enygma vs. j-poll
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.

Checkin in....

checkin

Bored so I dropped early............again.....

Laugh cause you're seldom felt...I'd whoop your ass so go run and tell
Plus you're nice wit a mic device....when you hand it to someone else
He still remains to lag.........couldn't man up so he changed to drag
This dude's from Calgary.......no wonder he's considered a flamin fag
Who ya runnin to?.....ain't gotta leave ya abused wit somethin new
Cause he's still nursin the wounds from gettin booted from his crew
Down to battle me?.....I'll have you lose weight like countin calories
Leavin you in awe of me...like when Bill Gates announced his salary
I'm givin you lots of lectures....it's bout time you stoped your effort
You always wanted to make it...I'm just helpin you drop your record

here it is enygma...you shouldn't have came so soft...haha...that rhyming thing isn't really something you've mastered...either your words don't rhyme or there one syllable words...what's that...i thought you were one of the best on the site....anyway here it is...
jks


check it...
Enygma, 7 losses...this bitch still gettin some praise,
1 week title reign...yur 20 minutes r up, no 1 will rememba the 'nygma days'

Can't take ur eyes off my keystyle, you stare for 182 blinks,
Ur rhymes don't affect people, too weak, like watered down drinks,
(blink 182 has a song called watered down drinks)
'Crhyme Syndicate', ha these half-wits r the king of the cirlce jirk,
A femcee asked to join, they said only if u buy a strap-on first,

Nygma's talent is exactly like my sig....nothing,
He's so outta hip hop...he thought running his mouth was blunting,
(blunting=smoking weed, or meaning for being blunt is to talk openly)

I'ma fuck you up verbally, til u lookin like Rick Rubin,
I'm the DICTATOR like Castro, and you're just a dirty fuckin cuban,
(rick rubin is the producer in the new jayz video, he's dirty as hell, castro is the cuban dictator)

Bitch you're the worst emcee 'vet' I've ever heard,
It's just us two, but in this battle you'll finish third,
(he'd finish third because nothing is better than his verse)

I call your crew 'The Seinfelds', cause your a bunch of jokes,
U threw me a free pass by you, I'll catch it everytime like JJ Stokes,
(his verse is like a free pass, like in monopoly...to go by him...and i'll always catch it like jj stokes of the 49ers)

Nothing is better, then what you scribbled wit dat pen,
I guess your falling off the cliff, of your wits end.
(the end of the cliff is his wits end...that's why he's falling off)






i don't ussually put explanations...but enygma didn't even get some of the rhymes so i felt i had to throw some explanations in

believe dat peace

^^^

Are you serious? Look at my verse again and then look at yours.....now, who has the one syllable rhymes?.....LOL! What a fuckin joke! I'm glad I din't waste a good verse on your weak ass.....

whatever...you know i owned you...fucking laughable...nothing in your verse is original... you fucking recycle shit like mad...get something original...have you ever heard of a funny rhyme...well the answer is no...you suck at life

^^^

How can I recycle when most of the punches were personals you fuckin idiot? Who else could I have pulled the nice wit a mic device line on? Or the Calgary Flames line? None of your punches even made any real sense.......We have a femcee in our crew...one of the best actually, and the only other personal was your opener which was weak as hell.....just like the rest of your punches...

whatever you only had two fucking punches...weak personals...but whatever...uppin let's see what the people think...and it was jokes by the way...that's what jk means... but whatever...we'll see...

uppin let's get some votes...ya dig it

Laugh cause you're seldom felt...I'd whoop your ass so go run and tell
Plus you're nice wit a mic device....when you hand it to someone else
pretty ok.. doesn't feel much like an opener though.. good way to incoporporate his title
He still remains to lag.........couldn't man up so he changed to drag
This dude's from Calgary.......no wonder he's considered a flamin fag
the remains to lag part is useless, otherwise nice punch
Who ya runnin to?.....ain't gotta leave ya abused wit somethin new
Cause he's still nursin the wounds from gettin booted from his crew
nice personal, but you didnt do much with it. still nice
Down to battle me?.....I'll have you lose weight like countin calories
Leavin you in awe of me...like when Bill Gates announced his salary
should have left this out, its whack
I'm givin you lots of lectures....it's bout time you stoped your effort
You always wanted to make it...I'm just helpin you drop your record
haha... very nice, i like the wordplay.



Enygma, 7 losses...this bitch still gettin some praise,
1 week title reign...yur 20 minutes r up, no 1 will rememba the 'nygma days'
stretched, but ok personal...
Can't take ur eyes off my keystyle, you stare for 182 blinks,
Ur rhymes don't affect people, too weak, like watered down drinks,
(blink 182 has a song called watered down drinks)
this is too much man.. nobody is gonna know that blink 182 song (well, few people), and even then the wordplay is forced and doesn't add to the punch
'Crhyme Syndicate', ha these half-wits r the king of the cirlce jirk,
A femcee asked to join, they said only if u buy a strap-on first,
ok see now this is funny
Nygma's talent is exactly like my sig....nothing,
He's so outta hip hop...he thought running his mouth was blunting,
(blunting=smoking weed, or meaning for being blunt is to talk openly)
eh... once again the wordplay is forced and adds little to the punch
I'ma fuck you up verbally, til u lookin like Rick Rubin,
I'm the DICTATOR like Castro, and you're just a dirty fuckin cuban,
(rick rubin is the producer in the new jayz video, he's dirty as hell, castro is the cuban dictator)
yeah ok.. didn't need the explanation on this one... not that great

Bitch you're the worst emcee 'vet' I've ever heard,
It's just us two, but in this battle you'll finish third,
(he'd finish third because nothing is better than his verse)
yeah thanks... i didn't need an explanation because i've used this line before. its a bit played, and the setup isn't great or anything

I call your crew 'The Seinfelds', cause your a bunch of jokes,
U threw me a free pass by you, I'll catch it everytime like JJ Stokes,
(his verse is like a free pass, like in monopoly...to go by him...and i'll always catch it like jj stokes of the 49ers)
bleh... reaching with the concepts and the first line is not really a setup... an ok punch but the second line is kinda walk
Nothing is better, then what you scribbled wit dat pen,
I guess your falling off the cliff, of your wits end.
(the end of the cliff is his wits end...that's why he's falling off)
see.. nothing is better has two meanings... and even with the right one this isn't that great. its original, so you get props for that.

ok.. enygma actually had nice rhymes for the most part, some two word rhymes in there, pretty good. not sure what jpoll is complaining about. enygma also had decent enough flow, i think that you had that one wack bar and you need to work on your set ups, and not just force multis in there for no reason. pretty polished verse though.

jpoll, i think youre good with concepts. the problem is that not all concepts are good for batteling... your kinda reaching with some of these, and you're messing up your flow and having weak punches just so you can get some stupid wordplay in there... is bleh. wordplay is useful only if it accentuates a punch, otherwise lose it. The best bar in your verse needed no explanation, and it was the circle jerk bar. use more punches like that, don't force wordplay and stretch concepts it not necessary.

v/ enygma.

gud battle gud battle

both y'all had sum tight flows goin on and i was feelin both y'all verses from start to finish. structure was i wud give this to enygma cuz his shit was all togehter basically all the same length makin it easier to read and shit.
punches i give to JPoll cuz i though that enygma was just puttin out basic punches and he wasn't really tryin in this. JPoll threw out some gud punches some fairly hard and all wit aight connection. he showed more creativity in his spit and he had sum gud personals.
my favourite line
I'ma fuck you up verbally, til u lookin like Rick Rubin,
I'm the DICTATOR like Castro, and you're just a dirty fuckin cuban,
lmao at that line, straight killed the match off.
vote - JPoll

thanks to both votes so far...well it's 1 to 1 let's get some votes...uppin

this was a good battle...enygmas strcture flow and wordplay were on and personlas but i think your punches werent that good..jpoll definately took the punches category..enygma looked like u didnt try like u should have against him...
jpolls punch about the strap on won this battle i think...it was a hard punch and the wordplay was sick on that bar...enygma had some good shyt but i dont think he did enough to win...personals were good but nothing that interested me that much...vote:jpoll by a hair

breakdown for enygma:

flow:not the best i've seen from you like in the past few weeks in the title matches but still top notch 7/10

volcab:alright less then usually seemed like the whole verse was kinda rushed i guess maybe cause your battling twice? 7/10

punches:some good lines i thought my fav,"This dude's from Calgary.......no wonder he's considered a flamin fag" ha ha ha i think i've seen shit like that before but it was good 7/10

overall:21/30

breakdown for j-poll:

flow:seemed kidna choppy cause of most of the bars being soo streached just my opinion 6/10

volcab:some alright use not what i'd have tried with when you tried to put him down for his use. but still alright 7/10

punches:for the most part pretty original here i liked,"Can't take ur eyes off my keystyle, you stare for 182 blinks,Ur rhymes don't affect people, too weak, like watered down drinks," it tells you put thought into your lines good job 7/10

overall:20/30

vote--although this was alot closer then i thought it would be i still see enygma taking it the flow was more balanced with the punches then j-poll

Thanks for the input......2-2.....lets keep this one going...

::Breakdown::

this was an overall good battle...

enygmas-

Yo structure was good, personals, wordplay Punches didnt really hit hard.
It looked like enyg u was in a rush didnt really take time.

jpolls-

J had betta punches that some were played but it hit, But he was lackin on personals It was a good overall verses by both.

V/ J because he had betta punches that connected. Enyg am dissappointed my man.

vote
 

enygma this was str8 up hevvy, man this contained so many disses, da calgary joke was bit out of order but dats da way i like it. The kiked out off crew joke was da funniest line of them all.

Vote - Enygma

that's horse shit...fucking hate vote extreme...he's on my black list...on don't think that vote should count...cause he's been bitching at me all over the site after i ko'd him...that vote shouldn't count...he's blacklisted...

whatever luminaz just because i KO'd you you have to come into my two last battles and vote against me...eventhough i beat the other guy 5 to 1...and i should beat enygma...whatever...that's weak...

vote people...it should 3 to 2 for me...cause the last person was blacklisted...but anyways it could tied...or i could be up...but anyways VOTES we need votes...

3-2 for j-poll right now luminaz's vote not explained well enough if he comes back and edits it with a better vote then it'll count

Laugh cause you're seldom felt...I'd whoop your ass so go run and tell
worst line
Plus you're nice wit a mic device....when you hand it to someone else
nice
He still remains to lag.........couldn't man up so he changed to drag
alrite, good rhyme
This dude's from Calgary.......no wonder he's considered a flamin fag
thats jst merciless...i like dat
Who ya runnin to?.....ain't gotta leave ya abused wit somethin new
gd stuff
Cause he's still nursin the wounds from gettin booted from his crew
lol lol lol funny shit
Down to battle me?.....I'll have you lose weight like countin calories
hevvy rhyme
Leavin you in awe of me...like when Bill Gates announced his salary
wiked, bringin bill gates into it
I'm givin you lots of lectures....it's bout time you stoped your effort
nt v. good
You always wanted to make it...I'm just helpin you drop your record
alrite ending

vote - enygma

where's my verse????????????^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
hmmm?????
such a hate vote!!!!


hahahhahhahhahah that's hilarious...ahhahah someone on my blacklist list still dirtboy... so what if he explains his vote... whatever though...hmmm does it seem to anyone else that theres some pm'ing going down....you're a bitch luminaz

shut up
 

shut up j poll u lost, paranoid or sumthin?

don't freepost you no skilled bitch...and how about you comment on my part too...hmmm.. yeah i didn't think so because back to back my rap wins...he might be better then me...but i took it this time

^^ actually luminaz is a whack bitch voter.

uppin it's either 3 to 2 for me or tied at 3 to 3...uppin though let's get some votes yall

first time
 

look guyz dis is my 1st time votin , i saw peeps only puttin the one they thought that one on their reason so no disrespect to j poll or shadows edge.

j poll, i can admit u beat me on our battle but i have the right to have my own opinion in votin. Shadows edge i aint gt nuthin against u i jst wana put my reason up bout j poll's rhyme.

Can't take ur eyes off my keystyle, you stare for 182 blinks,
Ur rhymes don't affect people, too weak, like watered down drinks,
(blink 182 has a song called watered down drinks)
WATERED DOWN DRINKS IS GD BUT IT DOESNT DISS ENUFF

'Crhyme Syndicate', ha these half-wits r the king of the cirlce jirk,
A femcee asked to join, they said only if u buy a strap-on first,
THIS IS JUS WEAK AND 1ST LINE IS THOUGHTLESS

Nygma's talent is exactly like my sig....nothing,
He's so outta hip hop...he thought running his mouth was blunting,
(blunting=smoking weed, or meaning for being blunt is to talk openly)
THIS DOESNT MAKE SENSE AND DOESNT EVEN DISS

I'ma fuck you up verbally, til u lookin like Rick Rubin,
I'm the DICTATOR like Castro, and you're just a dirty fuckin cuban,
(rick rubin is the producer in the new jayz video, he's dirty as hell, castro is the cuban dictator)
BEST LINE - VERY GD

Bitch you're the worst emcee 'vet' I've ever heard,
It's just us two, but in this battle you'll finish third,
(he'd finish third because nothing is better than his verse)
WEAK RHYME, THIS TYPE OF STUF BIN DUN B4

I call your crew 'The Seinfelds', cause your a bunch of jokes,
U threw me a free pass by you, I'll catch it everytime like JJ Stokes,
(his verse is like a free pass, like in monopoly...to go by him...and i'll always catch it like jj stokes of the 49ers)
U EXPLAINED IT AND IT STILL IS AS BAD AS NT EXPLAINED

Nothing is better, then what you scribbled wit dat pen,
I guess your falling off the cliff, of your wits end.
(the end of the cliff is his wits end...that's why he's falling off)
WTF WAT A WEAK ENDING

VOTE - ENYGMA

that ending was sick...whatever your still on my blacklist so this vote shouldn't count...

v/ enygma.

Harder punches.. personals were on point.. all lines were effective.. didn`t see you fall off.. structure and ryhme scheme are pretty basic.. but they do the job.. opener wasn`t bad but what`s a mic got to do with text battles? Closer was nice line.. internal rhyme hit it off well.. JPoll.. way too cocky dude.. you explained every line.. not good.. if people don`t get it then too bad.. it looks bad on you if you explain it all.. but alot of your concepts were wack anyway.. what`s Blink182`s relevance to a rap board? really wasn`t feelin` the verse.. no flow at all.. personal`s were non-existant or ineffective.

4-3 enygma winning stop free posting j-poll or i'll dq you if you got problems with votes pm me don't clog the thread with your complaining

i vot j poll cause engyma didnt come hard enough but he had some good punches 'plus you're nice wit a mic device....when you hand it to someone else' that was a tight line i like. but j-poll said 'Bitch you're the worst emcee 'vet' I've ever heard, it's just us two, but in this battle you'll finish third' that was hard engyma u got some nice bars but u coulda came harder, j-poll u really didnt need to explain ya self it just gave people more to read
v/J

^^^

I guess we can accept that one......kinda fishy, but oh well.....

Jpoll - 4
Enygma - 4

Keep the votes coming......

uppin uppin....it's not fishy...his ip isn't anything close to mine...uppin uppin

4to4

Enygma u had a hot line but the punches where good 2 but as liittle off i liked this line the most


Laugh cause you're seldom felt...I'd whoop your ass so go run and tell
Plus you're nice wit a mic device....when you hand it to someone else

Good BAR


u structure was okay


Who ya runnin to?.....ain't gotta leave ya abused wit somethin new
Cause he's still nursin the wounds from gettin booted from his crew

Good BAR^^^^..

8.5/10

Jpoll u had good style i liked alot of ur lines

Can't take ur eyes off my keystyle, you stare for 182 blinks,
Ur rhymes don't affect people, too weak, like watered down drinks

GOOD BAR ((NICE USE))


'Crhyme Syndicate', ha these half-wits r the king of the cirlce jirk,
A femcee asked to join, they said only if u buy a strap-on first,

DAt was juss hott PROPS


I call your crew 'The Seinfelds', cause your a bunch of jokes,
U threw me a free pass by you, I'll catch it everytime like JJ Stokes

NIce shit structure BETTER

9/10

VOTE Jpol

5 to 4...for me................................................ ...............................

My Vote
 

Aight...

Bar by bar...

Laugh cause you're seldom felt...I'd whoop your ass so go run and tell
Plus you're nice wit a mic device....when you hand it to someone else
Hahaha...nice opener...good punch...8/10
He still remains to lag.........couldn't man up so he changed to drag
This dude's from Calgary.......no wonder he's considered a flamin fag
Good personal...punch coulda had betta wordplay...seemed forced...but good meta....6/10
Who ya runnin to?.....ain't gotta leave ya abused wit somethin new
Cause he's still nursin the wounds from gettin booted from his crew
HAHAHA...hot....10/10
Down to battle me?.....I'll have you lose weight like countin calories
Leavin you in awe of me...like when Bill Gates announced his salary
Nice meta...decent punch....7/10
I'm givin you lots of lectures....it's bout time you stoped your effort
You always wanted to make it...I'm just helpin you drop your record
Good punch and closer....8/10

Verse Score - 39/50 = 78%

Good verse overall...couple bars weren't as great as the others but nothing bad....solid verse with funny meta's and good hard hittin punches....wordplay was straight....flow was good...good drop...

Enygma, 7 losses...this bitch still gettin some praise,
1 week title reign...yur 20 minutes r up, no 1 will rememba the 'nygma days'
Not that great of a personal...coulda gone places wit it but bad wordplay and it was stretched...4/10
Can't take ur eyes off my keystyle, you stare for 182 blinks,
Ur rhymes don't affect people, too weak, like watered down drinks,
Okay meta...but no hard punch....5/10
'Crhyme Syndicate', ha these half-wits r the king of the cirlce jirk,
A femcee asked to join, they said only if u buy a strap-on first,
Still not feelin you....5/10
Nygma's talent is exactly like my sig....nothing,
He's so outta hip hop...he thought running his mouth was blunting,
Hahaha...gettin betta....8/10
I'ma fuck you up verbally, til u lookin like Rick Rubin,
I'm the DICTATOR like Castro, and you're just a dirty fuckin cuban,
Don't like these meta's...stretched too....5/10
Bitch you're the worst emcee 'vet' I've ever heard,
It's just us two, but in this battle you'll finish third,
A lil betta....7/10
I call your crew 'The Seinfelds', cause your a bunch of jokes,
U threw me a free pass by you, I'll catch it everytime like JJ Stokes,
Now this was a good bar....9/10
Nothing is better, then what you scribbled wit dat pen,
I guess your falling off the cliff, of your wits end.
Not that great...6/10

Verse Score - 49/80 = 61%

Aight your verse wasnt as good as i expected it to be...Just boring punches and meta's....couple bars were nice but u have to come hard against high level emcees....lot of ya shit was stretched wit fucked up ya flow....so work on that....jus keep elevatin and use harder meta's....

Vote - enygma....keep droppin yall....nice battle but expected both emcees to come a lot harder...

look this was not that hot of a battle...but enygma got this one...

NYGMA:you was aight could have came wit some betta punches and alot of betta personals....and your ryhmes were a lil stretched....this was not your best work...
wasnt too interested in reading your shit.....just come a lot harder next time aight..
all in all 8/10

POLL: oyu was coo just didnt likle the fact that you had to explain your bars...and it was alil hard to read,..structure was aight..and your punches were too weak...you also need to put a li mo personal;s and not as much meta4s...they are goo dbut too many can kill your flow....all in all7/10

vote=nygma

didn't i win 5 4 though...that was a rule...that the match was over after someone got 5 votes