Terror Vs. sun jian
 

Ight here it is.

No recyclin
No feedin
No bitin
No D/R's
No crew/hate votes either

Atfer u check in we have 30 mins to post

No show close this plz

yo im hear id this a blind spitt checkin in

yea 30 mins startin now

Now its time to knock were u belong,The bottom of the Barrel//
Your rhymes are more of a Joke then a Show with Will Farrel//
I was readin ur verses and noticed how ur Flow is Tired//
There Older then 50 gettin shot I guess rhymes dont Expire//
You shouldnt have Accepted,B/c you offer nothin Lyrical//
its like u in the Special Olympics for u winnin would be a Miracle//
Ur my first Win like its a Math problem take out the Exponential//
Dope lyrics and leavin a Flamin mic from me is an Essential//
You never stood a chance goin aginst a Mc of my Calibur//
You just got Crushed by the King but no need to call me Sir//

ight there it is

*** my 4th line is messed it should be:"There Older then 50 gettin shot I thought those rhymes should have Expired"

i was typen as it came out i dont double check sry

here go a few rhymes im about to bust.
yo rhymes so old they startin to rust.
i merk you as if i was a mod.
some say i got the curing touch of god.
when my fists and your face come intact.
you be like "he merked me but cleaned up my cateracks."
yo your gurl is straight up fine.
so fine i had to put that in my rhyme.
but i had to be sippin some hipnotic.
cause thats the only way your gurl will look exotic.
i can go evil and fill your ass up wit terror.
so much it will take ten of yo dicks to measure.
should have never put that its givin you pleasure.
but every mans trash is another ones treasure.

vote king of WU uppin fo votes you know who settn the foundation.

ight lookin for votes plz
Will return with Honost votes

terror set up our battle now, since u done wit dis one dawg ight...

Yo uppin votes plz i return With Honost votes.

yo sombody vote please i want to do other battles now.

come yall uppin

ill vote, check out Me Vs Terror, holla
:shoot: :shoot: :shoot:

uppin fo votes

Still Uppin here

votes plz

uppin fo votes yall.

Yo Vote plz will return Honsotly

uppin come on yall

uppin fo votes yall need them holla back

Uppin plz

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Cant u just vote ill return

sun gian because your flow was amazingly good and punches. Liked your sense of humour and liked your shit. Better than the other.

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Thats D/R and will be removed for bad feed
Uppin REAL Votes

how i dont know fine mind.

still not good Vote anyway uppin

uppin

terror - aight good meta's!!...but werk on usin personals cuz they hit really hard....but u had good punches in here.....nice flow....wordplay was good....keep elevatin....got potential...
sun - ok u had basic rhymes and punches....use meta's and personals.....flow was ok.....wordplay was fine....but it was too basic....elevate on vocab and punches....use personals....go to tutorials n learn that ish....

vote - terror

ight still uppin here

Votes plz

uppin yo

yo uppin here plz

Still needin votes

Now its time to knock were u belong,The bottom of the Barrel//
Your rhymes are more of a Joke then a Show with Will Farrel//

^Ok Opener Could Have Been' Better!!! 6/10

I was readin ur verses and noticed how ur Flow is Tired//
There Older then 50 gettin shot I guess rhymes dont Expire//

^Nice Punch' .... 7/10

Ur my first Win like its a Math problem take out the Exponential//
Dope lyrics and leavin a Flamin mic from me is an Essential//

^Nice Vocab' ...!! But Wheres The Punch? lol!! 7/10

You never stood a chance goin aginst a Mc of my Calibur//
You just got Crushed by the King but no need to call me Sir//

^Weak Closer' ... 2/10...!! lol

Checckit Checck

here go a few rhymes im about to bust.
yo rhymes so old they startin to rust.

^Alright' .. A Bit Shallow' ..!! No Bullshit Weak Opener' ! 1/10

yo your gurl is straight up fine.
so fine i had to put that in my rhyme.

^WTF Is This Shit? .... See Its Shit Like This That You Don't Need To Involve In Your Rhymes' .. Haha!!! 0/10

but i had to be sippin some hipnotic.
cause thats the only way your gurl will look exotic.

^Once Again No Need To Input It In Your Verse' .. 0/10 Your Coming At His Girl' .. Stupid Trick!!

i can go evil and fill your ass up wit terror.
so much it will take ten of yo dicks to measure.
should have never put that its givin you pleasure.
but every mans trash is another ones treasure.

^ Ok' ..! Went Off Subject There' ....!!!!!!! WTF???


Vote: Terror' .. !!! Ah Ha

ight uppin

uppin yo

okay umm cool battle

opener-terror
structure-terror..sun ya lines got short then long
punchlines-terror he had a few
creativity-terror
multis-nun
wordplay-nun
enjoyed-terror....sun ya verse was real basic and u aint have no punches or nothin really so u lost dis with ease dunn

my vote-terror...

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Votes plz