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20 GraND VS 10tative
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no reply time limit after checkin, but be reasonable. no hate, crew or dickrydin votes no disrespectin the other person outside of the verses Who goes first? whoever, dont care explained votes |
u spit first, after u spit, i will spit on dis ight... holla
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slump back in ya seat kid, the army bout to get defeated/
I've made one line, and ya crew already retreated// slice ya head in half, so ya exposed as two-faced/ shit nigga, ya aint even fit to tie ma bootlace// When it comes to his rhymes, this dick aint developing/ so inject testosterone, cuz tit's is a family trait ya inheritin// ya aint bringin no heat, so i smoke ya like a bung, nigga/ i'ma rape you, but not take ya virginity/ cuz face it, we all know ya got fucked by young jigga/ then when I'm through, I spread ya ashes around this vicinity// Cuz lyrically I'm superior, consider me ya crew's drill sargeant/ cuz no matter how much ya work im left standin, while y'all collapsed on the floor/ stepin in here wit me, we all know ya career's hopes just darkened/ as I drag you down to my house, I hope ya like pain cuz you'll feel more// Slam ya face against my windowsill, but c'mon, it aint the first time you've eaten wood/ camouflaged at the gay bar, barely anyone noticed when ya sucked off ya entire barrack good// carve up ya remains, take you to the bank with ya limbs in my hand/ 'Excuse me sir, what is your business today?' 'Hi, I would like to deposit 20 Grand...'// |
They call you 10tantive?//
Ill hold you captive// cuz ur rhymes are defective// ur more like antisedative// You mess with 20 grand, u betta get ur mind right// Im that nigga in da hood whos known to grip da glock tight// You one of those niggas that think ur all hot// Well ill hit you with the glock untill ur eyes are bloodshot// You try to talk shit , you know that aint legal// Turn around to ur heads a cocked back degal// you say u rape niggas?// I should pull dat damn trigga// Give u to the gravedigga// let him have his way with u// just like a corkscrew, he will break you// Man i think i got da plaque cuz im sik wit it// or maybe dats the drow cuz i just hit it// Holla... |
ur shit seems pre-written to me dawg... dat aint koo.
u aint no freestyln nigga... holla. |
well ill open it up...
Flow-10 Multis-10 Punches-10 Structure-10 Overall-10 he just came 10 times harder lol and he killed the End.Overall he just had the punches and 20 ur structure was way off. |
yea unlike this nigga i freestyled all dat shit..
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and how would you know? ya dont know shit. You know ya lost, so ya beef instead. shit man, quit whinin. I didnt pre-write or change any lines once I typed them. I typed them when I thought of them, and left it at that. Dont bitch when ya dont know what ya talkin about.
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20 Grand - Alright spit man, you had some good punches in there.. but you need to work on your flow.
Best Line - They call you 10tantive?// Ill hold you captive// cuz ur rhymes are defective// Worst Line - you say u rape niggas?// I should pull dat damn trigga// Give u to the gravedigga// 10tative - Good punches in there man, with some good flow.. Best Line - slump back in ya seat kid, the army bout to get defeated/ I've made one line, and ya crew already retreated// Worst Line - NONE OVERALL - I gotta give this battle to 10tative for better punches and good flow, 20 grand your structure is off man and your rymes arnt that great. VOTE - 10tative RETURN THE FAV http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121868 |
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...09&page=2&pp=15
^^^^^ return tha favor Okay,20,nice vocab,but short..Got the flow good though.Ur punches were somewaht OK.But 10,you weren't complex,but more than 20.Ur punches were better than 20's by far.But 20 had the flow here. Vote-10tative |
oh yea i got links in sig
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bumpin this up, but I haven't made 20 posts to return the favour yet. Sorry.
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UppN fo votes, sleeper holla, lets do dis ight
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sleeper indeed. Lets get some votes up in hurr. And i dont even like chingy.
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10tative took dis one easily. His rhyme skeems were superior and i was generally feelin his flow more. I thought dat line about da gaybar was funny. His closing lines were dope as well
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10tative i give you thid battle b/c of punchez, multiples and a nice floe overall. you take the cake.20 GraND your floe was ass. you need to elavate if you wanna win battles dawg. nice battle fellas.
vote=10tative |
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