DisasterPeice420 Vs. TonySelf
 

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No D/R
No Crew
No Hate
No Bullshit
No Unexplained
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Drop After Check Ins'..!!

--- I Guess Im Dropping First' .... - - -

Checkin in................................................

You Can't Think Of More Than You Said The First-Time,
So Like DisasterPeice Said Go Back And Just Reverse Your-Rhymes,
Your Diluted Weak Styles Crumble'n Under-Your-Feet,
You Still Mumble'n Shit About Me Like A Bitch-In-Heat,
You Trying A Diss On Me Cause I Got Clicks-Cross-Coasts,
You Full Of Shit "Taking A Vacation" But Never-Left-Home,
You Should Work On Making A New Break In A Different-Career,
If All You Can Rap About Is Chugging Cock And Your-Queer,
If You Needed More Support Buy A Prefab-Rap,
Maybe Call Hooked On Phonics To Work On The-Vocab,
You Immitate Art When You Write After Me,
You Just A Work In Progress But I'm A True Da-Vinchi,
Told You Before, Time To Loose The Nappy Rows,
Loose The Nappy Clothes, Save The Money You Spend On Flows,
Come Back Prepared Or I'll Have Your A$$ Deported,
I'd Say Pay More Attention But We Know You Cant Afford It,


*And Im Through Wit It* lol

Alright' .. Good Luck Playa' .....!! ** Hurry Up And Drop Some Shit

So whats the deal here.. i see you been screamin you real...
The only thing you been dreamin i need to keep it concieled..

Behind my zipper feenin for it So im maken ya squeal....
and suckin dick shit, that still wont get you a deal..

Stick a microphone up ya ass So i can hear ya shit..
....just shit streaks
The form of your lines when your startin to spit...
... your spits weak ...
With flows lookin like crack hoes with siphileous..
.....you beatin me..
Ummmm no kid thats just plain rediculous..

You just a spectator up in this fucking rymin sport..
....u like sex games...
Specially when you get fucked like a whore..
....had a sex change..
Thats why your rhymes were girlish before..
....cant remain the same..
His ass gets thrust hard open like doors
. ...kid loves givin brains..
Lost his own..asking questions like whats a meta for?..
. ...sheets filled with stains..

Hollerin at least 2 guys in the bed or more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aight good luck man its all love in here................

Yo Tonyself Wassup???...


U Knocked Him Out His Seat, Man

Good Luck On Other Battles.


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Alright' .. Uppppppppppin 4 Votes' .. !

DAMN! - .. I Think EveryBody On This Site Know's By Now!! Im a "FEMALE"

Would You Like Me To Be Any More Specific' ..!!!!!..


F - E - M - A - L - E!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Got Damn.. lol!!!! ...

Upppppppppppin 4 Votes' ...!!!!

lol
is that yourpic?...................................

that's u in da picture, right???
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*:::Damn_Straight:::* - - - !!!

though u wuz a guy with a pic of a sexy girl.

GOOD ide fuck ya ahhhhhhhhhhh just playin you look good tho

:::***Damn Straight Thats Mah PiCc***:::

Hell Nah' I Aint No ' Guy ... lol - - -!!!! ... Haha....!! Damn



Upppppppppin 4 Votes' Yall


-Highly Appriciate Em- ......

Yea i definately thought you was a dude yo my bad

how do you start a crew in this???

Don't Sleep On This Shit Ya'll.. Drop Some Honest Votes' ..!!!


-Highly Appriciated-

and how do u put a picture on a post, man???

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

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Ya'll Drop Some Honest Vote's On This Shit' .. & Quit Sleepin Through It!!



C'Mon Now!! - - -

(I Will Make Sure To Return The Favor)

Dont sleep i dont my average daily post is fuckin 39 so cmon yall holla back me and disasta layed it down up in here

that girl looks pretty fit but im gonna have to vote for tony self because he had the best word play, punch lines and flowin rymin technique. Disaster i didn't feel you babes sorry but damn your a hot babe in pantie hoes, which is your only decent flow. lol

hott battle DP420 u had some good punches in there dont think i saw a personal...good structure and flow...and wordplay and multies...good verse

tony u had a hott verse too but i aint really feelin your style its original how u do it...but u still had some fire punches..good shyt from both

breakdown:
DP420
flow:8/10
wordplay:7/10
punches:7/10
structure:9/10
multies:6/10
opener:5/10
closer:8/10

overall:50/70

tony:
flow:7/10
wordplay:6/10
punches:8/10
structure:5/10
multies:4/10
opener:5/10
closer:6/10

overall: 41/70

good verses from both but DP420 edged this battle out

vote:DP420

Good Looking.. Out FlOW' ..!! Appriciate It' ...!! - - -


Upppppppppppin 4 More Votes' .. Ya'll

Cmon man.. are we fuckin running an election here campaining........

Stop sleeping.......................................... ...

Yo You Need Dat Naked Pic Up On There Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Naked?????????????????? WTF ......................... lol

lmfao im just playin....................................

to be honest wit yall,dis wasnt a very good battle.but imma do the review anyways

DISASTERPIECE:ok do be honest,your verse wasnt very good.you used alot of ''big''vocabulary but the end result was shit.im not hatin votin,im just saying.you had some ok flow,but i almost fell asleep durin it.
best line:You Can't Think Of More Than You Said The First-Time,
So Like DisasterPeice Said Go Back And Just Reverse Your-Rhymes,
this was the best line in your verse.ok diss,but.......w/e not that great.
worst line:You Immitate Art When You Write After Me,
You Just A Work In Progress But I'm A True Da-Vinchi,
now,this is a complete lie.j/k.its actually not bad,but i dont like it at all.
overall:4/10.pretty crappy.you gotta work on makin some stuff better.wordplay mostly.

TONYSELF:you had the upper hand on this without a doubt.i didnt like your structure very much,because of the ....s everywhere,but your disses were pretty good.
best line:Behind my zipper feenin for it So im maken ya squeal....
and suckin dick shit, that still wont get you a deal..
that isnt very strong,but it works.
worst line:Stick a microphone up ya ass So i can hear ya shit..
....just shit streaks
The form of your lines when your startin to spit...
... your spits weak ...
this line makes me want to cry.why the hell is it so dumb.anyways i cant do nuthin bout it now.
overall:6/10. good.work on your structure alot more,thatll help you.

VOTE: TONYSELF

Yo Much much respect to Disasta but imma give dis 2 tonyself cause he killed it wit da Flow...n punches......Holla bak fa realll

Damn this was a really weak battle, but someones gotta get a vote
Disaster....that was a really weak verse, you had very few punches and the ones you had were weak an stretched, didn't have any personals, not really any multies, flow was alrite, structure was cool, but flow an structure don't win battles

Tony....your shit was weak too, but the few punches you had hit a little harder, you had no personal neither, your flow was alrite, your structure was wack, no multies
Breakdown:
Punches: Tony
Personals: Tie
Wordplay: Tie
Multies: Tie
Flow: Tie
Structure: Dp
Creativity: Tony
Vote: Tony
You won but just barely

opener- Disaster took this one,
structure-Tony that was a sick structure kid, don't see to many that can make it work
punchline- Tony takes this one as well, but this was very close,
creativity-Distater had some nice punches but not really all new, so Tony takes this one
multis- Tie
flow-Disaster, cause tony although it was a nice style a bit hard to chew through
personals-Tony
enjoyed- Tony a bit more, Disaster started off hot but there were a few to many filler verses
closer-Disaster takes this one
'd Say Pay More Attention But We Know You Cant Afford It,
-nice punch

As you can see this was a dead even battle, I'ma give it to Tony cause his punches hit harder