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DirtBoy69 05-03-04 04:20 PM

**Championship Match** enygma vs. kingz
 
deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
32 bar max.

kingz and enygma have already checked in just post your verses the winner of this will face restricted next week so he can have a shot to win his title back

Kingz 05-03-04 04:30 PM

checkin in
i hope i dont get merked too bad lol

Enygma 05-03-04 04:31 PM

LOL......I was about to say the same thing.......checkin in and will spit tomorrow.....gotta go to work right now..

Enygma 05-04-04 09:55 PM

Tryin a new style....

Kingz could paint murals...still couldn't picture him runnin the show
And he made his name plural...just so he could double his votes
Rubbin in his ointment to claim topical with crappy scriptures
Such a disappointment.....even your rapper ain't happy wit ya
Kingz is gettin his cap peeled.....now we can see all ya doubts
It's clear that you lack skill....cause people see ya and bounce
Kingz is garbage..........I'll pull his card, got somethin to say
And since I'm heartless........he's easy to trump wit my spade
Yeah I'm champ by default....but no ones changin the options
I'll clock this man til he falls....just to abstain him from watchin
He's handy on the sack..................as far as my balls are
This is the championship match....and he calls me an all star
Yo, this dude is so dumb...I left him speechless wit failed grades
Cause he ain't movin no one......must got Kingz in a stalemate
I'll rape ya like eight pokes.....rhymes gotcha without ya draws
And I hate to use a gay joke....but he likes watchin bouncin balls
I took one look at my rival........quick to run up in both pockets
Got your own book in the bible......but still left with no prophets
Get lost, I'll knock ya silly.....his heart's filled with lots of regrets
Afterall, I'm from Philly..........where we're used to demolishin vets


Since Kingz took so long to drop his verse, one of my punches doesn't make much sense....When I said even his rapper ain't happy with him, it was because his Rapperz character's happy meter was at 0%.....it was that way until today when he deleted it....

Kingz 05-06-04 12:49 PM

You better leave champ (by default)…you jus cant face this
You say ‘white guys rule’…then you claim your not racist
in ya sig its says 'yes we are that dumb'...at least your honest
kid claims to be 'sick'...well...yeh you make me 'vomit'
Champ, im gonna take ya 'title'... naa i think i'd rather not *cough*
you should retire now dog...cos ya career is tapering off
the only way you can drop 'hot shit'...is if u imitate ya avatar pic
ya punchlines have ran out...kinda like ya toilet paper.. very quick
yo i'm a living legend...thats right, im not a myth
'im comin' for you...like yo Philly homeboy Will Smith
catch my drift?...naa dog you can't comprehend
like scarface...summit u will understand 'say hello to my little friend' :shoot:
you sed thanks to ~R~?..cos thats the reason you here
i think you better act like 'Obie Trice'..and say 'Cheers'
fuck you, fuck your whole crew...and ya c.s propaganda
has his name in black and white...dog thinks he is a panda
yep thats right...you are an indangered species
as a king i aint got 'lancers' but i drive two mitsubishi's
your a fake...quit the rap game for fuck's sake
you rap like a retarded justin timberlake
i aint unloyal but i left your crew..aint that a kick in da crotch?
cos ur 'chryme sindicate' would get foiled by the 'neighbourhood watch'
:laugh2:

.::N-Sight::. 05-06-04 01:20 PM

Kingz could paint murals...still couldn't picture him runnin the show
And he made his name plural...just so he could double his votes

^^ funny...not sure it quite makes sense tho...lol


Yo, this dude is so dumb...I left him speechless wit failed grades
Cause he ain't movin no one......must got Kingz in a stalemate

^^ not feelin this...ur piece got wordplay out the anus...jus the punches aren't landing hard

I took one look at my rival........quick to run up in both pockets
Got your own book in the bible......but still left with no prophets
Get lost, I'll knock ya silly.....his heart's filled with lots of regrets
Afterall, I'm from Philly..........where we're used to demolishin vets

^^ good flow...but this needs to be directed at him more...you're rapping more about yourself

You better leave champ (by default)…you jus cant face this
You say ‘white guys rule’…then you claim your not racist

^^...nice opener and true...almost a personal


like scarface...summit u will understand 'say hello to my little friend'
you sed thanks to ~R~?..cos thats the reason you here

^^ very hard...directed right at him...coo

your a fake...quit the rap game for fuck's sake
you rap like a retarded justin timberlake
i aint unloyal but i left your crew..aint that a kick in da crotch?
cos ur 'chryme sindicate' would get foiled by the 'neighbourhood watch'


^^ haha..nice closer


with Better...much better..punches, KING takes this battle

Flow: King
RHyming:Tie
Punches:King

vote: Kingz

Enygma 05-06-04 01:30 PM

^^^

I appreciate your vote but what happened to the rest of my verse that was obviously hittin hard? Do you just not get some of the punches? Cause if you don't get the punches, then you probably shouldn't vote....

Anyway....
Kingz - 1
Enygma - 0

Shadows edge 05-06-04 02:30 PM

Bleh... Enygma had this one easily. There were few lines I wasn't feeling at all, one of which was the rapperz one. You ought to know that those were played before the first one was even used. The kingz/stalemate one wasn't great either. I liked the heartless/spade wordplay, not that great a punch though. However, your personals were tight, I like the "see you and bounce", I like "philly destroying vets", I like you using that one link, I like the bible line.

kingz.. you came weak. your first four lines... if you had come at me with that shit i would have won easily. you didn't do much with the *cough* except rhyming it... didn't use it at all... you're only two good punches were your closer and the punch using his avvy, the rest was pretty much garbage.

v/ enygma

Enygma 05-06-04 02:50 PM

OK......

Kingz - 1
Enygma - 1

Jae Cyph 05-06-04 03:10 PM

EH . . . Average Battle Not That Great From Both Sides, I Would Quote Some Lines But None Really Intrigued Me . .

enygma had nice use with multis but it got repititous. .

I`m going to go with . .

v/enygma - Reason - none of his lines made me say .. wow that was incredibly homo . .or what the fuck ..

fuck you, fuck your whole crew...and ya c.s propaganda
has his name in black and white...dog thinks he is a panda

^ The Hell Is That Man ?

`your a fake...quit the rap game for fuck's sake
you rap like a retarded justin timberlake`

^ You HAVE To Be Fuckin` Kidding Me ..


Enygma - You have potential, just organize your verse a little more, shorten up the bars and use more of a set - punch structure .. rather than . . st - filler - punch - filler - punch type shit.

$$UPREME 05-06-04 04:44 PM

Kingz could paint murals...still couldn't picture him runnin the show
And he made his name plural...just so he could double his votes
^^^^AVERAGE.....6.0
Rubbin in his ointment to claim topical with crappy scriptures
Such a disappointment.....even your rapper ain't happy wit ya
^^^^O.K...PERSONAL......6.0
Kingz is gettin his cap peeled.....now we can see all ya doubts
It's clear that you lack skill....cause people see ya and bounce
^^PERSONAL WASN'T FEELING THAT 1.......6.0
Kingz is garbage..........I'll pull his card, got somethin to say
And since I'm heartless........he's easy to trump wit my spade
^^^GOOD WORD PLAY...BAD STRUCTURE.....6.0
Yeah I'm champ by default....but no ones changin the options
I'll clock this man til he falls....just to abstain him from watchin
^^^^^^WASN'T FEELIN'.....6
He's handy on the sack..................as far as my balls are
This is the championship match....and he calls me an all star
^^^BASIC......6
Yo, this dude is so dumb...I left him speechless wit failed grades
Cause he ain't movin no one......must got Kingz in a stalemate
??????????????????????????????......6
I'll rape ya like eight pokes.....rhymes gotcha without ya draws
And I hate to use a gay joke....but he likes watchin bouncin balls
GOOD PERSONAL...........7
I took one look at my rival........quick to run up in both pockets
Got your own book in the bible......but still left with no prophets
^^^^^^^NICE PUNCH.............7
Get lost, I'll knock ya silly.....his heart's filled with lots of regrets
Afterall, I'm from Philly..........where we're used to demolishin vets
^^WEAK FINISHER.............7.....=63/100

$$UPREME 05-06-04 04:50 PM

You better leave champ (by default)…you jus cant face this
You say ‘white guys rule’…then you claim your not racist
^^^PERSONALS/NICE PUNCH......7
in ya sig its says 'yes we are that dumb'...at least your honest
kid claims to be 'sick'...well...yeh you make me 'vomit'
PERSONALS/ 7
Champ, im gonna take ya 'title'... naa i think i'd rather not *cough*
you should retire now dog...cos ya career is tapering off
^^^^^^O.K............6
the only way you can drop 'hot shit'...is if u imitate ya avatar pic
ya punchlines have ran out...kinda like ya toilet paper.. very quick
^^GOOD PUNCH^^.LOL FUNNY PUNCH.........8
yo i'm a living legend...thats right, im not a myth
'im comin' for you...like yo Philly homeboy Will Smith
^^?????..WEAK PUNCH...........6
catch my drift?...naa dog you can't comprehend
like scarface...summit u will understand 'say hello to my little friend'
^^^WEAK.....6
you sed thanks to ~R~?..cos thats the reason you here
i think you better act like 'Obie Trice'..and say 'Cheers'
^^^WEAK.......6
fuck you, fuck your whole crew...and ya c.s propaganda
has his name in black and white...dog thinks he is a panda
^^^WEAK/PERSONAL.........6
yep thats right...you are an indangered species
as a king i aint got 'lancers' but i drive two mitsubishi's
.......6
your a fake...quit the rap game for fuck's sake
you rap like a retarded justin timberlake
...............6
I aint unloyal but i left your crew..aint that a kick in da crotch?
cos ur 'chryme sindicate' would get foiled by the 'neighbourhood watch'
^^^...........7=71/110.........

PoLiFicK 05-06-04 04:51 PM

nice drop by both of u both threw some hott punhes and combos and hott personals and a tite flow 2 go wit it

kingz-

bestline-You better leave champ (by default)…you jus cant face this
You say ‘white guys rule’…then you claim your not racist

nice start came stron on da 1st 2 linez nice nice

worsteline-none i think yo verse was good piece 2 make u go back and read it again

enygma-hott shit again 2 u u had some throw away punches and a nice flooow

bestline-He's handy on the sack..................as far as my balls are
This is the championship match....and he calls me an all star

nice

worsteline-again u had nun eitha

punches-kingz
flow-enygma
structure-both
personals-both
consitnat verse-both
open-kingz
close kingz
overall winner-kingz

$$UPREME 05-06-04 04:51 PM

Do The Math....................
Weak Battle.........
Good Personals........weak Punches...........

$$UPREME 05-06-04 04:52 PM

Vote-----------kingz........................

Shadows edge 05-06-04 04:53 PM

wow... 2 straight weeks now kingz has gotten bunch of people not in the league to come vote for him when the voting is tight. do i smell bullshit?

Triple_N 05-06-04 04:53 PM

Tight battle y'all.....Enygma...great wordplay throughout verse, punches coulda been stronger though, heartless spade nice!, closer was sick, but one thing is everbody ain't into football so alot of people won't get "demolishing vets" but I did an its sickness level on 1-10 is 11, that line got me, multies were lagging, vocab was solid, some of your lines were bad though but the ones that hit were strong, good drop

Kingz....this was an ok drop man, came out the gates hard with opener everyone will catch that one, scarface line was tight, closer was tight, but the rest was just fillers to me, man I've seen you come way better than that, flowed great though, but wasn't strong enough to win in my opinion, good drop though
Vote: Enygma

Kingz 05-06-04 04:55 PM

Kingz - 3
Enygma - 3

-Zone Out- 05-06-04 06:01 PM

vote-Kingz for a better verse that owned!
Kingz had better punches and disses
besides, didnt restricted beat Engyma last week anyway?
Kingz won in my opinion!
Engyma just threw those regualr played punches

Enygma 05-06-04 06:21 PM

OK....I respect everyones votes but $$upreme and Kryogenix really need to stop hatin on me.....I don't know why you still hold a grudge with me but it needs to stop.....

Anyway....
Kingz - 4
Enygma - 3

Lets keep the votes comin...

-Zone Out- 05-06-04 06:57 PM

i dont hold a grudge wtf?
i just thought that r rated beat you
dont bitch whenever someone votes against you

King Solo 05-07-04 09:39 AM

Kingz could paint murals...still couldn't picture him runnin the show
And he made his name plural...just so he could double his votes
6...gud opener but wasnt really a strong punch especially when compared to wat u can do enygma!!
Rubbin in his ointment to claim topical with crappy scriptures
Such a disappointment.....even your rapper ain't happy wit ya
7...gud punch, usin his rapper in that shit...i like it!!
Kingz is gettin his cap peeled.....now we can see all ya doubts
It's clear that you lack skill....cause people see ya and bounce
8...lmfao! funny shit usin that line against him!
Kingz is garbage..........I'll pull his card, got somethin to say
And since I'm heartless........he's easy to trump wit my spade
6...aight punch, wasnt very creative tho!!
Yeah I'm champ by default....but no ones changin the options
I'll clock this man til he falls....just to abstain him from watchin
6...not that gud, u droppin lines far below ure standard enygma.
He's handy on the sack..................as far as my balls are
This is the championship match....and he calls me an all star
7...better line, the ...... are just filler tho.
Yo, this dude is so dumb...I left him speechless wit failed grades
Cause he ain't movin no one......must got Kingz in a stalemate
7...another gud punch, cud be a bit more creative.
I'll rape ya like eight pokes.....rhymes gotcha without ya draws
And I hate to use a gay joke....but he likes watchin bouncin balls
9...class shit!! had me laughin like mad!!
I took one look at my rival........quick to run up in both pockets
Got your own book in the bible......but still left with no prophets
7...gud punch playa.
Get lost, I'll knock ya silly.....his heart's filled with lots of regrets
Afterall, I'm from Philly..........where we're used to demolishin vets
7...gud closer, but that spit i think was far below ure standards. u cud have done better playa.


You better leave champ (by default)…you jus cant face this
You say ‘white guys rule’…then you claim your not racist
7...gud opener, pretty basic but aight.
in ya sig its says 'yes we are that dumb'...at least your honest
kid claims to be 'sick'...well...yeh you make me 'vomit'
7...gud first line, second was pretty weak tho.
Champ, im gonna take ya 'title'... naa i think i'd rather not *cough*
you should retire now dog...cos ya career is tapering off
6...not really good, basic shit really.
the only way you can drop 'hot shit'...is if u imitate ya avatar pic
ya punchlines have ran out...kinda like ya toilet paper.. very quick
10...LMFAO!! fuckin straight up sick line, best in the whole battle. DAMN!!
yo i'm a living legend...thats right, im not a myth
'im comin' for you...like yo Philly homeboy Will Smith
6...weak line, short and basic, NOT GOOD!
catch my drift?...naa dog you can't comprehend
like scarface...summit u will understand 'say hello to my little friend'
7...gud line in there, liked the scarface shit!!
you sed thanks to ~R~?..cos thats the reason you here
i think you better act like 'Obie Trice'..and say 'Cheers'
6...short & basic again, c'mon u can do better than that!
fuck you, fuck your whole crew...and ya c.s propaganda
has his name in black and white...dog thinks he is a panda
7...nice punch, u still spittin pretty basic.
yep thats right...you are an indangered species
as a king i aint got 'lancers' but i drive two mitsubishi's
8...gud line, nice punch. second line was cool!!
your a fake...quit the rap game for fuck's sake
you rap like a retarded justin timberlake
5...weakest line in the battle!!
i aint unloyal but i left your crew..aint that a kick in da crotch?
cos ur 'chryme sindicate' would get foiled by the 'neighbourhood watch'
10...sick closer!! funny shit wit the neighbourhood watch shit!!

Battles be based on punches and personals!!
So here's the line-2-line points breakdown!!
Let's see who the winner is........................

Enygma - 70/100 (70%)
Kingz - 79/110 (71%)

A really close battle.
Both had good flow and good structure.
Pretty weak spits from both when compared to what they can do if they tried. A little creativity in there and sum nice personals from both.
Based on punches and personals i give this battle to Kingz, he just came that little bit harder!!
V/ - Kingz

CounTREE Jay 05-07-04 10:56 AM

Punches: Enygma.
Flow: Kingz, Enygma tried the approximate rhyme thing, which only works well, in my opinion, in a freestyle battle, but not a keystyle
Multis: Enygma, allota them
Personals: Real close, But Ima go wit Enygma, they was about even, but the stalemate line was the best outta all of 'em.
Vocab: Enygma
Opener: Tie, y'all both had madd hott openers
Closer: Enygma, Just liked the demolishin' vets reference to veterans stadium, that shit was original and well put.

Fav Bars

Enygma:

I took one look at my rival........quick to run up in both pockets
Got your own book in the bible......but still left with no prophets

Kingz:



You better leave champ (by default)…you jus cant face this
You say ‘white guys rule’…then you claim your not racist

Aight, it was a decent battle, just thing enygma came harder. Kingz punches didn't really connect that well to me, and the flow got off a lil' at the end. Enygma, just need to not try the approximate rhymes so much, but otha than that, very solid verse, lots of good punches, personals was pretty good for both of y'all.

Vote/Enygma

~CJ~

Enygma 05-07-04 11:46 AM

Thanks for the voting....

Kingz - 5
Enygma - 4

Not over yet.....lets keep the votes comin....

.Iknoevel. 05-07-04 11:55 AM

hi.

-Zone Out- 05-07-04 06:41 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by KiNg SoLo

Enygma - 70/100 (70%)
Kingz - 79/110 (71%)

if I know my math..
and I KNOW i DO
Then Kingz % should be 79 also, since you graded their verses out of 100 in the first place
the only way the % should be different from what the graded their verses is if you graded their verses on a number smaller than 100!

DirtBoy69 05-07-04 06:58 PM

^^^ good job at your math too bad it still means the vote is still for kingz and there for is no reason to free post

Premanition 05-08-04 03:59 PM

this was a close battle, kingz came hard with some nice punches, i liked the opener but enygma took this, his flow was real good in i thought overall his punches hit hard more consistantly, were a few played lines like the rapperz one but apart from that solid verse.

good battle!

v/enygma

Kingz 05-08-04 04:11 PM

5-5

SPuL™ 05-08-04 07:03 PM

yo, tight battle right here. I however think Kingz won this by a slight margin.

Kingz had some hot punches. They hit very hard. I liked them. Also, his flo was consistent throughout the whole verse. Very good job here too. Also, you had a hot opener and a pretty good closer. Great overall verse. I give it a 9/10.

Enygma, you had some good punches too. But some of them made your flow go off in some areas. But overall, the flow was pretty tight. I liked your opener, but I wasn't feelin' your closer that much. Overall, I give you a 8/10.

v=Kingz

Enygma 05-08-04 07:15 PM

I appreciate all the voting....a lot more than last week, but just to let ^^^ you know......Veterans stadium(The Vet) is where the Phillies used to play. It was recently demolished.....I didn't think I had to explain that one, but it was probably just the cover story in Philly for a week...... I forget sometimes....

Kingz - 6
Enygma - 5

Keep 'Em Comin......

L.I. 05-08-04 11:38 PM

enygma - damn you spit a mad hot verse....every bar was punch afta punch....awesome meta's....u did a great job in this battle no doubt....had a few personals....wordplay was straight....flow was good.....jus a hot spit....nothin really wrong with it....one of the best spits ive seen by you....

kingz - good verse...but sum places u had fillers.....u had a couple herb punches....ones i'd see by a newbie....like the justin timberlake one....woulda done betta without them....but it brought down your verse....flow was off....wordplay was good....punches were nice but sum were weak....good verse overall...

Vote - enygma....he had all punches direct wit hot meta's and personals....he brought his a game....

Cesus Jhist 05-09-04 12:58 AM

vote kings for more punches and less self glorification...

weak battle though...


v/kings

HeXen 05-09-04 03:04 AM

OMG..how the fuck can any vote on kingz..its stupid..egma shoild wins dis with ease 7-0...but t obvoius kingz has been askin for votrs coz all newbs have voted n him..any kingz ur verse was wack..no complexity..i dont ever no how u got in the chapionship match..anyways....ur verse was wack..ur punch and diss was just to week and played..ur vocab was soooooo simple..overall..3/10..

emgma...ur punch was sssooo much beter and very clever....vocab was mixed nicely with fow...nice drop...overall.8/10

v/emyma<this is honest vote and any real mc wld see emgyma kill dis guy)

Kingz 05-09-04 04:49 AM

enygma - 7
Kingz - 7

who is Cesus Jhist?
peeps are starting to think that it is cam?

Restricted 05-09-04 10:18 AM

Aight Check Dis...

Kingz: 7/10
Nice Punches. I Was Feeling Your Ish. Metaphors and Vocab Was Nice. Shoulda Used Sum Multis and Shit, But It Was An Overall Decent Verse.

Enygma: 6/10
Seems Everything You Spit Is A Reprint Of Your Other Battles, Punches Were There But NO Original and Your Metas Weren't Felt. But Nice Drop.

Vote - Kingz

~R~

Shadows edge 05-09-04 01:48 PM

^ i guess so. but that heartless thing... that was money.

Kingz 05-09-04 02:44 PM

Kingz - 8
Enygma - 7

DirtBoy69 05-09-04 09:03 PM

8-7 kingz takes the title


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