KiNg SoLo vs. ReLiC
 

Rules:

10-15 lines max.
blind spit
30 mins to spit after check in (if ure late = DQ)
no d/r
no hate
no crew


I'm a check rite after u playa so i know u are gonna show!!

*doesnt show* haha check

30 mins after check how bout 30 mins after u oh nvm that would give me an hour

ill post 30 mins after u check

i'm checkin now so its on

ight

Ur the King?More like the Bitch of the [Palace]
My Mic as my weapon hitten u harder then a [Malace]<--old weapon
Your Name suits u cause ur rhymes are old like the [Midevil]
You Spit like a Wench U call urself the King its [Unbelivable]
Ur rhymes come out like a Kid throwin [Stones]
Im shootin off catapults leavin u in [Bones]
Your Flow blows more then a Pregnant [Chick]
If this was Basketball ud shoot nothin but [Bricks]
I just Destroyed U and ur Enitre Lyrical [Court]<--old word
Well i sent u on a Futuristic ride to hell andu cant [Abort]

there

u now have 4 minutes untill its a DQ

dq
 

ye dis is a win 4 relic cos of the disqualification

return da favor and vote 4 me afta i finished my battle

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121849

cheerz
holla at ya boy luminaz

Invalid vote. Removed
-strobe

here's my shit
and i had 30 mins, not 20 mins bitch!!

this aint my best shit, but enuff to beat this clown

This ReLiC got no winz, he’s startin a brand new rap class
He got zero skillz, his rapper got more victories than he has
And wat bout ure sig, how u gone camouflage sumthin u aint got
Ure ass would probably get more flow if I sewed ure mouth shut
I’m a load up this 12 gauge then ure forehead I’ll ‘X’ to mark it
Cock-that-shit, pop-that-shit after I hang u up for a human target
Shit this cud be Scooby-Doo cuz I’m about to solve this mystery
I’m gonna expose this bitch and make him a tru ReLiC of history
This bitch so dumb he whipped out his dick when I said draw ure 9mm [millimetre]
There ain’t no dickridin bitch, now I’m gonna have to kill-a-cheater
How u even gonna expect to beat me wit rhymes so generic
I show no mercy when I rip the shit out of this ancient ReLiC
When I’m thorugh I’ll have ure ass beggin for a paramedic!!

oh yea my fault lol uppin votes poeple

spellin mistake on last line
shud say
When I’m through I’ll have ure ass beggin for a paramedic!!

but y'all probly knew that!!

GET UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin here poeple comeon

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121809
^^^^ vote

flow-Solo
punches-Solo,most of Relic's shit was a straight up diss
complexity-both of you were really simple.But SOLO,I'm used to having you be more complex.This really isn't ur best verse
wordplay-neither of you really had wordplay

Vote-King Solo

damm...ya'll both came kind of week...

opener-solo
structure-tie
punchlines-solo
creativity-umm solo
wordplay-nun from both
personals-solo
finisher-solo
enjoyed-solo..lol damm dis shit was wun sided man rel u got keep creative with ya bars dunn

my vote-solo

yea yea thnx 4 da honest votes!!


but yo i gave 30 mins to spit and then i my fuckin dad asked me to do sum shit that took like 20 mins
so that shit i threw together took like 10mins and it aint my best i'll admit!!

yea....uppin

i gotta give dis to da king even doe da battle wont dat hot he came harder wit his punches den da otha cat both of yall really should elevate

v/king

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

uppin these votes ppl and i'll return tha favour!!

thats y u get votes b.c fi someone votes for u u just go vote for them

vice versa
:nono:

no bitch
i vote honest all the time and i expect ppl to do the same 4 me

the way i see it is that if ppl take the time to drop an honest vote on my battles
then i'm gonna do the same and drop an honest vote on their battles

dont get mad just cuz u losin
and cuz u cheated to get ure one vote

i cheated ok aint my fault he cant read....and ur gettin votes b/c u vote for other poeple and u knwo it

Ur the King?More like the Bitch of the [Palace]
My Mic as my weapon hitten u harder then a [Malace]<--old weapon
ok... decent.
Your Name suits u cause ur rhymes are old like the [Midevil]
You Spit like a Wench U call urself the King its [Unbelivable]
um.. you really could have done more with that set up line.. the second line didn't have that much to do with the first
Ur rhymes come out like a Kid throwin [Stones]
Im shootin off catapults leavin u in [Bones]
you dont leave someone "in bones"
Your Flow blows more then a Pregnant [Chick]
If this was Basketball ud shoot nothin but [Bricks]
ok.. kinda played metas but at least you are using them.. now you have to develop them more so they sound more original, use wordplay, etc...
I just Destroyed U and ur Enitre Lyrical [Court]<--old word
Well i sent u on a Futuristic ride to hell andu cant [Abort]
blah




This ReLiC got no winz, he’s startin a brand new rap class
He got zero skillz, his rapper got more victories than he has
haha... nice
And wat bout ure sig, how u gone camouflage sumthin u aint got
Ure ass would probably get more flow if I sewed ure mouth shut
ok personal, second line decent
I’m a load up this 12 gauge then ure forehead I’ll ‘X’ to mark it
Cock-that-shit, pop-that-shit after I hang u up for a human target
akward wording for a forced rhyme... bleh
Shit this cud be Scooby-Doo cuz I’m about to solve this mystery
I’m gonna expose this bitch and make him a tru ReLiC of history
i like the name bit
This bitch so dumb he whipped out his dick when I said draw ure 9mm [millimetre]
There ain’t no dickridin bitch, now I’m gonna have to kill-a-cheater
played bit on the 9mm dick, but decent i guess
How u even gonna expect to beat me wit rhymes so generic
I show no mercy when I rip the shit out of this ancient ReLiC
ok, not much here, not your best line
When I’m thorugh I’ll have ure ass beggin for a paramedic!!
bah.. i dont like 3 lines for one rhyme, and this isn't a great closer


ok royal wins for having a really nice start, even if he fell off. relic, you are elevating, which is good, but you have to start going with personals - check proflies, check sigs, work with names, etc. you had the palace theme going on.. but you didn't do much with it. work on getting your setup lines and punches to string together better.

ight thnx for info

yeh yeh
its all gud
no more bitchin relic
we both need to elevate
siht everyone on this damn site cud elevate cuz no ones perfect

get uppin sum more votes to end this battle man!!

uppin this shit playas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

get uppin the votes on this shit!!!!!!
keep em honest
and i'll return the fave!!

king solo just nailed relic, you had extreamly big punches, nice, structure flow and multies. They were more complex, more creative human target, i like dat verse. He took the battle and deserves it cause he seems like a natural, god talent man.

get uppin the votes on this shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin ppl
get sum votes on this shit!!

uppin for some votes man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yo uppin on this shit
lets get this battle closed

c'mon
fuckin uppin on this shit
i dont wanna have to keep doin this so just drop sum votes plz!!!!

Y'all came weak in this one

opener-solo
structure-tie
punchlines-solo
creativity-umm solo
wordplay-nun from both
personals-solo
opener-solo
finisher-solo
I wasn't I'mpressed be neither drop but solo was till better in this one by far, relic u gotta elevate, solo ok but work on personals
Vote: Solo