Killah Bwoy vs Countree jay
 

aiight lets go patna

10 lines
blind spit
no feeding
no d/r crew votes or biting
good luck
45 mins to spit after check in

CJ, checkity check playa. Good luck homie, don't know if Ima win, but let's just both bring it, no hate, no beef, but for the moment, we gotta get down to bizz.

exact.........good luck patna..i know ur good but we'll see who wins.....

I know you 'gon search for some ill lines, try to reconstructe 'em,/
But CJ gonna show U dat nigga that bring real lyrical destruction./
Try to act like you wear the pants, and say U run your click,/
D Peice the one runnin' thangs, U just a pussy-whipped bitch./
So let me free, better than you and I'm sayin' "Not Another One,/
Another "gangsta" rapper, I'm just like damn, not another Gun./
Fam, how much you know about guns? I bet you got a glock,/
U stick your dick in the barrel, so you can say you got it "cocked"./
It's a shame, you rappers all the same, & I'm changin' the game,/
Your style is lame, only place you get an extra W is in your name./

Aight, "Not Another One" is the name of this kiddz freestyle, And His name is Spelt Bwoy, instead of Boy, and The W means as in an extra win. Everything else is self-explanatory. Do you fam, I expect that fire nigga.

lets go its DA BWOY...countree jay its ova mayn.....

Cut you up N throw ya bodyparts in a breifcase..Let me explain this brief case/
Jay sucks dick fo a livin and his bars're as soft as a meltin fuckin cheese-cake/
I spit real shit no optical illusion..Pump air in this bitch like the ball "infusion"/
You cant win like LA vs Houston I could be the LA clippers and i still aint losin/
Spittin' against me? i'll leave more holes on your face then a hockey mask/
Like donathan bailey I rip up "tracks" Jay finishin last like a nascar withno gas/
cause earthqakes noones feelin you like a fat man fuckin an aner-exic chick/
Blast my heata make this bitch my personal seanuorita but i aint mex-i-can/
Dont spit,your bars are ugly...Your lyrics are "busted" they far from a dime/
Even if IT hrew this kid in a pool of glitter ...this bitch still couldn't shine/


that was aiight im kinda tired but lets see wat u got

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But CJ gonna show U dat nigga that bring real lyrical destruction./
Try to act like you wear the pants, and say U run your click,/
D Peice the one runnin' thangs, U just a pussy-whipped bitch./


^^^ that does not flow well at all...i had to read it ova...and there's very little complexity in the disses


Spittin' against me? i'll leave more holes on your face then a hockey mask/
Like donathan bailey I rip up "tracks" Jay finishin last like a nascar withno gas/


^^^^ better flow with at least an attempt at clever wordplay/punches


FLow: Killa
RHyme: Tie
Punches: Killa


Vote: Killa

Yo i gatta give it to you both.. it was a hot battle... I gatta give it to Da Bwoy...

Heres how i break it down..

Killah had the better punches....
I Think ya'll both tied on the rhymes.. cause well you both had em
Punches i gatta give it to da Bwoy cause he had the better ones...

I didnt like how CJ had to explain his battle..

Overall it was a sick battle... But my vote goes to Killah..

Uppin' 4 people to actually poll in the fuckin' box, and to vote. Hollatchaboy.

CJ you got this one..yopu have really elevated

CJ: not a real god battle but somehtin close to that...your good kid liked the cock bak line..just work on more punches...not much to say..good battle tho...all in all8/10

KB:not a good battle i mean its coo for regular frontlines but not good enuf..but look kid you need to elevate.....to many streched lines..thats all you really need to work on all in all6/10

vote=CJ

i didnt think that was stretched but ya i feel ya i didnt pull out my best but i tried

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My Vote
 

aight this looks like a good battle so ima do bar by bar....

I know you 'gon search for some ill lines, try to reconstructe 'em,/
But CJ gonna show U dat nigga that bring real lyrical destruction./
No real hard punch....6/10
Try to act like you wear the pants, and say U run your click,/
D Peice the one runnin' thangs, U just a pussy-whipped bitch./
Hard punch!!...9/10
So let me free, better than you and I'm sayin' "Not Another One,/
Another "gangsta" rapper, I'm just like damn, not another Gun./
Decent personal...alright punch....7/10
Fam, how much you know about guns? I bet you got a glock,/
U stick your dick in the barrel, so you can say you got it "cocked"./
Hahaha.....8/10
It's a shame, you rappers all the same, & I'm changin' the game,/
Your style is lame, only place you get an extra W is in your name./
Hot personal....nice closer....9/10

Verse Score - 39/50 = 78%

Good spit...opener wasnt the best ive seen but ur verse was pretty steady on flow and punches.....nice overall spit....good wordplay....i liked your meta's.....closer was really hot....

Cut you up N throw ya bodyparts in a breifcase..Let me explain this brief case/
Jay sucks dick fo a livin and his bars're as soft as a meltin fuckin cheese-cake/
seems forced...not that hard of a punch neway...5/10
I spit real shit no optical illusion..Pump air in this bitch like the ball "infusion"/
You cant win like LA vs Houston I could be the LA clippers and i still aint losin/
No good punch still...5/10
Spittin' against me? i'll leave more holes on your face then a hockey mask/
Like donathan bailey I rip up "tracks" Jay finishin last like a nascar withno gas/
I like this punch and meta....8/10
cause earthqakes noones feelin you like a fat man fuckin an aner-exic chick/
Blast my heata make this bitch my personal seanuorita but i aint mex-i-can/
Wack....3/10
Dont spit,your bars are ugly...Your lyrics are "busted" they far from a dime/
Even if IT hrew this kid in a pool of glitter ...this bitch still couldn't shine/
Decent meta and punch...7/10

Verse Score - 28/50 = 56%

Wow i was expecting more from you....you only had two good punches...very weak.....u just talked basically.....didnt get the job done and that hy you lost....

Vote - CountreeJay

lol tru i dunno wat the fuck is wrong with me lately..i jus aint feelin' it lmfao......................

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CJ - surprised me.. dropped alot better than previously.. minus the 'dick in the barrel' line it was all pretty fresh an occasionally witty.. avoid all 'sex/dick/gay' lines like the plague.. your rhyme scheme is rather basic and altho` your structure is stable you could improve the flow by switchin` to shorter bars an a few multiple rhymes.. also you could tell you wrote for your opponent.. personals thruout.. not bad overall..

KB - started off disgustingly.. with a wack 'sex' line.. stretched bars for the whole verse killed any flow.. there were no personal punches in your verse.. coulda been dissin` anyone.. nothin` stood out as effective cos it was jus a bunch of random metas.. you need to focus on tailorin` your verse to diss your opponent specifically..

v/ CJ.

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Can a nigga get some votes? Well, either of us, howeva it's goin' down. Just fuckin' vote!

Wow.. this battle getting mad slepped on... aight check it. CJ, you brought some tight lines:

"So let me free, better than you and I'm sayin' "Not Another One,/
Another "gangsta" rapper, I'm just like damn, not another Gun./
Fam, how much you know about guns? I bet you got a glock,/
U stick your dick in the barrel, so you can say you got it "cocked"./
It's a shame, you rappers all the same, & I'm changin' the game,/
Your style is lame, only place you get an extra W is in your name./ "

That whole thing was pretty tight, and you opened with a decent line and then a personal. Killah.. you came decent... kinda stretched it with that mex-i-can thing, but CJ just brought fire. Nice drop man, keep doing your thing.

v/ CJ

return the favor w/ a vote on my battle w/ marv....

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Can someone vote on this shit, it's been open for a fuckin' minute. Damn, niggaz want cats to battle in elevated, then not vote. WTF?

~CJ~

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cj ya opener was pretty sick good punch and personal nice flow and your closer damn heat sick closer on him good punch and tight personal and the rest of your verse was nice good wordplay and all sick personals the gun line was real seriuos nikka hot shit tight verse only thing i can say is just try to upp some vocab in there all threw out

killah bwoy your opener was stretched out still the set up line was good wordplay the punch didnt really connect to me closer was sick though good wordplay and punch in both lines hot shit and the rest of your verse was all long lines my nikka what happened since you battled me lol some punchs were good and some werent even reached out an touchin nothin you was creative and had good wordplay but not solid punchs to me need to bring those back and keep everything you had in this verse be pretty sick

vote cj