YaYoMan vs. Dawgfatha_13
 

rules are

no d/r
no unexplained votes
10-20 lines
you spit first

less do dis shit.you spit first.i cant spit today so ill spit tomorrow.

nigga ill do this when i want its fukin my time nigga

yo man its a rule for when you gotta spit ive been on dis site longer dan u nigga.u got to follo da rules

damn yall niggaz gone BATTLE OR NOT DOGGS i wanna see dis shit

Yo yall sorry bout that alright im ready yall ready

Vote on this battle ill return the favor i always do heres the link

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122221

I cop my yayo nigga just to floss my ice
this battle here, u think it will, but it wont be nuthin nice
Fourteen, damn son, u to damn young
me battlin u is like rapin ya wit a gun
Nigga i puff the herb, u to young to smoke
as a matter a fact playboy, u to young to choke
sayin u fuk bitches like its an everyday thang
the last thing u fuked was ya mamas pinky ring
Haha nigga aint i leavin u in mute
to damn fukin easy for a target to shoot
Ya ready, i seen how AMO fuked u up
now its my turn son, i ride till i bust a nut
im a Yung blood, canada needs to respect that
the games over niggas u need to chek that
So ima end it now, so i dont waste ya time
u just a lil nigga, ya bitch ass is mine...BITCH

i happen to be da best dat can be//
mothafucka you must be outta yo mind to battle me//
i blew away cripple wit a flick of my wrist..
thas 1 man down you da next on ma list//
i got to put you in yo place//
do dis quick and wit grace//
you da student im da teacher//
you da attendent im da preacher//
everyone knows you sesceptible to injury//
a got wuts called wanksta invincibility//
wanksta i jack yo bulletproof vest//
mothafucka im da saviour of yall,in other words im da best//
in da blink of an eye i can exterminate a snipers nest//
lissen you cant beat dis emcee//
i got so much power imma pop yo ass publicly//
everyone knows you a fagged dat grabs mens asses//
you grabbem so much they turn to molasses//
lissen even if i lose i dun really care//
all i care bout now is ma money and ma hair//
you gon admire as i get da publicity//
for havin twice as good flow as dat nigga jay-z//
in dis battle you got served//
now go practice and next time leave behind yo dickridin herd//

less get some votes in hurr to end dis shit.less see who won dis shit

Yo dogg that was pretty good i looked into ya other battles and maybe this was the best

yo dawg was nice flow really formed well just watch out for stretched lines my man also punches was decent

yoyo-So ima end it now, so i dont waste ya time
u just a lil nigga, ya bitch ass is mine...BITCH

ya need harder lines dog there just not hard enuff and to basic your format was decent but wordplay wasn t keep strivin its what we here for

VOTE-DAWG

Yoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo My Nigga Dawgfatha Is Elevatin// Yo Dawg Keep Battlin And Keep Reppin//

Here We Go

Yayoman (dumb Name)'

Flowz 5/10
Punches 7/10
Struture 7/10
Vocab (none)
Personals (none)

Dawg

Flowz 9/10
Struture 9/10
Punches 9/10
Vocab 6/10
Personals 7/10


Vote=dawg

hey yo people tonyself is da only one in hurr who actually voted! lets get some votes in hurr to end dis.

Yeah dogg we need some votes in this bitch so holla at ya boi

yooooooooo peeps stop sleepin on dis battle.uppin for votes

Damn nigga we need some muthafukin votes in this bitch
Dawgfatha 13 my nigga got the first vote congrates

thx man.but were still uppin for votes.stop sleepin on dis battle bitches! no beef yayoman

Oh no beef at all if any thang i got respect
but these niggas really need to hit up this battle

dawg-Nice spit........You came hard and weak with it which means you took this
really by a lil though......you had everything uncluding similies and
metaphores......just work on a few things and ya will be there......

yayo-Came kind of weak....Work on something structure was ok
but work on some thing.....balace was good but some was
weak and some was hard.....But keep elevatin and work on alot
of things

yo thx for the vote. uppin.........................

This was a close battle both were whack, no good punches no real good personals, One one hand I want to give it to Dogg cause he had better flow but his punches weren't as good as YaYo's. I don't think better flow should get a win in a battle not unless its topical or some shit like that. Becaue YaYo had better punches that were more thought out he gets my vote.

dawg won this because he had better flow and rhyms the other was way off because he kept making mistakes of putting the flow and rhymes. Nothing decent just a basic battle here with no creativity, no complexety, no multies but have to say that dawg came in the hardest with insultive words.

uppin.dont sleep on this battle peeps

This was kinda of a close battle, after I read Ya's vote I knew that Dogg would only need to come reasonably hard to beat him, and he did. Better punches all round, better flow and more creativity thats why he take this win. Maybe next time YaYo.

uppin

Yayoman
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 5/10

Dawg
Flow 9/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 8/10
Punches 9/10
Humor 7/10

vote = dawg

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yo dis battle wuz ight i guess it wuz kinda sloppy but if i had 2 give it to one of u i would say dawg cuz he had harda punches and a better sense of flow so overall dawg won

vote=dawgfatha_13