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vinman 05-04-04 09:35 PM

Lyrical 04 Vs. Vinman
 
Lets Go Nigga U No The Rule

No D/r

No Hate

No Crew

No Bite


10 - 20 Lines




U Spit First I Seted Up U Have Until Tomro At 6:00 To Spit

Lyrical Demon 04 05-04-04 10:30 PM

your rhymes is like a brick(missed basketball shot)and imma bout to rebound
you have no right to be on this site..... you just a amature clown
your rhymes are so weak i cant help but laugh
imma fuckin demon and you gonna feel my wrath
im like K.G(basketball player)im the mvp of the shit
yo ass cant keep up with these flows i spit
You claim you the vinman but you the vinboy
Stupid,Punk ass nigga....still playin wit toys
you a little ass nigga......imma grown ass man
I got these flows .... you cant even understand
just take a minute to just tap into whats left of yo brain
yo ass tryin to go up against me damm you must be insane
I aint spikey 2k8 or the goddamm solution
my flows are like clear water and yo shit is pollution
you soft like cotton and im hard like a rock
yo moms a bitch and she bows down to my cock
and think twice before you try to go against da demon
ill fuck yo ho mama and let her drown in ma semon(cum)

Da MaGiCiAn 7 05-04-04 10:35 PM

ay yo why u gonna drop a verse in here but not in da battle against me?...our battle was set up last night fa real... and u got like a half-an-hour 2 spit... so drop ya lines in our battle...o yea imma vote on dis when its done....holla back..

vinman 05-05-04 07:46 AM

no free posting but kid i like that verse i got to go to school so ill be back at 4:30 igght to spit

Lyrical Demon 04 05-05-04 08:53 PM

nigga its been past 4:30 ol dumbass

vinman 05-05-04 08:59 PM

sorry for taking so damn long i was at school i should of came home but im fina spit dont worry

check it im fina go at it with biggest newb ever seen//

hitting him my flow, deadliest ever seen//

im killing nigger with all damn i heat i got//

beating this nigger until his body frezze and rot(to shrivel up and die)

he call him self the damn, lryical demon// but im gona cut his ass like the free agent

derrick freeman// he say that im a little boy that plays toys in A chair aginst the wall//

but he a damn pussy that PLAYS WITH FUCKING BABY DOLLS// punching him is like

hiting a pilllow// got his ass crying like his mama, a fucking wepping widow// im taking

this man to heavens in the sky, having this nigga screaming the fucking word WHY/

BUT YO ASS BEATING ME IS JUST SOME DAMN LIE

vinman 05-05-04 09:00 PM

sorry for taking so damn long i was at school i should of came home but im fina spit dont worry

check it im fina go at it with biggest newb ever seen//

hitting him my flow, deadliest ever seen//

im killing nigger with all damn i heat i got//

beating this nigger until his body frezze and rot(to shrivel up and die)

he call him self the damn, lryical demon// but im gona cut his ass like the free agent

derrick freeman// he say that im a little boy that plays toys in A chair aginst the wall//

but he a damn pussy that PLAYS WITH FUCKING BABY DOLLS// punching him is like

hiting a pilllow// got his ass crying like his mama, a fucking wepping widow// im taking

this nigga to heavens in the sky, having this nigga screaming the fucking word WHY//

BUT YO ASS BEATING ME IS JUST SOME DAMN LIE

vinman 05-05-04 09:00 PM

damn i didnt mean to put it there twice

vinman 05-05-04 09:04 PM

uppin fo votes

vinman 05-05-04 09:10 PM

Uppin For Votes

Lyrical Demon 04 05-05-04 09:15 PM

aiight nigga bout time..........................................

Lyrical Demon 04 05-05-04 09:16 PM

com on vote dammit

$Rich.P$ 05-05-04 09:27 PM

yo ima have to give it to demon.
he had better punches........
better flow.......................
his verse was just plain better...........

vinman u were alright.........
keep it up and you'll be real fukin good........

vinman 05-05-04 10:08 PM

uppin fo some real votes damn com on have his shit didnt rhyme expecially the opener

Unknown Assassin 05-05-04 10:18 PM

vinman wooped his damm ass withe his punches and wordplay he still needs to work on your structure but you wooped his ass demon you need to come up big time against him and other emcees

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

vinman 05-05-04 10:20 PM

uppin for some damn votes

vinman 05-05-04 10:33 PM

uppin for votes

vinman 05-05-04 10:38 PM

i got one vote need 4 mo to win lets go pls uppin for votes

FlowIntelligent. 05-05-04 10:39 PM

weak battle.... lyrical took this one...you could actually read his verse...vinman your flow and structure were so off it was pitifull...lyrical u had some good punches nothing too great but still good...vinman you had a couple of punches but once again nothing that was interesting...lyrical your structure was good and wordplay vinman your structure was bad but it still flowed kinda...vote: lyrical 04...he had the better verse and better punches and his flow and structure was good

~!1!~

vinman 05-05-04 10:49 PM

uppin for some votes even though i know im about to lose

vinman 05-05-04 10:51 PM

how flow when his shit bunched up and mine was spread out wateveer

Lyrical Demon 04 05-05-04 10:51 PM

uppin 4 votes

Lyrical Demon 04 05-05-04 10:57 PM

uppin 4 votes

Lyrical Demon 04 05-05-04 11:13 PM

upppppppppppppppin 4 votes

vinman 05-06-04 07:43 AM

uppin for votes

Lyrical Demon 04 05-06-04 08:55 PM

puuin 4 votes

Lyrical Demon 04 05-06-04 09:23 PM

Uppin For Votes

FLooZe 05-06-04 09:58 PM

vinman,i got to give dis battle to you cause lyricals opener didnt rhyme,and his sturucture was soso.he had OK wordplay,but you were better.vinman,i think you should find different rhyming words,not just seen and seen.i think you should also bring your lines closer together,not so far apart.lyrical demon,that was a very weak battle.try to elevate.
vote:vinman

Lyrical Demon 04 05-06-04 10:17 PM

tell me what dosent rhymes between rebound and clown

ddumbasss

vinman 05-06-04 10:28 PM

uppin for some votes

vinman 05-07-04 04:53 PM

uppin for votes

vinman 05-07-04 06:52 PM

uppin for votes

Raphael 05-07-04 06:58 PM

aight check it
first off this was a weak battle...im serious...no personals, well if you count fake ones...no punches man i dont even know if i should vote on this shit.......but anyways

LD
flow:
wordplay:
Punches:

actually you know what im not gonna do one of those long ones coz yall dont desearve it...ha...well my vote is going to lyrical demon by one point...coz he was more consistant with HIS fake personals...

and if you didnt like the way i voted then see me about it then ill show you how a "divine emcee" battles

v/lyrical demon

hint to both.....ELEVATE and go take some rap classes or someting haha

vinman 05-07-04 07:01 PM

Watever Uppin For Votes

Lyrical Demon 04 05-07-04 07:36 PM

uppin 4 votes

Lyrical Demon 04 05-08-04 12:00 AM

uppin for votes

vinman 05-08-04 12:31 AM

uppin for votes

Lyrical Demon 04 05-08-04 06:36 PM

upin 4 votes

vinman 05-08-04 07:46 PM

uppin for votes

vinman 05-08-04 07:53 PM

uppin for votes for votes


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