$$upreme Vs. Tonyself
 

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i dont agree with those rulez.........................

When i see your verse then ill drop i told you that .........and OF COURSE NO CREW VOTES WHY WOULD YOU EVEN ASK DAT SHIT MAN...............

WHAT DON'T YOU AGREE WITH?.........

I Set This Up.....
U Spit First.................
I Dont Give A Fuck........

Fuckit checkin........................................... ..............

Now and then i hear from bitches postin shit in this forum
this rap game aint for the plain and aint got nuthin for em

Use your head or end up dead when you callin me out
or your head will end up where shit suppose to squeeze out

Venture off on excusions of you thuggin down south
naw thats just your lips on this dick you huggin with your mouth

i saw ya battles it was sweet like babies with rattles
now imma swear in this ok bitch so please dont tattle

and imma end this with tremendous style and lyrical pain
your Bio.......... you .from cali and loves your video games
sayin ..love me not for my looks but more for my brain
and if you ....
a dude thats cool to that was kinda my aim
dont be misguided about my age" so im only fifteen"
ok .........the closet door is open now its time i come clean
cuz you know my name is ".$$upreme and.im simply a dick feen"

^^^tony Is A Dick Feen ^^^^ Lol Hahahha
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Besides the streeeeeeeeeetched lines nice drop son honest votes needed dont sleep

aight check it...

tony--
Flow:5/10
wordusage:3/10
vocabulary:3/10
punches:3/10
creativity:4/10
opener:2/10
closer:6/10

overall:26/70

Comment:dogg you need to elevate...thats all i have to say

Fav/line:closer...but still wasnt all that

Supreme:
Flow:5/10
wordusage:6/10
vocabulary:6/10
punches:5/10
creativity:6/10
opener:4/10
closer:5/10

overall:37/70

Comment:overall u did better than tony....but a word of advice...leave the newbs alone there for other newbs to battle not for vets

Fav/line:I "fire" Techs, & Adopt A Mc, You "hire" Vets*
You Couldn't Really' Fuck Wit Me Like Cyber SEX*

v/$$upreme

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

ok check it honeet vote here

supreme i liked yo ish on dis kid tony u did good stayin wit him but supreme jus had da advantage ova u

supreme-nice punches and flow

bestline-Now and then i hear from bitches postin shit in this forum
this rap game aint for the plain and aint got nuthin for em

worseline none

tony u had some nice ish yo self but like i said supreme had the advantage

winner goes 2 supreme

uppin............................................. ....

Is yall really gonna sleep on this one???????????????????

not sure
 

this shit was close but... i didn't like how tony had no real punches! and it seemed kinda simple... you $$ that shit was ok but i seen you do better. you need to use more punches both of you.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

tony
Flow:1/10 usin the same word 2 make shit rhyme is herbish work on ur flow
vocabulary:4/10 nothin really good bawsic wrok on it
punches:4/10 ok didnt hit very hard and was played
creativity:2/10 like i said above played work on it
opener:2/10 gay didnt flow and didnt hit
closer:5/10 pretty good but played
overall:18/60
work on all i stated then ull b better u need mad elevation

Supreme:
Flow:8/10 flow was really good
vocabulary:5/10 needs work but had more complex words than tony
punches:6/10 i feel ur punches hit pretty hard
creativity:7/10 u actually came pretty creative good job
opener:5/10 2nd line was good but didnt really like the 1
closer:3/10 wasnt feelin it was kinda played
u could work on ur vocab and structure a lil ur flow was good good verse overall
overall:34/60
u get my vote u had better everything except 4 ur closer

yo bitch ive seen your shit... just another dick riding vote i wouldn t battle you for the fact that my name next to yours depriciates my value ..........DickRidah

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Y Did 2 Votes Get Dq'd....
They Were Both Explained

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Supreme: I like ur flow it was amusing and made me laugh as well as creative on constructing punches nice job and goos vocab as well as closer not so well on the opener but you could change that by elevation overall i give you a 7/10

Tony self
Nothing really impressed me and the dick punches are getting old now OK punches on the rest but u need to elevate as well as structure but good shit kinda a close one overall i give you a 6/10

Vote: $$upreme

nice verse supreme you took this easy. your verse was short but you had nice punches and multiples. you got this easily.

Alright return the favour I'm vote'n on this right now http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122892
Da Vinci vs infamous j

TONY
Flow:5/10
Wordplay:4/10
vocabulary:5/10-kinda weak but I'ma still give it a 5
punches:4/10-needed more and harder hitting punches
creativity:4/10-rattles battels shit is played o-u-t
opener:4/10-like the way you were thinking but needed to polish it up
closer:7/10-a decent punch

overall:33/70



Supreme:
Flow:4/10-maybe more flow next time
wordusage:6/10-decent
vocabulary:7/10-way to mix it up
punches:8/10- good punches, and there were consistent all the way through
creativity:6/10
opener:6/10- I like the lights out part the first line was just alright
closer:7/10-Thats a nice closer, on a strong note

overall:44/70