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20 GraND 05-02-04 08:00 PM

20 GraND Vs. Terror
 
aight u know the rulz...
no crew/hate votes

blind spit...
starts 20 mins after u check in, so check it...

MoTiF 05-02-04 08:01 PM

check

MoTiF 05-02-04 08:14 PM

yo i need an extension im not gonnabe here for liek 10 misn i gotta help dad

20 GraND 05-02-04 08:15 PM

Im da bomb, like a nuke, when its aimed at ur home,
Just like the archduke sentenced the beheading of ur dome (<--head ),
U think u got flow, so i sat there to conniver,
the only flow youll be doing is down the nile river,
Ur like no one else, unlike the rest,
cuz when ppl see u they put on their faggot proof vest,
My rhymes cut of ur circulation cuz they are so tight,
like eminem, hiding in ur closet, u masturbate all night,
No one understands u, they call u sean paul,
Get challanged by Da Army , Ur best bet is to AWall.

20 GraND 05-02-04 08:18 PM

ight ill give u a few mins. I better not catch u feeding or w/e.
:shoot: :shoot: :shoot: :shoot:

MoTiF 05-02-04 08:19 PM

Ight

This kid Reppin Da Army but he Fires with a Pee Shooter//
My flwo will haunt u forvever get into ur dreams like Freddy Krueger//
20 Grand?Your rhymes are worth less then twenty Cents//
Rappin for u is a Struggle for me its like a 6th Sense//
Can u hold up aginst this Inferno or is it to Intense//
You dont deserve a Crew your still have Unknown Statistics//
Your in need of a New hobbie u dont have Rap Characteristics//
Well ill rap you up here as if you were a Christmas Package//
I just Sliced and Diced you like a Head of Cabbage//

nvm im done

MoTiF 05-02-04 08:20 PM

Ok uppin votes

20 GraND 05-02-04 08:21 PM

UppN for votes, i think i owned this kid... holla back!
:laugh: :shoot: :laugh: :shoot:

MoTiF 05-02-04 08:23 PM

haha thats funny but its ur opinion......Uppin

20 GraND 05-02-04 08:45 PM

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^UppN fo votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^
dont let this be a sleeper lol :nono:

20 GraND 05-02-04 09:10 PM

uppn for votes, lets do this ight?
Lets get some votes up in hurrrrrrrrr!

MoTiF 05-02-04 10:36 PM

Yo still Uppin here

E Looch 05-02-04 10:54 PM

This kid Reppin Da Army but he Fires with a Pee Shooter//
My flwo will haunt u forvever get into ur dreams like Freddy Krueger//
20 Grand?Your rhymes are worth less then twenty Cents//
Rappin for u is a Struggle for me its like a 6th Sense//
Can u hold up aginst this Inferno or is it to Intense//
You dont deserve a Crew your still have Unknown Statistics//
Your in need of a New hobbie u dont have Rap Characteristics//
Well ill rap you up here as if you were a Christmas Package//
I just Sliced and Diced you like a Head of Cabbage//

^^ not a good verse but neither where that good but this verse had better consistent punchs in it and 20 grand u had a decent srop just didnt feal it no real hard punchs or personals and thats waht wins battles

MoTiF 05-02-04 10:56 PM

ight 1-0 still uppin votes

MoTiF 05-02-04 11:34 PM

uppin

20 GraND 05-03-04 02:42 PM

Uppn fo votes.... holla...
lts do this ight!!!!!!

20 GraND 05-03-04 09:57 PM

Uppn dawg, this has been a sleeper for a few days...

MoTiF 05-03-04 10:31 PM

Lookin for votes

20 GraND 05-04-04 02:50 PM

stil UPPn this one has been sleepn for a while....

20 GraND 05-04-04 04:00 PM

A uppn plz.. we need some ovtes in this bitch.. ight?

MoTiF 05-04-04 04:30 PM

Lookin for votes plz

Blunt_Man420 05-04-04 07:59 PM

Terror takes this one no questions asked. Better flow, punches, and everythign else.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

MoTiF 05-04-04 08:01 PM

Ight still uppin votes

20 GraND 05-04-04 08:02 PM

plz expalin shit... ur vote will be disqualified because of no explanation...

20 GraND 05-04-04 10:12 PM

uppN fo votes why u gotta sleep dis?

20 GraND 05-05-04 08:50 AM

UppN

20 GraND 05-05-04 02:43 PM

UppN

MoTiF 05-05-04 05:14 PM

Uppin plz

MoTiF 05-05-04 09:43 PM

Lookin for votes plz

MoTiF 05-06-04 04:25 PM

still uppin

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 05-06-04 05:23 PM

Im da bomb, like a nuke, when its aimed at ur home,
Just like the archduke sentenced the beheading of ur dome (<--head ),

^Safe Opener Nothing Impressive!' ... 7/10

No one understands u, they call u sean paul,
Get challanged by Da Army , Ur best bet is to AWall.

^Weak Closer' ... **Not Feeling It 4/10

Checckity Checck:

This kid Reppin Da Army but he Fires with a Pee Shooter//
My flwo will haunt u forvever get into ur dreams like Freddy Krueger//

^Alright Opener' ..!! Haha... Safe Punch 8/10

You dont deserve a Crew your still have Unknown Statistics//
Your in need of a New hobbie u dont have Rap Characteristics//

^Nice Vocab. !! And Heated Punch 9/10

Well ill rap you up here as if you were a Christmas Package//
I just Sliced and Diced you like a Head of Cabbage//

^Ok' Closer!!! 6/10

.... Alright!!


Vote: Terror

Da Vinci 05-06-04 08:12 PM

Opener- Terror, nice the pea shooter was funny as hell
Flow-tie, both were very decent, and easy to chew through
Punches- A close battle but I thought terror's were funnier so I'm give'n it to him
Creativity- Close again,but I'm give'n it to 20 grand

Infamous J 05-06-04 08:14 PM

both rappers were wack and used repeated postes
but they were battlin and da best lyricism is terror
my overall rating:
terror: 4/10
2o grand: 2/10

MoTiF 05-06-04 08:37 PM

uppin still

hotrod2k4 05-07-04 11:26 AM

definitely terror on this one,the freddy line was a great opener

MoTiF 05-07-04 01:38 PM

Vote plz

MoTiF 05-07-04 07:39 PM

Uppin will return qwith honost votes

MoTiF 05-08-04 07:38 PM

Uppin here

FLooZe 05-08-04 11:20 PM

ok dis was a pretty tight battle.
20 grand i was really feelin you verse.you had some good disses,structure,flow,and i was feeling your verse more.
terror,your battle was tight too,it was just that you cabbage line fucked it all up i think.if you had put a better closing line,you wouldve got my vote most likely.but,since you didnt,20 gets ma vote.but you had good flow,structure,wordplay.god job allayall

MoTiF 05-08-04 11:23 PM

ahahahahhahaha thats Fuckin Hilarious still uppin though


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