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vinman vs. spiky2k8 (rematch)
you know how it go
10 - 15 lines no d/ r no hate no crew no biting have untill tommro at 5:00 to post |
u spit first
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havent you guys had like 10 re-matches....
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naw man he didnt spit the last one and no free posting
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vinman i lost last time but this time win'n is
gone be real easy cant u hear me / ok yo shit was whack last time but it felt like it was a life time / u guess u thinkn u gone beat me but most of tha bitches didn't feel me/ see last time u won caus of luck but people know that yo dumbass sucked/ i dont mean tobe disrespectful but my shit is a fuckn mouthful/ this aint april fool bitch caus u was a tool to begin with/ u called me out this time but u dont know my rhymes better caus my shit is scare'n ya/ u hidn like little bitch caus i'm fin to feed u to my doverman / this rap terrific so u better leave off site real quick caus my shit fin to make sick/ ight then u weak bnitch i'm finish and and i just served u like some fishes/ vote 4 me |
uppin 4 votes
uppin 4 votes uppin 4 votes i need them votes |
oh u have gotten beta spiky way beta but jus not good enough to beat here it comes
check it here i come and im ready to rumble, not going to be humble(nice)// gona put this bitch on the floor and make him tumble// my flow is great, i dish on a plate// if this man win its cuse he got the voters to hate// spiky say that he's from the from the windy city, throwing puches at this man all yall can have for him pity(to feel sorry)// have the time his shit makes no since// hiitng his head making body making whole head dense(soft)// he got the whackest name that ever saw// him being on this site SHOULD BE AGINST THE DAMN LAW// my flow is killing this man tearing him up// my punches so hard i broke his tiny ass cup (something you use to protect your nuts) i hope everyone thinks that i have killt this nigger by the name spiky2k8// dished a whoppin on his mamas favorites plates. |
damn i fucked up my struture oh well
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uppin for votes
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need those votes people
help me out like they say uppin 4 vote |
Ok wow Spike u didnt evan rhyme wtf bro Elevate.Vin same for u but still nice battle.
Flow-tie Multis-Vin Structure-bad for both Punches-i guess vin Ight uppin Honost returns plz(in sig) |
Well i cant vote but theres what i thought bout it.
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what nigga i did rhyme name one time i didnt and i will forget about it
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uppin for some real votes cuse this nigga dont know anything must be a newb
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no free posting bitch
terror i'll kick yo ass you stupid ass hoe |
uppin for votes
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uppin for some damn votes
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Vin ur an idiot i voted for u u ass and i didnt say u didnt rhyme i said u needed to elevate
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dont free post nigga
damn u dumb got no common sense what so ever |
Ive been here for 1 maybe 2 hours and ur more of a n00b then me Son.
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please vote for me ya'll
please thank ya'll very much |
uppin for votes
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some one please vote damn
god lee vote people dont got all day bitches |
i would like some damn votes here
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uppin for for some damn votes
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can i get some votes pls damn i want some votes
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can somebody please vote on this battle
please this was a waste of credit |
pls uppn for votes
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uppin for some damn votes
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well, this was a pretty weak battle. Both of y'all need to elevate. Spiky, you need to make your stuff rhyme better, man. Also, your flow was off a little. And your punches weren't that hard. Other dude, you need to rhyme more too. Your flow was aiight, and you had some decent punches. So You won this won.
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thankx man for the vote and thnkx for the elevating tip im tryin uppin for some votes
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man i wish people would vote some time damn
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uppin in this bitch iight
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damn it fuckn dickridin no cheasting bitch
why u got to cheat |
who the fuck cheating noone dickridin man so jus keep cool igght
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vote pls
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vinman easealy won this shit he beat spikey in every aspect of this match both of you need work.vinman your structure needs a TON of work. and spikey i seen yo battle for real and now you didnt.you need to fix your structure and punches and the same for you vinman
ma vote vinman |
uppin for some damn votes and explain yo votes pls
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less break dis down
SPIKY: not a very good battle,you need to use different rhyming words,not just me and me,time and time,use your brain to find some new ones. best line:i cant find one worst line:your whole verse overall:3/10.horrible VINMAN:you obviously had the upperhand on dis battle,you had good flow,good rhyming,whoever said you didnt rhyme was wrong cause you rhymed da whole time,but you dont have to explain what some of your words mean. best line:he got the whackest name that ever saw// him being on this site SHOULD BE AGINST THE DAMN LAW// worst line:i cant find one. overall:7/10.solid performance VOTE: Vinman |
spike - aight first off...i've told u before ima tell u again....RHYME UR WERDS....thats the first part of rappin....plus u had no punches at all....go to tutorials and lwean bout punches and personals....ya flow sucks.....fix erything u do lol....
vinman - urs wasnt that great but u rhymed MOST of the time...u threw sum punches....even tho they werent good they were better than none....elevate kid....go to tutorials and learn stuff cuz thats the only way to get better..... Vote - vinman |
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