J Willz vs. Quickpunch
 

ight man....spit ur shit..AND PEOPLE I DIDNT CHOOSE 2 ACCEPT THIS...HE SET IT UP...BUT I'LL TAKE IT A BATTLE IS A BATTLE...SO IM READY FOR WAR.....

Hurry The Fuck Up...u Have Fucking 5mins To Drop Ur Shit Or Ur Dq....damn Man...dont Set Shit Up And Not Do It....quit Findin Ppls Shit To Spit.....just Spit...pce...u Have Exactly 5 Mins

haha ight..sorry i was already pissed so u added on to it..my bad..check itYour no match for me so i might as well burn you
Your punches so late their breaking curfew
you've probably written raps about the looks of females
but couldn't get ass if they discount the puss at retails
you're a long way from home like Dorathy, click them heels
if this battle win was a dish you would miss your meals
u have no skills, im’a keep this real, so here’s the deal
u rhymes wouldn't be tight if they were air-tight sealed
Score 0-To-A-Million, I'm A Commodity-To-Children
You Cant Hold My Weight Like Starter Body-Building
man, your to fucking weak to be my arch enemy
dont matter whos rhymes you bite, wont see the end-a-me
J WILLZ i hope i dont have to see ur rhymes, i know they'll be pitiful
ur chances of winning are slimmer than hell experiencing a biblical miracle
Shit On this rugged terrain, You have to be hard or U fold man
because this Fake MC’s coming up short like Gary Coleman
i never spit first, cause that leads to battles being rhetorical
its like ur lyrics are having sex wit history, there fuckin historical
this kid wants to murder me sittin in his computer seat
the only way you gonna erase me is by pressin control alt delete

I gotta give this to quick punch cuz he came hard with the punches and his flow was also good...

J willz.. u need to elevate.. just work on ur structure and youll be set.. u can work on ur flow too

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ight keep the honest votes coming...yall dont sleep on this...NOTE I DID NOT ASK TO BATTLE HIM...HE SET IT UP AND SO I HAD NO CHOICE BUT 2 SPIT...SORRY IF THIS IS AN EASY WIN...

i'd vote but i know i'm black listed anyways jwillz took this .... quickpunches rhymes are way to played atleast j willz showed some creativity

this piece is very actice...

can we get some feedback...

Oh, and did yu say this was an easy win... :laugh: ... ya verse didnt back you up..

can we get some votes please.....thanks man id appreciate it.....

This is an easy win for quickpunch.it seems you are just too much better than him.Nothing much that I can say.JWiilz,battle somebody newto rap.Your verse had the flow,but it was simple and weak.

vote-Quickpunch

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121809
^^ooh,and drop a honest vote in my battle

ight thanks shady...uppin this thing and from here on aint battling any newbs thats fo sho.....so can yall hit this up

Yo i gatta give this to QuickPunch.. His ender was sick.. And i liked his punches..
JWillz i didn't like the way your spit flowed it was lacking in that area and in the structure...

Quick had the better punches.. better ender
JWillz your ended was weak, and ure punches didnt really connect...

My vote goes to Quick...

j willz - Aight ur flow was traight but u didnt have any hot punches....u tried a couple but they were weak....u need to come at him hard wit personals....use meta's....ur verse was boring as fuck....jus elevate n go to tutorials and learn the ish and how to do it....

quickpunch - u had a good flow....u had real punches....keep usin dem personals and meta's....u had good wordplay....straight verse...easy win....keep elevatin and stay active....

Vote - quickpunch

quik-you had everything better....theres nothing
I really can say....your punches came harder
He really had weak punches....You was better aight

J-nice for a newb becuz ya gettin the hang of it
Since ya new you need ta work on ya punches a lil
harder aight...strcuture was crusial and that made it
really easy to read...keep elevatin studdy punches and ya will be up there

v/quik becuz he came hard thats all Return the favor against shady...its in front lines nice this is a honest vote I sware on my grandpas grave that it is so just ta let yall know so yall wont complain.....

Return the favor im waitin.....

ight uppin...one more vote for an easy K.O....id love an K.O. lol...it'll be my 4th or so..

yo upping this bitch....come on yall...just 1 more vote...EXPLAIN IT FAIRLY WELL.....IGHT ID APPRECIATE IT..THANKS

Ight Still Upping...one More Vote And This Nigga Is Toast.....haha He Thought He Stood A Chance..not To Be Coocky But Damn He Didnt Even Have 1 Good Line....neva Battling A Newb From Now On....waiting For Disaterpiece To Respond 2 My Call Out...pce

J Willz Got Ripped Triple E's ever heard of dat ELAVATE ELAVATE ELAVATE now u did nigga u Got Ripped


quick Punchs u Did some hot Punches i felt all ya Line so u did Sick left his ass in da cEmetery to rot dogg u rippedhim

Break Down

Quick punch

Flow 8/10
Rhymes9/10
Structure 7/10
opener 7/10
CLoser 8/10
39/50

J Willz
Rhymes 5/10
Flow 7/10
Structure5/10
Opener 4/10
CLoser 5/10
26/50

VOTE QUICK PUNCH