Lyrical Demon 04 vs. Spiky2k8
 

rules are
no crew vote
no d/r
no hater vote

5 to 10 max
u spit first

a guy yo rap need tobe due by time Thurday
aight ok i will be waiting for u to spit aight man
peace

how you battle him but to scared to go against me

here i am battlin spikey 2k8
these rhymes will break you down smash you in a crate
this shit is just that great
hes gay but hey im straight
yo ass slow but me im quick
you say none in yo battles but you always riding dicks
your future was bright but now its looking grim
your moms the best hoe, even better than lil kim
spikey yo ass garbage my lil cousin better than you
you dont need to be rappin,let alone rap in a crew
im through wit yo ass its time for ya turn
imma be like usher on this shit and let it burn

check in

nigga my momma sick so go suck on a dick u
stupid bitch/
i know my rap sick caus u wouldn't even be tryn
to spit prick/
my raps is so serious it will make yo fagot ass so
delirious/
it's like your a cold and i'm tha potion to wipe yo
ass wipe out so what u about/
yo name make no sense caus yo ass penniless u
cant even eat at denny's nless u is a fuckn sucess
stupis pest/
you talkn about my momma but yo momma is OSAMA/
so leave my momma out of this caus i'll piss on u
like a dog and tie yo ass to a log/
i'm fin to beat yo ass and make u look like a fuckm
frog/
see all u is, is a waste time and space so leave b4 i
spray yo ass wit some mass/

LMFAO @ this battle. You guys are seriously the worst thing I have ever read, like 2 retarded one armed migets (no offense to migets) just hitting their keyboard and this shit comes out. Wow. spikey wins because at least he had a multi in there, even though he got major points off for saying the other guy's momma was Osama. Please both of you get off the fucking site. spikey, also please fucking rhyme. other guy, please dont post again until you are no longer 5 years old

Spiky - Alright spit man, you had some multi's in there with some good punches.

Best Line - like a dog and tie yo ass to a log/
i'm fin to beat yo ass and make u look like a fuckm
frog/ (only one that rymed)

Worst Line - see all u is, is a waste time and space so leave b4 i
spray yo ass wit some mass (WTF)

Lyrical - Alright spit man. .you need to work on alot of stuff you should go read the tutorials man.. and work on some shit

Best Line - NONE

Worst Line - EVERYTHING.. no hate man

OVERALL - Weak ass battle but I got to pick someone so I will have to give this battle to Spiky.. He had some multi's in there and had a couple good punches.. both of you need to work on your flow.. and the other guy needs to work on forming a good solid punch.

VOTE - Spiky

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wtf wll whatever uppin 4 votes............................

i spit like that because spikey sucks but i guess i should have spit seriously cause so far hes winning

come on man i know demons shit wasent that good but come on at least his shit rhymed he really needs to work on his punches and multies.

spikey yo shit made no since to me at all you said his mom is osama thats lame as hell
ma vote goes to demon

upppppppin 4 votes

Honestly Whack Battle Yo But Ill Vote
Spikys Verse..

nigga my momma sick so go suck on a dick u
stupid bitch/
YO Mama Is Sick ??? WDF yo .....2\10
i know my rap sick caus u wouldn't even be tryn
to spit prick/
Nice Multis Whack Personal\Punch ?1\10
my raps is so serious it will make yo fagot ass so
delirious/
Gettin Better 4\10
it's like your a cold and i'm tha potion to wipe yo
ass wipe out so what u about/Didnt Make Sence And Didnt Rhyme 0\10
yo name make no sense caus yo ass penniless u
cant even eat at denny's nless u is a fuckn sucess
stupis pest/Not Even Gonna Comment 0\10
you talkn about my momma but yo momma is OSAMA/
OMFGosh U PLayin 1\10
so leave my momma out of this caus i'll piss on u
like a dog and tie yo ass to a log/
Nice.....
i'm fin to beat yo ass and make u look like a fuckm
frog/Nice Multis 3\10
see all u is, is a waste time and space so leave b4 i
spray yo ass wit some mass/WHAT.....1\10


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Lyrikal Demon Verse

here i am battlin spikey 2k8
these rhymes will break you down smash you in a crate
u cant smash some1 on a crate but with one lol 3\10
this shit is just that great
hes gay but hey im straight
Unoriginal 2\10
yo ass slow but me im quick
you say none in yo battles but you always riding dicks
Best Line 6\10
your future was bright but now its looking grim
your moms the best hoe, even better than lil kim
Nice Yo 4\10
spikey yo ass garbage my lil cousin better than you
you dont need to be rappin,let alone rap in a crew
WHOOO 5\10
im through wit yo ass its time for ya turn
imma be like usher on this shit and let it burn
Whack 2\10

Vote Lyrical Demon

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Holy Shit...damn This Is The Battle Of All Newbs....im'a Vote Honestly

Spiky Took This..cause The Osma Line Was So Stupid It Made Me Laugh...u Both Need To Elevate..check Out Tutorials If U Have To...u Need To Stop With The Kiddy Rhymes...so Battling Each Other Like Kids...thats What It Sounded Like..2 Lil Kids Fighting For Ice Cream....spiky Won Cause He Had Better Flow And Structure..and His Punches Were Okay...spikey Learn Not To Feed Off Other Battlers...cause U Feed Off The Otha Kats Lines...

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uppin 4 votes

uppin dis shit n

damn......whack battles are always hard to judge......im gonna have to give this one to spikey......he tried to make some good punches......both of u need to stop tryin to rhyme so much and work on your punches.....and spikey shorten up your lines........u both need the whackness emergancy center.......

v/spikey

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ok, lyrikal, self glorification lines don't get ya anywhere on this site, ya gotta do punches, should read the forums, best bar
spikey yo ass garbage my lil cousin better than you
you dont need to be rappin,let alone rap in a crew
just come with more shit like that but better

spiky- ok, a breakdown... did any of your lines make sence? they were meaningless punches, nothing but some words that rhymed and gibberish in between them.
nigga my momma sick so go suck on a dick u
stupid bitch/
nope, nada, u can rhyme sick, dick, and bitch, great.
i know my rap sick caus u wouldn't even be tryn
to spit prick/
third line rhymin, nah never do that
my raps is so serious it will make yo fagot ass so
delirious/
that....... ok ya just kinda left that one out there
it's like your a cold and i'm tha potion to wipe yo
ass wipe out so what u about
woah... can you even remember what you were tryin to do with that?
yo name make no sense caus yo ass penniless u
cant even eat at denny's nless u is a fuckn sucess
stupis pest/
Ok, i get it, his names stupid so obviously he is poor and can't eat at denny because he isn't successful... and hes annoying, if it is even possible to put all that shit together it'd take more than two lines
you talkn about my momma but yo momma is OSAMA/
nah, not doin it,
so leave my momma out of this caus i'll piss on u
like a dog and tie yo ass to a log/
nope...
i'm fin to beat yo ass and make u look like a fuckm
frog/nada
see all u is, is a waste time and space so leave b4 i
spray yo ass wit some mass/mace i think? right
anyway u didn't rhyme half of it and none of it made sense

vote- lyrical

and a classic line
"you talkn about my momma but yo momma is OSAMA"

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spiky won this cause he had better punchs then lyrical demon u made kno sence nigga

Break down

Spiky
Flow 5/10
Rhymes 6/10
structure 3/10
punches 5/10
19/40

Lyrical Demon
Flow4/10
Rhymes 3/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 4/10
16/40