DP420 vs G Deuce (Da Grim Reaper)
 

Yo DP, lets do da damn thang, fa sho.

Rules:
no d/r or hater votes
10-15 lines
check in before spitting
no feeding

Good luck DP. I'll spit after you gurl since you challenged me.

Shit!! - - - lol' .... He Affraid He Gun Get Merked By A Female! .. * Shit !!


Alright Then!!.. I Got This!!


*Checking In* Playa

Just Getting Started:

U A Master When U Fuckin Gag Dicks u Hick, Whole Lot Of Spit Ignoring Chicks,
Cause Tits And Pussy Make You Fucking Sick, (LoL)
It Dawned On Me When You Said You Went To Check Your Boy,
People, Telling RB How You're Marvelously Self Employed,
Lying About Your Life, I Realized Know You're A Coy,
Confused Lost Fag Your Rhymes Only Self Destroyed,
Your Cover-Ups Don't Front You Exposed YourSelf,
I Can See Why You Act Hard And Big Up Your Wealth,
From The Male Clients Who Like To Bone Without Paying,
You Let Them Know You Get The Dough First Or Bullets Are Spraying,
You Unconsciously Admitted That You Love The Same Sex,
Ill Break It Down For Your A$$ (Figure Of Speech Fag Boy) It Isn't That Complex,
I Dont Even Have To Think To Dismantle Your Silly Rhymes,
You Sound Sissy Like 'Will Smith', Its 'Big-Willy-Time',

Shit Is Over With:
Hit You With The Truth, You Wished You Never Wrote Back,
You Fuckin Whack Crack Head Rapper You Already Got Bitch Slapped,!!!

Now This Is Some Shit' You Set This Up...! & You Gun Go Off Line lol' .. Its Cool! :) No Hard Feelings

Come on now, can a nigga go out to McDs sometimes. Damn.

So check it... count it down

3.......2..................1 !


I’ll sketch my lines on your thoughts and tattoo your mind
Miracally possessed, I’ll lyrically depress your rhymes.
DP is too busy touching her clit then thinking about writing raps
Her rhymes is cool, but she just another bitch in my lap.
I’m taking names while this gurl waiting in line to get ripped
The only tongue twisting this gurl does is when she massaging some dick.
My rage will ignite and burn and leave holes in pages,
And fill more “steel” in words than birds in cages.
This gurl’s boldness got me phenning and filling my cravenness,
While I’m spiting “2nds” and “3rds” got me filling her “cravenness.”
I’ll blaze her easily like I should, she just another Girl Gone Wild (Mug shots)
She be a veteran in rap, but she just a newb to my style.
You fine but this is a man’s world, so I advise you to stick to the girly .
My lines will slice till it looks like her period came a week too early.
“Scramble” my sentences till my wordplay turns your brain to “eggs”
Verbally Splitting Ya Dome, Till It Looks Like Whats Between Ya Legs.


Come wit the real shit DP! Holla at cha boy.

uppin for votes............................................. .....

uppin for votes, mutha fucka...................................

yo this was a good battle. deuce you did good. but if your going to rap about her try not to rap too much about yourself. further more you had no hard hitin punchez except at the end. dp had consistency and her verse was more personal. she ripped you son. so as you already know my vote goes to dp.

vote=dp

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-Will Return The Favor...-

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aight umm honest vote rite here ppl...if u ont think suck my dick

opener-duece...dp i dont know who da fukk u was talkin about
structure-dp
punchlines-duece..dp u had like wun and it was type weak
creativity-duece
wordplay-nun
multi's-dp
personals-duece da mug shot shit
enjoyed-duece

reason-his verse was just all around betta 2 dp u might think im hatin cuzz we gotta lil beef but i got my own opinion nahmean and no lines stood out in ya verse

my vote-deuce

link is my sig..return dat favor both of ya'll...GON

No Disrespect Taken .. MARV - - - ... Appriciate.. You Votin' .. Shit..!! lol


Uppppin 4 More Votes'

Honest vote, uppin for more...................................

tight battle


breakdown:

opener~ g duece
structure~g duece
punches~g duece
overall flow~g duece


my 2 centz:
dp u went off the topic of duece b'n gay
an honestly i wasnt feelin, u didnt back it up w/ hard enuff punches an i spent half the time tryin to understand wat chu was sayin but end the end i got the point and it ended up b'n a nice verse

duece even tho i got u winnin all my votin catorgories, i ain rydin u
i just think u won these in this batle, i think gettin on dp caz she is a fem worked this time, it doesnt work in all the other battles she's in so bigg ups 4 that

gansta battle this is wat rb is all about
vote~duece :thumbup:

Ya'll Drop Some Honest Vote's On This Shit' .. & Quit Sleepin Through It!!



C'Mon Now!! - - -

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cant vote on this man....if i vote she'll say im hating cause her and i have been beefing...sorry G i would drop an honest vote but im'a stay out of DP's battles till we've settled our beef....pce

A Master When U Fuckin Gag Dicks u Hick, Whole Lot Of Spit Ignoring Chicks,
Cause Tits And Pussy Make You Fucking Sick, (LoL)

girl..the dick/chick/sick rhyme scheme is very played..not to mention basic.........i didnt think that punch hit anywhere

It Dawned On Me When You Said You Went To Check Your Boy,
People, Telling RB How You're Marvelously Self Employed,

i think u're tryna imply he's a fag.......but.......its really weak

Lying About Your Life, I Realized Know You're A Coy,
Confused Lost Fag Your Rhymes Only Self Destroyed,

um...no punch

Your Cover-Ups Don't Front You Exposed YourSelf,
I Can See Why You Act Hard And Big Up Your Wealth,

nothin in those
From The Male Clients Who Like To Bone Without Paying,
You Let Them Know You Get The Dough First Or Bullets Are Spraying,

hmmm...no comment
You Unconsciously Admitted That You Love The Same Sex,
Ill Break It Down For Your A$$ (Figure Of Speech Fag Boy) It Isn't That Complex,
nothin again
I Dont Even Have To Think To Dismantle Your Silly Rhymes,
You Sound Sissy Like 'Will Smith', Its 'Big-Willy-Time',
not a good reference at all....will smith references..are a NO

Shit Is Over With:
Hit You With The Truth, You Wished You Never Wrote Back,
You Fuckin Whack Crack Head Rapper You Already Got Bitch Slapped,!!!
nothing mindblowing

ok dp.....the problem is....u have no punches......n ur style is to write a story...n u decided to write a story about him goin to check his boy,so u pinned it on him that he's a fag.......n thats what the whole verse was about........not feelin it........u need punches...punches win battles......i've seen better from u



I’ll sketch my lines on your thoughts and tattoo your mind
Miracally possessed, I’ll lyrically depress your rhymes.
flowed ok,nothin hard hittin in there
DP is too busy touching her clit then thinking about writing raps
Her rhymes is cool, but she just another bitch in my lap.
weak
I’m taking names while this gurl waiting in line to get ripped
The only tongue twisting this gurl does is when she massaging some dick.
lol prolly ur best line
My rage will ignite and burn and leave holes in pages,
And fill more “steel” in words than birds in cages.
well..u were lookin for somethign that rhymed more than for something that would've made a good punch....that was a weak meta
This gurl’s boldness got me phenning and filling my cravenness,
While I’m spiting “2nds” and “3rds” got me filling her “cravenness.”
i dont think craveness is a word.........
I’ll blaze her easily like I should, she just another Girl Gone Wild (Mug shots)
She be a veteran in rap, but she just a newb to my style.
not hard hitting
You fine but this is a man’s world, so I advise you to stick to the girly .
My lines will slice till it looks like her period came a week too early.
lol kinda funny
“Scramble” my sentences till my wordplay turns your brain to “eggs”
Verbally Splitting Ya Dome, Till It Looks Like Whats Between Ya Legs.
ok nothin spectacular


well.......gdouce took it........ur verse wasnt the greatest but u beat dp.....dp didnt come hard at alll...thats all i can say.......

ight coo, still uppin for votes ya heard.........................

nice battle both of yall some hardcore battlers amn and tite 2 so its goin be hard but breakdown

DP-u came at him and i see u wanted it badd u threw george forman punches hit him where it hurts some nice personals easy 2 read structutre and yo flow was on point yo verse was good enuff 4 me 2 go back and read so nice drop

bestline-U A Master When U Fuckin Gag Dicks u Hick, Whole Lot Of Spit Ignoring Chicks,
Cause Tits And Pussy Make You Fucking Sick, (LoL)

^^ nice start and nice jokes

worsteline-People, Telling RB How You're Marvelously Self Employed,
Lying About Your Life, I Realized Know You're A Coy

not 2 bad but da worste1 in it it gets a 7/10 tho so dont throw yo verse off..

G-u came hard also u threw ali punches mixed wit royjones hit her where it hurts and yo punches connected and yo structure was on target 2 give u a nice flow wit a ncie personals added a couple of yo linez made me stop and say damn dass how it wuz so nice drop....

bestline-I’ll sketch my lines on your thoughts and tattoo your mind
Miracally possessed, I’ll lyrically depress your rhymes.

nice start mad eme same damnnnnnnnnn

worsteline-DP is too busy touching her clit then thinking about writing raps
Her rhymes is cool, but she just another bitch in my lap.

not 2 bad didnt throw yo verse out eitha put at a 7/10 also

both of u put a fight but this how it goes down

DP-

punches-9.5/10
flow-9.7/10
creativity-9/10
blows-9.8/10
personals-9.7/10
vocab-9.5/10
open-10/10
close-9.7/10
consitant verse-9/6/10
overall-9.6/10

G

punches-9.5/10
flow-9/10
creativity-9.7/10
blows-9.8/10
personals-9.5/10
vocab-9.7/10
open-9.7/10
close-10/10
consitant verse-9.7/10
overall-9.7/10

barley pull away by G the consitant verse turned da tabels winner G

Cool, uppin for more honest votes.........................................

can i get some honest votes here...........................

still uppin for votes for dis.......................

damn, lol, umm, DP, i luv u girl, i wish i can meet a nice young lady like u one day but, dis is about da battle....so here it is. Alright, G Deuce had mad good punches n da flow was good, DP u had good punches too, but alot of people didn't get ya wordplay but it's still all good.

good battle, but i give dis win to G Deuce,

I HOPE YA'LL HAVE A REMATCH!!!!!