discharge vrs ..ILL..
 

ok loser leaves the crew like you said
u challenged so you spit first
dotn back down
10 lines max
no pre written garbage and there is crew votes!!!!!!!!

oh yean and if you dont spit by 9 this battles gonna be closed so hurry up

no becuz I have 5 battle open so wait for one of them to close....then ill drop change that rule

check it....if da army want to vote against me thats not right becuz no crew votes should be aloud....I dont think they are so read the rules....choppa said no crew votes in this battle so
check it....
Discharge you wack as hell you wack as rhymin isnt gone get ya far
My rhymes leave ya behind the window like yo wack ass mike myers avatar
His record he 9-0 becuz hes battlin newbs but ya cant beat me (G)
Someon stop this bitch discharge b4 I charge this battery....(get it)
You made you dont get no pussy so ya sux dick for a doller...
This bitches rhymes is so bitched they make you turn blue the same color as night crawler...
He pop wit fuckin water guns he dont fuckin pop with nines....
He battles newbs that dont know how to set it up in front lines.....
So go ahead and get ya crew votes becuz true votes is what ya lack....
Becuz now im like the terminator so if ya beat me ill be back....


go ahead and get ya piles in da crew to vote fo ya...becuz you know thats what ya goin to do.....

no crew votes man nice drop aight im checkin in holla

thanks good luck also.....Hope ya get ta stay in da crew aight.....

for u this battle will be uphill, you could have hivs and still not be' ill"//
beatin me is your dream, that you cannot fufill,becuz you lack "skill"//
ull be my next kill,u must like losin i guess it gives you a thrill//
ok ill tell the truth, let the beans spill,leave rapbattles stay home and chill//
you lost this you should detect, realize the fact that uve been wrecked//
your punches were not only weak but incorrect,you clearly cant make them connect//
from a bitch like u what can we expect, u wont get one vote its called "wack mc neglect"//
heres the truth with-all-respect, if you think your rhymes are sweet get yourself checked//
now right here its time for the truth admit,you cant and never will be able to spit//
your rhymes are just plain shit, so next time think before you right garbage and pres"submit"//

lol....I think I got ya on this one.....Nice closiner.....

well man your wasnt bad lets see what the voters think lol uppin^

..ill.. Plz Thing Again Nigga In My Opinon U Actually Did Good For *once* But I Still Think Discharge Won But I Cant Vote So O Well

Not a good battle....Both y'all had weak punches an need to elevate
ILL....you had weak punches, no personals, no multies, no wordplay, basic vocab, bad opener, horrible closer, no creativity, decent flow, good structure

Dis....you had weak punches too, but some were hit ok, good use of multies was your strong point, basic vocab, no personals, no wordplay, weak opener, ok closer, a little creativity, decent flow, structure was messed up though
Breakdown:
Flow: Ill
Structure: Ill
Punches: Dis
Personals: Tie
Opener: Dis
Closer: Dis
Wordplay: Tie
Creativity: Dis
Multies: Dis
Vote: Dis

aight this is what im feelin, i think discharge has this one although i thought that both of your guys's shit was weak i was did like discharges closer,


My vote goes to Discharge

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Ill:
Discharge you wack as hell you wack as rhymin isnt gone get ya far
My rhymes leave ya behind the window like yo wack ass mike myers avatar
-nice opener.. 7/10
His record he 9-0 becuz hes battlin newbs but ya cant beat me (G)
Someon stop this bitch discharge b4 I charge this battery....(get it)
-forced... work on that
You made you dont get no pussy so ya sux dick for a doller...
This bitches rhymes is so bitched they make you turn blue the same color as night crawler...
-another forced one with lack of wordplay and "spelling"
overall:7/10

Discharge:
for u this battle will be uphill, you could have hivs and still not be' ill"//
beatin me is your dream, that you cannot fufill,becuz you lack "skill"//
-ill personal opening
your punches were not only weak but incorrect,you clearly cant make them connect//
from a bitch like u what can we expect, u wont get one vote its called "wack mc neglect"//
-nice punch with them multies
now right here its time for the truth admit,you cant and never will be able to spit//
your rhymes are just plain shit, so next time think before you right garbage and pres"submit"//
-ill closer..
overall:8.5/10

Ill u did good at beginnin and then u went downhill wit ur flow and punches..

Discharge u started off good wit ur flow and nice structure and u ended it like that.. much props

vote=discharge

HAHAHAH Ill ur wack kid... blacklist me?? nigga ur the wackest bitch ive ever seen or heard of.. get the fuck off this forum and go rap elementary kids nigga.. oh ya.. make sure u dont run and "snitch" for unexplained votes this battle bitch.. punkass

hey you little bitch y did you blacklist him huh??
u fuckin faggot take him off now thats cheap ass hell man u wack

both were really weak..but ill..that nightcrawer line,i wanted to throw my computer it was so weak..........im not gonna really brake it down but...i'll have to give this to discharge.........

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aight..both of ya had simple rhymes..but the spit was good..this was easy to choose who won...

Ill:
Spit: 6/10 boring thats why
multi: 2/10 was there any?
punch: 6/10 lil punch

dis:
Spit: 8/10 Nice Opener
multi: 6/10 nice multis
punch:8/10

as u can tell discharge had the upper hand up in here....discharge had simple rhymes but put them good together to make the lines hit strong

Aight ill..I know ur really good..but for some reason wasn't showin that skill at all in this spit..ur punches were good but almost so bad..it was close to being wack..
U had no multis which made it boring..and jst didn't have enough punches to kill discharge..aight..

vote: discharge

hmm wasnt that great...

Ill- ur last 4 lines was the hottest....dont say get ur crew 2 vote cause thats wht u'll do 2 get sympathy...overall...ur last 4 lines was good but didnt hit as hard...they were funny howeva...ur flow and structure was good...but ur punches wasnt there all the way...u should have been consistant

Discharge-ur punches werent that hott either but u did enough 2 get my vote...ur punches were hitting him as far as im concerned..ur flow and structure was good...BUT THIS BATTLE IS DUMB U BOTH GOOD...WHY NOT WORK 2GETHER AND ELEVATE INSTEAD OF FIGHTING 2 SEE WHO STAYS IN THE CREW...JUST LEAVE THE CREW IF NO 1 WANTS U IN THE CREW...GOES FOR BOTH OF U...THERES PLENTY OF CREWS THAT WILL PICK YALL UP...

ok okok damn i gotta give this too discharge...i think the first line took ill ill u coo wit me but ur shit was aiight discharge had a sick verse......the first line dis put i was like...dayum.....ill work on ur vocab and punches and multies..but good battle

vote:discharge

breakdown:

...ILL...:

Discharge you wack as hell you wack as rhymin isnt gone get ya far
My rhymes leave ya behind the window like yo wack ass mike myers avatar
^^ill ass opener good personal 9/10
His record he 9-0 becuz hes battlin newbs but ya cant beat me (G)
Someon stop this bitch discharge b4 I charge this battery....(get it)
^^another hott ass punch good shyt so far 8/10
You made you dont get no pussy so ya sux dick for a doller...
This bitches rhymes is so bitched they make you turn blue the same color as night crawler...
^^this bar is stretched but stilla good punch 7/10
He pop wit fuckin water guns he dont fuckin pop with nines....
He battles newbs that dont know how to set it up in front lines.....
^^lol another personal and punch good shyt 8/10
So go ahead and get ya crew votes becuz true votes is what ya lack....
Becuz now im like the terminator so if ya beat me ill be back....
^^ ill closer good wordplay in 1st line 7/10

overall: 39/50

discharge:

for u this battle will be uphill, you could have hivs and still not be' ill"//
beatin me is your dream, that you cannot fufill,becuz you lack "skill"//
^^good use of multies but it didnt flow at all bad opener 5/10
ull be my next kill,u must like losin i guess it gives you a thrill//
ok ill tell the truth, let the beans spill,leave rapbattles stay home and chill//
^^nothing interesting 6/10
you lost this you should detect, realize the fact that uve been wrecked//
your punches were not only weak but incorrect,you clearly cant make them connect//
^^gettin better 7/10
from a bitch like u what can we expect, u wont get one vote its called "wack mc neglect"//
heres the truth with-all-respect, if you think your rhymes are sweet get yourself checked//
^^stretched bars and seemed force OK punch 6/10
now right here its time for the truth admit,you cant and never will be able to spit//
your rhymes are just plain shit, so next time think before you right garbage and pres"submit"//
^^weak finisher point blank 4/10

overall:28/50

vote: ....ILL....... his punches and personals were ill by far the best verse i have ever seen from him....discharge this is by far the worst thing u have ever dropped in your life..u didnt interest me in any way punches were OK no personals all u had was sick multies and some wordplay

Okay this battle was ight.. ..Ill.. u had a good flow and average structure..

discharge on the other hand had an average flow and good structure and great multis.
discharge wins this battle due to his punches.. it seemed to connect and hit harder

vote=discharge