terror vs. Spiky2k8
 

rules are bitch
no crew vote
no hater vote

u spit first sense i set it
up

yo rap is due in a hour
mine whenever

urs is also due in an hour not when ever

u ready bitch caus u fin to spit
yo rhyme if u dont u 4feit

ok u dont knwo how to make rules so here they are

15 line max
No recyclin
No bitin
No feedin
No D/R's
No hate votes
we each have 1 hour startin now
If any rules are broke its Auto DQ

Ight here it is

You try to be hard so i Accepted Your Call-Out//
But after im done rippen u ur gonna have to Crawl-Out//
Spikey u have no spike ur more like a Stick//
Your rhymes are Busted like a Foriegn Flick//
Your record is horrible but it reps its Holder//
Im spitten Fire while ur spits get Older and Colder//
You shouldnt have challenged me u bit off more then u can Chew//
Your the worst on this site..And u wonder why u cant get in a Crew//
Well this sums up another loss added to your Record//
I just Squashed u like a Was a Stampeding Herd//

Done Dont forget rules

nigga i make da rules u follow them ight
no fuck if ands buts about it
i set it up my rules got a probable bitch

Spiky read ya PM I sent ya.....aight.....................

come on man yo shit was weak as hell i thought
i heard a dowbell/
u got no types wins caus u scared caus i'm fin
to fry yo ass medium raw/
i called u out caus u talkn shit for nother bitch
that can hardly spit/
what da fuck was u try do there u aint rap'n
against winnie the pooh bear/
u thought this shit was gon 2b easy but my raps
is makn u queezy /
so dont try to fuckn tez me cause u cant even reach
me/
i know u angry but i'm hungry i had to try to
yo ma stone see so i can suck on her little tities/
after i'm done with u you'll be another mother fucka
issue/
finish man

vote 4 me

uppin for some votes
uppin for some fuckn votes

vote for me

Lol uppin votes

uppin for some mother Fucking votes
shit nother waste of fucking credit

ok check it

spiky you still need to fix your structure and stop stretchi nyour bars out and get some complexity to your flow actually get creative and try work on strong consistent punchs

terror decent verse you need to elevate your vocab and creativitie as well and work on stayin consistent i like how you didnt stray off on boastin yourself like most new people on this site got potential just work on wordplay

vote terror

ight thats 1-0

so what i need votes quick and fast
uppin for votes

still uppin

You try to be hard so i Accepted Your Call-Out//
But after im done rippen u ur gonna have to Crawl-Out//
blah
Spikey u have no spike ur more like a Stick//
Your rhymes are Busted like a Foriegn Flick//
um.. ok concept on the first line i guess... but not well worded, second line is whack
Your record is horrible but it reps its Holder//
Im spitten Fire while ur spits get Older and Colder//
do better with the first line.. second line whack again
You shouldnt have challenged me u bit off more then u can Chew//
Your the worst on this site..And u wonder why u cant get in a Crew//
ok.. decent personal again.. but stop using generic punches
Well this sums up another loss added to your Record//
I just Squashed u like a Was a Stampeding Herd//
no


come on man yo shit was weak as hell i thought
i heard a dowbell/
u got no types wins caus u scared caus i'm fin
to fry yo ass medium raw/
rhyme? terrible
i called u out caus u talkn shit for nother bitch
that can hardly spit/
what da fuck was u try do there u aint rap'n
against winnie the pooh bear/
worse
u thought this shit was gon 2b easy but my raps
is makn u queezy /
so dont try to fuckn tez me cause u cant even reach
me/
worse
i know u angry but i'm hungry i had to try to
yo ma stone see so i can suck on her little tities/
after i'm done with u you'll be another mother fucka
issue/
horrible


terror wins for being way less whack. spikey gets no advice, you suck to much, just go listen to rap until you understand what a rhyme is. terror, you gotta use more wordplay and metahs to develop your punches... like for the spikey line, don't just say he has no spikes so he's like a stick, say something more like "that name doesn't fit you, you got as many spikes as a stick" or something. i mean the concept isn't great but at least work on the wording or something.

ight 2-0 still uppin

come on people vote for me i need ya'll vote
uppin for votes

Vote plz will return with Honost return

aight, this was an aight battle, but i feel terror took this 4sure, he was more creative wit his punches and was somewhat OK on his complexity!! It was a fairly even battle, but terror was definatly more creative!!

vote: terror

hit up that battle in my link!!

/1

ight 2 more keep votes comin

yo, hit me up wit a vote!!

Im Votin For Terror Becuase His Shit Was Better Than Yours. Your Bars Were Too Stretched Out Also. But I Give It To Terror.

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Ok 1 more vote to end ths peeps uppin

ma votes goes to terror because he really came like he wanted to win spkiey just spit played lines and he did'nt really rhyme.misspelled wordz all over the place spikey you are good but you better than that terror keep on winning and work on your punches

ma vote goes to terror