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Lyrical Demon 04 05-03-04 09:17 PM

Lyrical Demon Vs FallingAngel2k4
 
you know how it goes

no d/r votes
no freeposting
no crew votes

10-15 lines
u spit first

Lyrical Demon = Big Man = Unknown Assassin = DQed.

FallingAngel2k4 05-03-04 09:21 PM

Yo, why do battlerap life have to be like this? I hang with the righteous
Samples of my product, got fiends lurkin' the block
For them teens murkin' them cops, for death penalties at stake
Shakes scrapped off of porcelein plate, to the last grain
Never make the mistake of givin' my last name
To a woman who blames me for all the problems in her life
I play the wheel of fortune, spinnin' revolvers on my life
My life, is similar to a shooting range, but I'm aimed the target
And everybody's takin' shots at me
I pull up fab', but you was love, but I'm not happy
Ask me what motivates me, I'll tell you my baby son
Now it's back to the slums, where about 80 tons of bricks
Creative a building where I stack my chips
Flip, eject and keep squeezing, to the heat recordings
You disrespected, now you fertiziled trees deep in the soil

FallingAngel2k4 05-03-04 09:31 PM

Demon u going to spit or not go u wasting my damn time spit damn it

Lyrical Demon 04 05-03-04 09:36 PM

get ready for these rhymes because im lyrically insane
im dry like sand and you wet like rain/u play wit sugar/but i bring the pain

i thought you was clean but you a dirty hoe
instead of coming up wit yr own u just stole a flow

whats that i smell oh thats jus yo upper lip
im strong/ill break yo neck like a potato chip

once again i say i dont fuck wit queers
im the lakers you the cavaliers

whats that i want to tell....oh thats right you gay again
with a name like falling angel im sure youll attract lots of men

so you claim you the best lol yeah right
soon you will be once i leave this site

so just quit stealin flows and stop being a hater
im the m.v.p and you just a bench player

Lyrical Demon 04 05-03-04 09:37 PM

upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin 4 voteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssssssssss

FallingAngel2k4 05-03-04 09:42 PM

upppppppppppppping for some damn votes
VOTESSSSSSSSSSSS

FallingAngel2k4 05-03-04 09:59 PM

Uuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppppppppppppppp For Votttttttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssssss

vinman 05-03-04 10:06 PM

damn angel i dont wan to vote cuse he fount out that u be using other people stuff thats cool man cuse if cprogress or strobe find out yo ass gettin banned for cheating

Lyrical Demon 04 05-03-04 10:32 PM

upppppppppppppppppppiun 4 votesssssssssssssssssssssssssss

puertoricanelly 05-03-04 10:40 PM

VOTE ON THIS BATTLE AND ILL HITCHUR BATTLE UP CUZ CATZ AINT VOTIN ON MY SHIT AND IVE VOTED ON THEIRS , IF YOU WANT A VOTE HOOK MA BATTLE UP HERES THE LINK
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122221

Lyrical Demon 04 05-03-04 10:46 PM

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppiin 4 votesssssssssss

Lyrical Demon 04 05-03-04 10:51 PM

upppppppppppppppppppiun 4 votesssssssssssssssssssssssssssh

Lyrical Demon 04 05-04-04 09:26 PM

Uuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppppppppppppppp For Votttttttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssssss
__________________.

Sten. Cell 05-04-04 09:39 PM

Breakdown:
Punches: Neither
Meta: Neither
Multies: Neither
Wordplay: Neither
Flow: Demon
Disses: Demon

Overall-Demon Takes This One.Mainly Because His Verse Was An Actual Battle Verse.Angel Seemed To Jus Be Talkin.Didnt Really Aim His Verse At Demon.Both Emcees Do Need To Elevate A Bit.Demon's Verse Was Too Basic But He Still Takes It.


Vote-Lyrical Demon

Lyrical Demon 04 05-04-04 11:03 PM

upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin 4 voteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees

MetaPhysik 05-05-04 07:02 AM

lyrical demon took this with overall better verse

get ready for these rhymes because im lyrically insane
im dry like sand and you wet like rain/u play wit sugar/but i bring the pain
i thought you was clean but you a dirty hoe
instead of coming up wit yr own u just stole a flow
whats that i smell oh thats jus yo upper lip
im strong/ill break yo neck like a potato chip
once again i say i dont fuck wit queers
im the lakers you the cavaliers
whats that i want to tell....oh thats right you gay again
with a name like falling angel im sure youll attract lots of men
so you claim you the best lol yeah right
soon you will be once i leave this site
so just quit stealin flows and stop being a hater
im the m.v.p and you just a bench player
lmao nice verse though

Yo, why do battlerap life have to be like this? I hang with the righteous
Samples of my product, got fiends lurkin' the block
For them teens murkin' them cops, for death penalties at stake
Shakes scrapped off of porcelein plate, to the last grain
Never make the mistake of givin' my last name
To a woman who blames me for all the problems in her life
I play the wheel of fortune, spinnin' revolvers on my life
My life, is similar to a shooting range, but I'm aimed the target
And everybody's takin' shots at me
I pull up fab', but you was love, but I'm not happy
Ask me what motivates me, I'll tell you my baby son
Now it's back to the slums, where about 80 tons of bricks
Creative a building where I stack my chips
Flip, eject and keep squeezing, to the heat recordings
You disrespected, now you fertiziled trees deep in the soil
aight but decent

both peep the sencond link in my sig please

FallingAngel2k4 05-05-04 08:33 AM

Uppping Foooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrr Votessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ss

FallingAngel2k4 05-05-04 07:48 PM

UPPPPPPPPING FOR VOOOOOOOOTEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSs

K-Trin 05-05-04 07:57 PM

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122401
^^^ vote

Flow would have to go to Falling Angel.So would creativity.Neither of you were complex.It didn't seem like you guys put any effort into this.But Falling angel,punches is where you fail miserabley.Weak.I mean,lyrical's punches were whck,but yours didn't seem like a punch.

Vote-Lyrical Demon(drop a vote in my battle man)

Foe Real 05-05-04 08:19 PM

angel u got no flow dawg u need to work on delivery, add summ meta's and shit guy

Demon ur shit was tight, good flow and some good wordplay dawg

vote: Demon

Lyrical Demon 04 05-05-04 08:22 PM

uppppppppppppppppppppppin 4 votessssssssssssssssssss

Lyrical Demon 04 05-05-04 09:22 PM

dumb ass nigga gon spit poetery hahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

MoTiF 05-05-04 09:52 PM

Wow Super weak not much of anything from either but ill give it to 04 b/c his shit at least rhymed.

Punches-idk
Flow-04
Personals-didnt see any
Overall-04

Unknown Assassin 05-05-04 10:21 PM

i hate to say it but demon beat yo ass angel you ass stealin rhymes from other people
demon you had a good punches and wordplay
and you keep elevatin and youll get good

ma vote demon


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