MaRVOLOUSJ1009 vs Perpetu-ill*pleez vote*
 

aight 10-20 lines dunny.....who eva gon vote pleez explain ya shit or it wont count...sicne i posted da shit up u spittin first..check in dunny...lets go

wtf? is up with the name, are you trying to be cool?
or are you just stupid?.... saying you're sick, is just being a fool
stay in school, and learn to spell.... get an education
stop your impersonation... of sickness, you are just an embarassment
facing harassment.... they way i whore you
"da sickest on this site"... is a very over-exaggerated statement
its very clear when you are in a crew called "royal scikness"
who proclaims themselves as "sick", especially when they get raped with their dress
please, you're an ignorance like mosquitoes
.....always biting and cant get rid of them
please you fucking suck, and you're a loser! your name says it all!

come on that only took me 2 mins.... hurry yo and post

lmao........

stop it white boy u'z a bitch dont talkin about handin me shells-
*its very clear when you are in a crew called "royal scikness"<<<<him*
i know u must feel like da "odd" 1 cuzz ya dickhead as cant "even" spell-

opener^^^^^

he pick da wrong somebody tell me y would dis lame battle????-
keep talkin tuff "100%" of da time im not gon "warn" u ima just "aim" at u-

with big bullets dat a take da head off a lier,y u rap a label neva gon sign ya-
u suck only time u been in a "hott-thread" was when ya "sweater's on fire"-

u fukked up shouldn't of tried dis vet,i dont beleiev u ryde with tecs-
everbody ill so fukkin dumb he caught "aids from havin cyber sex"-

u wun of my fans nigga u done quoted every bar marv said-
i told em dont battle me but like dis smile :banghead: ill gota hard head-

in bitches slapped u was talkin shit like u really could post fire-
no lier!!...dogg u trash u rap like "dame dash & p diddy's" ya ghost writer-

im attackin dis lame,while he online spittin trash im smashin his dame-
spittin like dat u askin 4 fame, keep dis part "Perpetu" & take off da other half of ya name-

u not ill royal sickness is where da best at fool,jay dont stress dat dude-
u suck just "playin sick" like u wanted da stay home da day u had a test at school-

GON......bring dem votes in ppl

cant believe you tried to get on me cause of a typo, thats so newbish

but wateva, im not swaying
votes please....

shut up dogg u said i couldn't spell u da muthafukka dat cant spell..

what the fuck a BATTLE over who spells better its based on whos shit was hotter but marvo u where right man Royal Scikness lol hahaha

nah dunn it aint dat its dat dez muthafukkaz think we in school....but he tried da say i cant spell but he da nigga typin all fukked up...but can i get some votes ppl

Itz obvious who took thiz wit ease.
Basically Marvelous J just took all categoriez
not a good verse by P-Ill

Vote Marvelous J

jea...uPPPPINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN VOTE PPL LETS GET DIS OVA 2DAY

Ayo Marvolous what happened to our battle 4u4, Lets go the thread is still set up!!
huh

look 4 it dat shit aint on my open battles list no more........

marvolous took this one

his punches were aimed better
they hit harder

his personals made sense
he had some attempted wordplay
overall, he dissed Per better

perpet-ill had really shitty lines
i mean, i had to wipe the screen off with toilet paper
punches failed, personals were on the Milk Carton
your verse was very weak and lacked alot, mainly the important part of a battle

HArd Hitting Personals

therefore

V/ Marv

lmaooo^^^yo dunn u 4got da poll ya vote so it wont count till u do dat

Uppppinnn....drop Links Or Somthin Vote Rapper's ....

marvelous won this battle

everything was marvelous ... from personals to multis to punches to structure


P ur shit was herbish off the hook B you need to elevate your vocab a Lot!!

Vote = Marvelous

aight uppin 4 more votes........wake da fukk up ya'll

Very Poorly Done Ill Way Off Track Started Ok But Then Tailed Drastically Off Course
Marv Solid Rymes Wordplay And Punchlines As You Know We Can All Elevate Decent Job Tho
Vote.marv

goodlookin dunn......more votes ppl......................

aighht ummm can dis battle get closed 2day ppl im tired of uppin dis shit

Yo, this was a very easy battle.

punchlines - M
creativity - M
wordplay - M
structure - none
flow - M

This was all marvolous. P, your punchlines and flow was boring as hell. You need to really work on that. Marvolous, work on your wordplay wit more metaphors.

v-M

who wants to battle me????????????????????/
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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i think marv took dis battle cause his punches hit harder and he was more personal.
perpetu,your lines were real shitty,so i dont think you win this one,and also,some of your stuff had the shittiest rhyming everwitth rhymes like:wtf? is up with the name, are you trying to be cool?
or are you just stupid?.... saying you're sick, is just being a fool
see what i mean?
so my vote goes to marvolous.