna go into detail cuz everybody above ^^ already did...
kingz and spulteam: overall yall did good.. spul was the weak nigga and kingz was the strong one.. this battle was a mear 2vs1 1/2... spul.. u needa elevate cuz.. overall:8.5/10 Elooch and Triple N: Ight u both contributed to a part in thsi team battle.. both of u had good punches in ur raps unlike kingz and spul where only kingz had the tight shit... so u guys won this battle because of that shit.. overall:8.9/10 vote-triple N and E Looch Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
uppin for well explained votes y'all holla back!!!
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Break Down For SPuL
Checckity Checck!! SPuL On Triple_N: *Looks up at the top and see’s Triple_N. Decides to diss him first* So why’d you challenge me, Triple? I previously merked you once Pullin’ stupid decisions outta yo hat. It might as well be named “dunce” ^Not A Bad Opener @ All' .. 8/10 Understand I really KO’d you, but you managed to get one vote Luckily DP was there, but she calls you her “Pimp”, so don’t gloat ^LmfaO' ..!!! Leave Me Out Of This' Shit!!! ... DAMN What The Fuck Was You Thinking.. !!!! 6/10 Goin’ on about your Countless Wins, but damn! You got no game!!! Zappin’ you by my rhymes Sickness… to you, I’m a Royal Pain ^Nice Closer' ... I Was Feelin It 9/10 Alright Checckit Checck!! SPuL On E Looch: *Stops for a moment. See’s E-Looch’s name, and continue’s on* Jus lookin’ at yo dim-witted name… makes me wanna puke U get me askin’, “Who the fuck are you, and what the fuck’s an E-Looch?” ^Lmfao!! Haha' .. Nice Opener !!! Heated 10/10 Stop braggin’ about your tiny 6-2 record, and start deliverin’ punches constantly Man, we’ll win this shit in five… if people decide to vote honestly ^Nice D/R Line' ... 8/10 Knowin’ you can’t win you feed… which you do alotta Each line of mine will have you “Rowling”, but this shit ain’t Harry Potter ^Nice PunchLine' Got Connected 9/10 Only way you’ll “do” anything… is when you drink Mountain Dew (do the dew) Ask anyone, they don’t like you. You even rep a stupid crew (no hate) ^Wasnt Really Feeling The Closer 6/10 Sayin’ ya’ll come first… jus like a lightin’ flash Sorry, you’re more like thunder… cuz you’re gonna finish last Everyone knos they can’t beat us, cuz we’re highly recommended like safety glasses Says the first letter in each line… SPuL and Kingz jus merked yo asses ^And Consistant' On The Disses' .. lol!! 10/10 DAMN SPuL' .. Taking His Rage Out On' Yall.. E Looch & Triple_N Haha' ..!!! Anyways Overall Nice Verse' And Consistant Punches' That Got Connected Dropping Decent Bars With Nice WordPlay!! Switch The Flipt Real Quicck!! Break Down For Triple_N: Checckity Checck- Triple_N On SPuL: Spuls's rippin': You say u mixed, well ya moms must be "no flow", an ya pops "garbage" Then that would explain why all your posted verses are lyrical "carnage" ^Nice Opener' ...!!!! 10/10 __Damn Good Way To Start A Battle Off'!! Ya rhymes can't touch mines, your lyrics are crimes, read the signs My shit shines, your structure so fucked up "maco" couldn't straighten ya lines ^Nice WordPlay & Multies There' .. Boi I Was Feelin 'Em!!!! 9/10 I'm predicting ya fate like I was cleo, ya vote count none, this battle's done Shit, even if you was "neo" you still wouldn't have "one"(won) ^Nice Closer' ...!! For This'... 8/10!!!! It Was Safe!!!! Triple_N On KingZ: Kingz Turn!!!!!!LETS DO THIS SHIT RIGHT!!!!!!! This faggot bitch is number one the "homo ranks" This guy's asshole gets more refills than "gas tanks" ^Alright Not To Bad Of An Opener' Could Have Been Worded Diff Though 8/10 He goes to malls for heels he has on layaway an makes deposits I'm a call you "outgrown shirt" cuz you stay "in the closet" ^Alright' .... Nice Punch 7/10 Don't try to reply, cuz ya rhymes are so elementary that their labeled "tonka" You can't deny the fact that you see more chocolate than "Willy Wonka" ^Nice Closer' Most Deff..!! Haha' ... - - 9/10! |
Checckit Checck:
KingZ On Triple_N: triple_n?..not u again…I beat ya before….now you ‘bought’ a friend but ya never gunna beat us….no matter how much you ‘spend’ ^Nice Opener!' ... 8/10 You got so many gay punches…you sound like an expert Either your gay youself….or your a sick fucking pervert ^Nice Punchline' Right There 8/10 Royal Sickness?…yep your crew are pretty sick…hold ya breath Ya crew got the ‘plague’…ur about to experience ya own ‘black death’ ^Shit Is Heated 10/10 My punches will ‘stick with you’…like they ‘super glue’ …but jus remember im more ‘royal’ than ya whole fuckin crew ^Nice Diss On His Crew' .. Name 9/10 KingZ On E Looch: E Looch?…wot the fuck is that?..you need a name change If the price is right im sure diasterpeice will do an exchange ^Now' You Also Bringin Me Into This Shit' !!!! Damn You Know You Don't Do That! ** But Alright Punch 7/10 ‘E’? yep you rap like you have have OD’d on ‘ecstasy’ On A trip so bad, u see ya momma next~to~me having sex~with~me ^Safe Punch' .. 8/10 You look unhappy dog…you got a case of the blues? Fuck E Looch…from now on you gonna be known as ‘E Lose’ ^Alright Closer' ... 7/10 ya crew r all ‘fat’ computer nerds…jus remember ‘greed’ is one of 7 deadly sins ya new crew motto: MAKING EVERYONE SICK WIT OUR COUNTLESS CHINS ^Nice ' Diss On There Crew Right There' .. 10/10 Break Down For E Looch: Checcckity Checck!!! E Looch On Both Of Em: Say Its A Morning Funeral When These Fags Sent To An Early Grave Spittin Poorly Unfelt Lyrics bout to get u deported out the home of the brave ^Nice Opener 9/10 But You On Who?!!!!!!! Kings you wack scientific raps and ya particles only hold mags and shoot feds when you mad at Sports Illustrated articles ^Nice Punch Against KingZ' ..!!! Im Feelin It 9/10 an spull lovin Dada so he finally can be in C Webbs shoes his only way of bein a sac king cause his balls half the size of cashews ^Lmfao!! Haha' ... Nice Shit Playa 10/10~~ Anyways.. Ya'll Had Real Nice Verses But Im Going With!! Checckit Checck KingZ & SPuL On This Shit' !!.... They Had Way More Practical Heated Punches That Hit Harder' ... |
lol um that opener was on spul seein that it was spelt out in bold letters lmaoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
uppin for some votes and who reopened this im guessin spul |
Lmfao' Well I Aint Seen It' ..!!! But Its Cool' ... Good Verse' !!!
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