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LethalNJectionz .vs. FallingAngel2k4
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.: Rulez :. 10 - 16 Lines NO D/R, Crew, Hate, BLAH BLAH Votes ^ Must be explained Due : 3 hours ============== 'luck playa.. |
Angle r u crazy this nigga will merk u no questions ask/sorry to free post
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LethalNJectionz know That I put it down, fa real
Got it with the pen, but I hold the steel, ha And I'm a MC killa, I do it for my niggaz LethalNJectionz laced the track, Reck fronted the figgas Bops scheming let my jokes out, nigga hot now and I'm going to drop now Know I'm saying, you dogs ain't playing this year I'm out the Penitentiary, trying to leave these suckas in the rear I fear no man, but God This my motherfucking job it's my life, for when times get hard Cause these fraud mo'fuckers, ain't deceiving young nigga Get your grind on get up out the gutta, and see riches you bitches |
Who is this/This anit M if it is /u suck/but u gottten betta/He still gonna kill u
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upping for votes votes votes votes................
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this shit was weak as hell this shit wasnt cool
it was weak hardly no rhyme no structure yo shit was all off beat it made no type of fuckn sense |
ok whenever u are ready u can spit................
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hey man watch it spikey falling angel has come a long way i can see he has been praticing but when the other nigga drop his verse then i will vote igght hey angel go vote on my battle aginst spiky2k8
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|..Cracks Knuckles..|
|..You Think You Can Beat Me With Something As Wack As That? Please, You Have A Better Chance Dogs Being Chased By Cats..| |..Ima Serve This Cat Quick, Just Like Fast Food Waiters Your Rhymes Don't Move Me, Like Unpowered Escalators..| |..^Damn, That Line Right There Could Of Killed Your Whole Game Why Should I Be Scared Of Someone With Angel In Their Name?..| |..Damn Your Flow Is Way Off, Your Verse Is Just Plain Crap What Company Would Hire A Emcee With A Number In They Name, And Can't Rap..| |..Ima Finish This Wack, So I Can Make You Stay Without A Win You Couldn't Beat Me In A Battle, If You Battled Me With A Twin..| |
lethal had more punches so im gonna vote for you, your stucture and flow was simply better.
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uppin numero uno..
can a mod please clean the fp's please? |
Break Down For FallingAngel2k4
LethalNJectionz know That I put it down, fa real Got it with the pen, but I hold the steel, ha ^Weak Opener 2/10 And I'm a MC killa, I do it for my niggaz LethalNJectionz laced the track, Reck fronted the figgas ^ Okkkkk... Where's The Punch!! - Know I'm saying, you dogs ain't playing this year I'm out the Penitentiary, trying to leave these suckas in the rear ^Directed At Whom?? .... - - Cause these fraud mo'fuckers, ain't deceiving young nigga Get your grind on get up out the gutta, and see riches you bitches ^ And WTF Is This Shit Right Here I See??? - - - OverAll Weak Verse' ... - - -!!! Checckit Checck Break Down For LethalNJectionz: |..You Think You Can Beat Me With Something As Wack As That? Please, You Have A Better Chance Dogs Being Chased By Cats..| ^Lol... Alright Opener' ...!! - Better Than Any Of Angel's Lines In Their Whole Verse!! |..Ima Serve This Cat Quick, Just Like Fast Food Waiters Your Rhymes Don't Move Me, Like Unpowered Escalators..| ^Nice PunchLine ... 8/10 |..Ima Finish This Wack, So I Can Make You Stay Without A Win You Couldn't Beat Me In A Battle, If You Battled Me With A Twin..| ^Weak Closer' .. But you Finished 'Em Off...!!! With The Kill Vote.....: LethalNJectionz By Far! - Pretty One Sided Battle...!!!! Angel Elevate' .. & Stick To Your Own Level' .. Im Not Even Sure If Your On A Level' ..!! |
ok i think lyric took this one real close
had better metas in there and punches ive seen alot of reference to escalatores in here angle good job format was a lil choppy but overall i liked the flow just need to clean up your finished product before sending v-lethal ,more experience |
uppin numero dos.. PLEASE CLEAN THIS THREAD UP!!!!
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yo this was one sided....lethal took like all the categories....he had the flow, sick punches, personals, good meta's, wordplay was straight, and a better verse.....da solution u need to elevate ya rhymes kid....ya flow was fucked up.....punches were weak....jus basic ish....elevate kid....
vote - lethal |
one more vote for the victory.. lets go people....
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angel... wack
personals: i must have been vlind, cuz i saw none structure: i feel dumber by reading all that multis: nah uh over all: amazingly one of the worst verses ever lethal....decent personals: some structure: came together on and off multis: virtually none over all: not good enough to happen again, but good enough to kick this kid vote : lethal INJECTIONS |
^ man i wish that vote could count.. uppin #4 for final vote..
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angel nothin impressed me work on vocab personals structure flow and multis elevate
lethal good flow and structure work on ur vocab personals and thowinb moe multis this was 1 sided pretty good verse overall vote lethal |
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