King D Vs. 20 GraND
 

ight rulz:
no crew votes
no dickriding
explained votes only plz....

ight u got 15 mins to post ur ryhme after u check in, blind spit holla!

OMG is dis kid a no show??
Come on KING D letz do dis shit...

No show... wow
Hey King D if u dont reply b4 tonight ill report to cancel dis thread ight???

lets do this
 

ight, blind spit due in 15 mins after this post time... ok holla GL yo

You'll drown in my spit cuz my flow is so good//
Then you'll float to shore like a piece of driftwood//
Lyricly Speakn, your vocabs in 3rd Grade//
And ur shits watered down like a glass of CoolAid//
When u eat a hotdog you lick every crevasse//
Cuz you love the "dog style" when u take it in the ass//
My tempers about to flare like the 4th of July//
Nigga you wont last like a cheap ass Alkaline//
Ur luck this time, ill let u off the hook//
so go find some vocab and mettas in that pre-written notebook//

here it is
 

aight here i go kid...and thanks for the luck, i'm goin to need every bit i can get


yo,you rhyme slow but i rhyme fast like a cougar//
i'll slice and dice you dawg like freddy Crougar//
your girl left you for me and gave me head//
cuz she told me she saw last night with some dude in your bed//
your bitch is labeled as sleezy-see//
look, 20 Grand gettin fucked like a hoe, just like Eazy-E//
How should i plead in the court law?//
not guilty your honour, I'm fucking raw//
I'll cut you with a chainsaw to make you withdraw,//
Sit back in awe as I break ya jaw,//
Yeah muthafucka.....I'm an outlaw!//
Crowbar accross the face, //
with enough pace, to leak blood all over this place,//
blast you into outer space, you're a disgrace to the rap game,//
I'm not letting go, so i blow off your top//
with one shot my glock,//
It stays hot just to drop,//
any fagot tryin to diss, now watch me piss,//
in your mouth before my gun aims down south,//
To blow off your fucking balls,//
Spit back at me if you've got the balls,//
but stand tall don't fall, i like a battle with a twist,//
I want your reply coming hard with a fist,//
It's no fun if your foe can't rhyme,//
So why not join and be partners in crime?//

yo i'm out i dont even think that shit is hot i only got 15 min but i'm not goin to complain

yo my fault i didnt know you were going before me i though i was goin first

we both had 15 mins... Good battle though, holla

Uppn for votes

I like teh flow of your shit King D. Sounds like wicky wicky boom shakalaka aa booom!

sweet

yo your shit was nice.....and yeah it was a nice battle
but i need some votes so lets do this people

HOLLA AT CHA BOI

uppppppppppppNN lol holla

fuck the fucking fuckers. anrchary in the Uk..PUnk lives

Sorry My bro jumped on and wrote that

but yo people stop sleepin on this battle we need some votes

Uppn

uppn

cuz im sik wit it...

Uppn, plz vote guys fo serious...

Uppn.... why sleep on it lol.....

UppN

UppN

UppN, if u view this battle plz vote, might as well right?

come on people we need some votes like 20 said dont sleep on this...this battle was pretty hot

UppN

UppN

UppN fo votes

UppN

UppN

Uppn, we have no votes in like 5 days lol.. come on

UppN

U had a good flow King but no metas or vocab or complexity...

this battle was like my battles in the past ... herbish! but umm im not gonna hate cuz i been there bfore but im gonna have to give this to 20 grand

Punches: 20
opening: 20
close: 20
vocab: 20
Structure: King

As plainly seen 20 grand won this

Keep elevating!!!!

Can yall Vote on my OLDDDD AASSSS BATTLE FROM WHEN I WAS HERB heres the link and id appreciate the favor heres the link

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=112311

yo, aiight battle
king started off strong and juz completly fell off. after the first few lines i woz like king shud win this but juz completely fell off. 20 stayed even all tha way with nice flow and layout. 20 had better punches and overall woz better. king if u kept on doing wot u did in tha first few lines u cud have won this but i think 20 took this

Okay heres the break down...
20 grand:
ur flow was ight... ur structure was average.. u had very few punches and personals.. but they connected to me more..
overall:7/10

King D:
ur flow was ight.. but ur structure is lackin.. work on ur structure man.. add like 3-4 more words or sum shit.. u had plenty of punches.. but some didnt make sense.
overall:6.5/10
closebattle guys..

vote-20 grand

Punches: 20
opening: 20
close: 20
vocab: 20
Structure: King

this battle was still boring..it was boring the whole way..but i gotta give this ta 20 agen....king..ur spit was good..but jst not good enough to beat this nigga aight...u gotta uppin in ur vocab hella..and put more thought into it..

UppN, 1 mo vote plz...

UppN

20 got this he verse was shortin and more dynamic punches king d ur verse was ok but u had a couple of spots where ur flow was a bit off so 20 ges my vote cause his shit was harder and flowed better.

My vote:20